Felt chem burly was,forced for the np. Hang with a,strap concepts have been done i did like how chems was tied in along with flip
V/Chem
Felt chem burly was,forced for the np. Hang with a,strap concepts have been done i did like how chems was tied in along with flip
V/Chem
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damn I liked Notti's wordplay but his execution and punch line totally killed- didnt like the built like a bitch . chem came allright but his set up was a bit better and he tied it up pretty nicely.
fairs in for chemist on this one
Both were decent...I think that both read smooth, I like the name play here better a thought it was harsher could go either way.
Vote...Notti
@Aero @Bash @slecht @mic s @Allen Knight
Can you guys drop a vote please
Had to reread both. Liked Chems concept more but the punch didnt land. Nottis bar was okish. Never been a fan of "if you ever here em say" bars tbh. His execution was better though.
V/Notti
chem/kim i too much of a reach for me, chemist had an okay idea with choppy delivery.
vote chem just.
Nowadays an Ezekiel be enough to stake a kosher death
Left ghost instead, these Dudes don't even know their dead
Yoooooo I like Notti and Chemist as two up and coming dope writers.
Both decent bars here only difference I see is more succinct stronger wording with Notti. He had name play tied in with the concept whereas Chemist was a bit more vague with his tie in.
V - Notti
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both are nice with the pen, and will def be threats in the future but I wasn't feeling that Kim/chem wp! A bit forced in my tongue. Gotta give this to chemist with an over all better execution and less forced line
mgvt chemist
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