Just a little project im working on not complete yet some of the first verse. Im planning on writing it for a,friend who eventually wants to create a,video from it. I got a cool visual when writing it. Just want some feed tell me what yall think so far.
Spoonfed
At the end of the spoon he had a craving
Tasted like Mom n Dads whole life savings
Swallowed it now satisfied in his own Safehaven
Bloated off free rent, food and hot water to bathe in
Always reaching for a second helping no time to digest it
He wants another spoonful you damn right he gets it
Never an empty plate on the table that hes left with
Full menu of wants n needs wash it down with a refreshment
Another dollar for desert swallows greed with a breathmint
He'll break that spoon in half he dont respect shit
Causes streams full of tears then soaks it up with some Netflix
New galaxy phone glued to the hand he loves to text with
Ambition turning into a soggy bowl of Chex Mix
Crying over spilled milk is one of his best tricks
Can he walk the path of life in his Retro Kicks?
What if he gets em scuffed?
Then would he realize that enough is enough?
Little soap n water will get him back his strut
Humming his 3 favorite words Brand New Stuff
Hook idea:
Napkin and a placesetting ur tables now prepared
Can you see yourself clearly through that polished silverware
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