LLL Week 9 CHAMP MATCH: Enbombz vs Smog [Smog wins]

[KnowP]

DUE DATE
Due Dates is FRIDAY MIDNIGHT P.S.T.
Voting Due SUNDAY MIDNIGHT P.S.T.



No Show
If you no show you will have to battle twice in FL to get back into the league.


Additional Stipulations





- Voting -
Each week, each competitor will be required to vote on at least 3 Battles.
Championship & Contenders Matches are required to be voted on by everyone.
Failure to comply, will result in vote deductions (1 link = 1 deducted vote).


- Extension Request -
All Extension Request must be submitted no later than 24 hours before deadline.
If your opponent has already dropped their verse, they can either accept or deny your request.
If your opponent has not dropped their verse, both will be granted extension IF your opponent agrees.

LAST MINUTE EXTENSIONS
We are willing to make exceptions on some occasions but no matter the exception it will always be up to your opponent.



- Pic Battle Option -
If you want to do a pic battle, you and your opponent must agree in the check-ins

@Enbombz @Smog

[Smog]

Let's go the min of 16.. Gl

[Enbombz]

I don't think there is a 16 min just a 20 max if you drop 16 I'll have to match it. Got a hella busy week though.

[Smog]

Word 12-14 cool? U might even drop befo me.. I might need the ext.

[Enbombz]

Gonna need an extension until sat, Sunday even better.

[Smog]

@Enbombz I went 16.. Lemme know when u ready

[Smog]

Look dawg,

I've lost 5 straight champ matches, but when I got merked leagues was better
Oh n befo I forget congrats on gainin the title... "Champion of the worst season EVER"
It's so pathetic, I lost a contenders signed out n came back in a contenders match
S'why violently beating u'll be unforgettable, at the same time no1'll remember that
Shit is a joke, id get no rep champin by killin this foe
So for props I'll win, then hold the belt till I could body some1 at LEAST a little bit dope
My FL run went thru LLL champs, Idk how else to say it bro
But if Bet, Knowp, JB n fresh is a lethal path..no wonder RB's headed down a fatal road..
I dropped weak n lost to fresh, even u admitted it so don't reach duke
Cuz if u got beatin fresh on ur head.. Here's a reminder... a FEW weeks ago I beat U
Faggot ur wifey likes Me, so I'll slide this broad my schlong
Yeah I'm a trucker n my life is a highway... that's why she wanna ride it alllll night long
Plus she wants u dead, so when u say shit like fuck the pen lets go toe to toe
I tell her for some head i'll rig ur car,bomb... that's how I exchange blow fa blow
Bitch I'm currently on RB's top 2, I've put an end ta headz, fool
While ur champ n ain't cracked the top 25.. That's cuz it goes by strength of schedule

[Enbombz]

You got here from a no show, but with ur skills what you gonna do
I drop 5 star lines, u dropped 12 that weren't even worth responding too,
I've mastered life, you just live like a slave
I'm on the road to success, ur on road seven days a week for minimum wage
Being a family guy he actually cries, for him being a dad hurts,
Now dudes just a sauerkraut..can't stand his wife but hates his bratwurst
Your too white to wear that n serves no function there's no debating
Shit..This pic alone could set Jesse Williams off on cultural appropriation
Every time we see you hit, followed by a treble that miss,
Same ol story, Fresh showed you don't know theres levels to this
You claim that thug life, but Its not true, its bull
Try talk that mindless violence, I'll put a shot through ya skull
Barc n Kenny bullied you, Fresh bodied n slit ya throat,
You've overcame So many bitter pills you give Bill Cosby's victims hope
Dog try talk shit, you won't be able to eat the next minute
We'll hear the sound of canines flying out ya mouth, that's a Dmx gimmick

[Wuxia]

I've lost 5 straight champ matches, but when I got merked leagues was better
Oh n befo I forget congrats on gainin the title... "Champion of the worst season EVER"
It's so pathetic, I lost a contenders signed out n came back in a contenders match
S'why violently beating u'll be unforgettable, at the same time no1'll remember that
Shit is a joke, id get no rep champin by killin this foe
So for props I'll win, then hold the belt till I could body some1 at LEAST a little bit dope
My FL run went thru LLL champs, Idk how else to say it bro
But if Bet, Knowp, JB n fresh is a lethal path..no wonder RB's headed down a fatal road..
I dropped weak n lost to fresh, even u admitted it so don't reach duke
Cuz if u got beatin fresh on ur head.. Here's a reminder... a FEW weeks ago I beat U

You got here from a no show, but with ur skills what you gonna do
I drop 5 star lines, u dropped 12 that weren't even worth responding too,
Barc n Kenny bullied you, Fresh bodied n slit ya throat,
You've overcame So many bitter pills you give Bill Cosby's victims hope

Smog delivered big here. His verse had plenty of violent personals that landed repeatedly. It was the best verse I've read this week. My only critique is the filler he used in his last couple of bars. He really didn't need to change the subject and I would have preferred he continue laying into Enbombz with the same material he used throughout. Enbombz had a couple of standout bars and they were quoted because of his personal approach, although I felt that some of his personals (those that went unquoted) could have been tweaked for the sake of originality.

MVGT - Smog

[War Shack]

Smogs verse is more like a convo. It delivered in spots though. Liked the first two bars n car bomb. The rest was so so but those were the heaviest. Enbombz could have came better. Dmx n minimum wage were ok. Wanted to quote the levels line but Smog dropped a bar that linda ruined it for you. Im taking Smog with the stronger verse overall

Vote Smog

[A. Diction]

don't freepost again

[Mac]

ill break down since its champ match

I've lost 5 straight champ matches, but when I got merked leagues was better
Oh n befo I forget congrats on gainin the title... "Champion of the worst season EVER"
okish good start
It's so pathetic, I lost a contenders signed out n came back in a contenders match
S'why violently beating u'll be unforgettable, at the same time no1'll remember that
statementish but it's there
Shit is a joke, id get no rep champin by killin this foe
So for props I'll win, then hold the belt till I could body some1 at LEAST a little bit dope
decent
My FL run went thru LLL champs, Idk how else to say it bro
But if Bet, Knowp, JB n fresh is a lethal path..no wonder RB's headed down a fatal road..
ok coulda have been better if you directed it more towards bombs
I dropped weak n lost to fresh, even u admitted it so don't reach duke
Cuz if u got beatin fresh on ur head.. Here's a reminder... a FEW weeks ago I beat U
lol
Faggot ur wifey likes Me, so I'll slide this broad my schlong
Yeah I'm a trucker n my life is a highway... that's why she wanna ride it alllll night long
nice lol
Plus she wants u dead, so when u say shit like fuck the pen lets go toe to toe
I tell her for some head i'll rig ur car,bomb... that's how I exchange blow fa blow
meh
Bitch I'm currently on RB's top 2, I've put an end ta headz, fool
While ur champ n ain't cracked the top 25.. That's cuz it goes by strength of schedule
mm

vs.


You got here from a no show, but with ur skills what you gonna do
I drop 5 star lines, u dropped 12 that weren't even worth responding too,
ok
I've mastered life, you just live like a slave
I'm on the road to success, ur on road seven days a week for minimum wage
decent
Being a family guy he actually cries, for him being a dad hurts,
Now dudes just a sauerkraut..can't stand his wife but hates his bratwurst
mmm
Your too white to wear that n serves no function there's no debating
Shit..This pic alone could set Jesse Williams off on cultural appropriation
ok
Every time we see you hit, followed by a treble that miss,
Same ol story, Fresh showed you don't know theres levels to this
meh
You claim that thug life, but Its not true, its bull
Try talk that mindless violence, I'll put a shot through ya skull
filler
Barc n Kenny bullied you, Fresh bodied n slit ya throat,
You've overcame So many bitter pills you give Bill Cosby's victims hope
hehe decentish
Dog try talk shit, you won't be able to eat the next minute
We'll hear the sound of canines flying out ya mouth, that's a Dmx gimmick
ok nice concept is there

leaving a side the fact smog's verse was pretty much directed towards LLL sucking and that whole deal i felt he managed to relate it with enbombz smhow and attack him with that, the whole verse was a good read and hilarious, even though some stuff landed statementish. regarding enbombz i think he keyed the verse or smth considering he had some filler here and there, he had some ok stuff but i think it was overriden with smog's more personal and humourous approach towards him.

v/smog

[KnowP]

Plus she wants u dead, so when u say shit like fuck the pen lets go toe to toe
I tell her for some head i'll rig ur car,bomb... that's how I exchange blow fa blow

My FL run went thru LLL champs, Idk how else to say it bro
But if Bet, Knowp, JB n fresh is a lethal path..no wonder RB's headed down a fatal road..



vs




You got here from a no show, but with ur skills what you gonna do
I drop 5 star lines, u dropped 12 that weren't even worth responding too,
Barc n Kenny bullied you, Fresh bodied n slit ya throat,
You've overcame So many bitter pills you give Bill Cosby's victims hope
Dog try talk shit, you won't be able to eat the next minute
We'll hear the sound of canines flying out ya mouth, that's a Dmx gimmick




didn't feel this champ match that much. not many flame bars. more misses than not. smog had the better personals and concepts but felt could of executed his bars better. enbombz had an aight verse nothin that was flames. liked the opener tho. good flip. close could go either way.


v. bomb

[Stat.]

Smog
I've lost 5 straight champ matches, but when I got merked leagues was better
Oh n befo I forget congrats on gainin the title... "Champion of the worst season EVER"
Shit is a joke, id get no rep champin by killin this foe
So for props I'll win, then hold the belt till I could body some1 at LEAST a little bit dope
My FL run went thru LLL champs, Idk how else to say it bro
But if Bet, Knowp, JB n fresh is a lethal path..no wonder RB's headed down a fatal road..
Faggot ur wifey likes Me, so I'll slide this broad my schlong
Yeah I'm a trucker n my life is a highway... that's why she wanna ride it alllll night long
Plus she wants u dead, so when u say shit like fuck the pen lets go toe to toe
I tell her for some head i'll rig ur car,bomb... that's how I exchange blow fa blow

vs

Enbombz
I've mastered life, you just live like a slave
I'm on the road to success, ur on road seven days a week for minimum wage
Being a family guy he actually cries, for him being a dad hurts,
Now dudes just a sauerkraut..can't stand his wife but hates his bratwurst
Barc n Kenny bullied you, Fresh bodied n slit ya throat,
You've overcame So many bitter pills you give Bill Cosby's victims hope (LOTB)
Dog try talk shit, you won't be able to eat the next minute
We'll hear the sound of canines flying out ya mouth, that's a Dmx gimmick

Embombz had the best bar of the battle with that Bill Cosby line but Smog was more consistent.

Vote Smog

[Ctrl Alt Elite]

I've lost 5 straight champ matches, but when I got merked leagues was better
Oh n befo I forget congrats on gainin the title... "Champion of the worst season EVER"
So true. Still, it's a LLL medal and in a few months nobody will know
It's so pathetic, I lost a contenders signed out n came back in a contenders match
S'why violently beating u'll be unforgettable, at the same time no1'll remember that
k
Shit is a joke, id get no rep champin by killin this foe
So for props I'll win, then hold the belt till I could body some1 at LEAST a little bit dope
Statementish, but ok
My FL run went thru LLL champs, Idk how else to say it bro
But if Bet, Knowp, JB n fresh is a lethal path..no wonder RB's headed down a fatal road..
Not bad
I dropped weak n lost to fresh, even u admitted it so don't reach duke
Cuz if u got beatin fresh on ur head.. Here's a reminder... a FEW weeks ago I beat U
ok
Faggot ur wifey likes Me, so I'll slide this broad my schlong
Yeah I'm a trucker n my life is a highway... that's why she wanna ride it alllll night long
Played
Plus she wants u dead, so when u say shit like fuck the pen lets go toe to toe
I tell her for some head i'll rig ur car,bomb... that's how I exchange blow fa blow
Kinda predictable, but it works
Bitch I'm currently on RB's top 2, I've put an end ta headz, fool
While ur champ n ain't cracked the top 25.. That's cuz it goes by strength of schedule
k

Vs

You got here from a no show, but with ur skills what you gonna do
I drop 5 star lines, u dropped 12 that weren't even worth responding too,
k
I've mastered life, you just live like a slave
I'm on the road to success, ur on road seven days a week for minimum wage
aight
Being a family guy he actually cries, for him being a dad hurts,
Now dudes just a sauerkraut..can't stand his wife but hates his bratwurst
You like your german wordplay huh? 2 weeks in a row lol. This was ok
Your too white to wear that n serves no function there's no debating
Shit..This pic alone could set Jesse Williams off on cultural appropriation
meh
Every time we see you hit, followed by a treble that miss,
Same ol story, Fresh showed you don't know theres levels to this
k
You claim that thug life, but Its not true, its bull
Try talk that mindless violence, I'll put a shot through ya skull
Very played concept
Barc n Kenny bullied you, Fresh bodied n slit ya throat,
You've overcame So many bitter pills you give Bill Cosby's victims hope
cool line
Dog try talk shit, you won't be able to eat the next minute
We'll hear the sound of canines flying out ya mouth, that's a Dmx gimmick
k

Thought this was a pretty weak battle for a champ match... Smog was very statementish but they were mostly personals so they worked. Bombz was more creative but with a lot more misses. Cosby line was decent, the rest felt like it missed for the most part. I'm not a fan of Smog's style - I prefer humor, but at the end of the day he had more connections so I gotta vote Smog. Felt Embombz was a bit rushed this week. Dude asked for a big extension and couldn't get it - perhaps why the drop was weaker than what i've read from him before.

v/smog