Contender Match LLL Week 6: Smog vs Fresh (Fresh wins)

[Fresh]

DUE DATE
Due Dates is FRIDAY MIDNIGHT P.S.T.



No Show
If you no show you will have to battle twice in FL to get back into the league.


Additional Stipulations





- Voting -
Each week, each competitor will be required to vote on at least 3 Battles.
Championship & Contenders Matches are required to be voted on by everyone.
Failure to comply, will result in vote deductions (1 link = 1 deducted vote).


- Extension Request -
All Extension Request must be submitted no later than 24 hours before deadline.
If your opponent has already dropped their verse, they can either accept or deny your request.
If your opponent has not dropped their verse, both will be granted extension IF your opponent agrees.

LAST MINUTE EXTENSIONS
We are willing to make exceptions on some occasions but no matter the exception it will always be up to your opponent.



- Pic Battle Option -
If you want to do a pic battle, you and your opponent must agree in the check-ins

@Smog

[Smog]

It's gon be difficult for me to get some lines in man this week started late.. Mon tues best days but I'll see if I could put somethin together on Friday..

[Fresh]

It's gon be difficult for me to get some lines in man this week started late.. Mon tues best days but I'll see if I could put somethin together on Friday..

If u need ext no worries

[Smog]

Lets go 14,I'll gave close to an hour to write in a few hours.. Lol

[Fresh]

w/ women I'm revered... a stallion, boss shit
u hear otherwise than ur Sis Silly n' it's cuz that bitch loves my italian sausage
n the same could be said for ya wifey, we just haven't acted it out
I'll stare deep into her Whore Eyes n' if u've got an issue u'll get laid flat the fuck out
ya wife a slut, she charge a fee? Lines have be drawn at LEAST
Cause I swear to god her pussy has lips concealing 2 rows of teeth
ur a hillbilly trucker n mortally queer.. this faggot's a flamer
dawg ur a Far Cry from the majority here n' no one mistakes u for a gamer
u a healthy eater but u wanna share w/ us ur secrets n ur passions
l'll make a long story short, aka leavin plenty holes leakin out the bastard
ur lifes pointless like astrological signs, I'll smash his stupid n puny face
and it's funny urinaries, you'll always be remembered as a conduit for human waste
a disgrace as a family man.. stop having children n put on the break light
no one respects u, ya wife Orchids.. so don't expect any gettin dropped at ur grave site
if it's hands we throwin? believe these mitts ranked a superior rating
I'll give smog warnings but his health the only one in danger of deteriorating
@Smog

[Smog]

Fresh aka habitat, listen fool


This geeks a joke, these straight facts'll lead to quotes
8-5 in ur last 13.. But wanderer Boston n smirks the only 3 u beat wit votes
Ur whole careers bashin newbs n shit, u should maybe quit
Cuz that FL title win vs illunatic? don't mean ur crazy sick
that ^ bodies lame bud so it's awfully plain scrub
to be a contender, u just need a higher no show rate than a sloppy framed slut
Man U couldnt last a day where I'm from, this entire cities a fuckin rough hood, G
N the way u n bar cry, plus alphabet bites shows Canadians breed nuttin but pussys
Couple lines into ur verse n I'm ready to nap, ur shit is a mess par
Cuz every rap u start fresh, immediately requires a fresh start
U disrespect hip hop wit the trash u rap, n think it's funny to be a faggot cat
But listen habits not a fuckin joke to us that ur addicted to rappin Wack
N ur 1 spar on NC I peeped was all gun barz,
Daaawg u speak it wrong
Im sayin, the way u displayed that piece talk, I Could tell IRL ud rather keep shit calm
Over a decade of nothin, most of ur days boarding n thats including the lime
All those hours around alotta barz n still got us all like WTF u do wit ur time

[KnowP]

w/ women I'm revered... a stallion, boss shit
u hear otherwise than ur Sis Silly n' it's cuz that bitch loves my italian sausage
ur a hillbilly trucker n mortally queer.. this faggot's a flamer
dawg ur a Far Cry from the majority here n' no one mistakes u for a gamer
ur lifes pointless like astrological signs, I'll smash his stupid n puny face
and it's funny urinaries, you'll always be remembered as a conduit for human waste
a disgrace as a family man.. stop having children n put on the break light
no one respects u, ya wife Orchids.. so don't expect any gettin dropped at ur grave site



vs




Man U couldnt last a day where I'm from, this entire cities a fuckin rough hood, G
N the way u n bar cry, plus alphabet bites shows Canadians breed nuttin but pussys
Couple lines into ur verse n I'm ready to nap, ur shit is a mess par
Cuz every rap u start fresh, immediately requires a fresh start




smog had some bars that were nice but didn't land as affectively as they could have. felt a few were a tad off and could of been haymakers to make this seem closer. Fresh had a pretty solid verse with less misses. some concepts that ive seen before but landed pretty coo imo. not a bad battle though.


v. fresh

[slecht]

w/ women I'm revered... a stallion, boss shit
u hear otherwise than ur Sis Silly n' it's cuz that bitch loves my italian sausage
okay lol funny,but very wordy. the wording hurt the impact....
n the same could be said for ya wifey, we just haven't acted it out
I'll stare deep into her Whore Eyes n' if u've got an issue u'll get laid flat the fuck out
two back to wordplays where you use the n , eh its okay, but not good enough...but wasnt feeling this one here honestly
ya wife a slut, she charge a fee? Lines have be drawn at LEAST
Cause I swear to god her pussy has lips concealing 2 rows of teeth
lol not bad....
ur a hillbilly trucker n mortally queer.. this faggot's a flamer
dawg ur a Far Cry from the majority here n' no one mistakes u for a gamer
okay
u a healthy eater but u wanna share w/ us ur secrets n ur passions
l'll make a long story short, aka leavin plenty holes leakin out the bastard
nah dont like this here.
ur lifes pointless like astrological signs, I'll smash his stupid n puny face
and it's funny urinaries, you'll always be remembered as a conduit for human waste
ight decent hit here..
a disgrace as a family man.. stop having children n put on the break light
no one respects u, ya wife Orchids.. so don't expect any gettin dropped at ur grave site
haha okay i like this
if it's hands we throwin? believe these mitts ranked a superior rating
I'll give smog warnings but his health the only one in danger of deteriorating @Smog
ight i fuck with this closer

vs

This geeks a joke, these straight facts'll lead to quotes
8-5 in ur last 13.. But wanderer Boston n smirks the only 3 u beat wit votes
nice personal
Ur whole careers bashin newbs n shit, u should maybe quit
Cuz that FL title win vs illunatic? don't mean ur crazy sick
ight nice tie in, here .
that ^ bodies lame bud so it's awfully plain scrub
to be a contender, u just need a higher no show rate than a sloppy framed slut
nah dont like this....
Man U couldnt last a day where I'm from, this entire cities a fuckin rough hood, G
N the way u n bar cry, plus alphabet bites shows Canadians breed nuttin but pussys
set up was not good here, and very wordy at the end. didn tlike this
Couple lines into ur verse n I'm ready to nap, ur shit is a mess par
Cuz every rap u start fresh, immediately requires a fresh start
decent flip here
U disrespect hip hop wit the trash u rap, n think it's funny to be a faggot cat
But listen habits not a fuckin joke to us that ur addicted to rappin Wack
nah nah, miss here...
N ur 1 spar on NC I peeped was all gun barz,
Daaawg u speak it wrong
Im sayin, the way u displayed that piece talk, I Could tell IRL ud rather keep shit calm
meh , okay.
Over a decade of nothin, most of ur days boarding n thats including the lime
All those hours around alotta barz n still got us all like WTF u do wit ur time
nah, didnt like this

damn very close battle here, smog had the fresh start and the first two but i think fresh was a little was more consistent over all,
giving him the w here.

[Joe Boston]

Fresh

w/ women I'm revered... a stallion, boss shit
u hear otherwise than ur Sis Silly n' it's cuz that bitch loves my italian sausage
Lol good wordplay couldve polished up the finishing bar little lengthy on wording

n the same could be said for ya wifey, we just haven't acted it out
I'll stare deep into her Whore Eyes n' if u've got an issue u'll get laid flat the fuck out
Again good wordplay lengthy finish

ya wife a slut, she charge a fee? Lines have be drawn at LEAST
Cause I swear to god her pussy has lips concealing 2 rows of teeth
Lmao

ur a hillbilly trucker n mortally queer.. this faggot's a flamer
dawg ur a Far Cry from the majority here n' no one mistakes u for a gamer
Nah

u a healthy eater but u wanna share w/ us ur secrets n ur passions
l'll make a long story short, aka leavin plenty holes leakin out the bastard
Direct i didnt like the concept tho

ur lifes pointless like astrological signs, I'll smash his stupid n puny face
and it's funny urinaries, you'll always be remembered as a conduit for human waste
Lol cool wordplay

a disgrace as a family man.. stop having children n put on the break light
no one respects u, ya wife Orchids.. so don't expect any gettin dropped at ur grave site
Dope wp flip direct punch

if it's hands we throwin? believe these mitts ranked a superior rating
I'll give smog warnings but his health the only one in danger of deteriorating
Nah

Smog


This geeks a joke, these straight facts'll lead to quotes 
8-5 in ur last 13.. But wanderer Boston n smirks the only 3 u beat wit votes
Ok personal

Ur whole careers bashin newbs n shit, u should maybe quit
Cuz that FL title win vs illunatic? don't mean ur crazy sick 
Old af concept wordplay nah lol

that ^ bodies lame bud so it's awfully plain scrub
to be a contender, u just need a higher no show rate than a sloppy framed slut 
Nah

Man U couldnt last a day where I'm from, this entire cities a fuckin rough hood, G
N the way u n bar cry, plus alphabet bites shows Canadians breed nuttin but pussys
Wordy af but the personal wasnt bad the display of the finish fucked it up tho

Couple lines into ur verse n I'm ready to nap, ur shit is a mess par
Cuz every rap u start fresh, immediately requires a fresh start
Played

U disrespect hip hop wit the trash u rap, n think it's funny to be a faggot cat 
But listen habits not a fuckin joke to us that ur addicted to rappin Wack
Nah

N ur 1 spar on NC I peeped was all gun barz, 
Daaawg u speak it wrong 
Im sayin, the way u displayed that piece talk, I Could tell IRL ud rather keep shit calm
Wordy

Over a decade of nothin, most of ur days boarding n thats including the lime
All those hours around alotta barz n still got us all like WTF u do wit ur time
Ok

Damn smog man little rusty very wordy also. Personals didnt have much impact. Opener was cool but not feeling much of everything else. Fresh outdid this with creativity nice wordplays.

V/Fresh

[Unfukwitable]

ur a hillbilly trucker n mortally queer.. this faggot's a flamer
dawg ur a Far Cry from the majority here n' no one mistakes u for a gamer
ur lifes pointless like astrological signs, I'll smash his stupid n puny face
and it's funny urinaries, you'll always be remembered as a conduit for human waste
a disgrace as a family man.. stop having children n put on the break light
no one respects u, ya wife Orchids.. so don't expect any gettin dropped at ur grave site


vs

This geeks a joke, these straight facts'll lead to quotes
8-5 in ur last 13.. But wanderer Boston n smirks the only 3 u beat wit votes


One came very normal he couldve turn his ideas dope if he used some creativity with it, the other had a good drop, I feel the Sis Silly'n was a REACHH & I recently used Horizon nameplay.. but either way he took this quite easy to me. v/Fresh