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    HMM FINALS: Superman Vs. Batman - Superman WINS & Champs HMM

    HMM FINALS


    Superman vs. Batman





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    Check in's due Friday Midnight P.S.T.
    Verses due Monday Midnight P.S.T.


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    How it Works:
    This is just like Round 1, where you use your opponents weaknesses and vulnerabilities to create concepts and punchlines to insult/diss them. Personal tie-ins are recommended as well.


    Good luck to both combatants, and congrats on making it this far. Y'all make it a dope finals bros.

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    Re: HMM FINALS: Superman Vs. Batman - READY FOR VERSES



    Congrat's to you both on making it to the 2015 HMM Finals!

    Writing out of the BLUE CORNER, we have Superman.
    &
    Writing out of the RED CORNER, we have Batman.

    Men, let's keep this a fair match, keep your pens up at all times! Let's keep it clean, touch note pads and obey my commands at all times!

    FIGHT!


    SUPERMAN'S VERSE:
    Dark Knight won't Rise after this - u ain't facin Bane here u bum
    make Bruce look like a bitch... call em Caitlyn Wayne when I'm done
    He just hides in the hills cuz no one likes him. I doubt u & Robin was chill...
    You been the most hated guy livin in a cave waaaay before Bin Laden was killed
    Couldn't save ur own parents, plus u feenin for some thot ur man loves
    If ur really a superhero... then ur the 'Lois form' that even I'M not a fan of
    I used my hands as weapons, 50 shots to his face in a span of seconds
    ...and they all 'markt Wayne without his mask on'. That's Samuel Clemens.
    yea u got money & gadgets, but I'm other-worldly... to me ur nothin soldier
    As far as natural ability u ain't got a Pennyworth. Fuck what ur butler told ya.
    & Thinkin you'd win here? Haaaaa! now that's mighty rich...
    u better toss that MaryJane off a bridge like Green Goblin did wit Spidey's bitch
    Batty Boys bettin he wins... hypin him up hopin he'll make it a fight
    Oh, your pockets on Bruce Bruce? Well u gettin ur money taken tonight
    & if u think he beat the Superman then ur what Arkham embodies...
    He's not the Riddler. There ain't a single question mark on this body.


    BATMAN'S VERSE:
    *Daily Planet is where Superman works as a journalist in Metropolis

    Bring that ass here, Clark Kent.


    Beat me?
    Even Lois Lane's always Held Hostage cause he ain't demanding w/ fists
    It's obvious I'll have this Kidnapped...I mean, he can't even handle his bitch
    You must be feeling blue cause w/ DC Comics it's ALWAYS me killing you
    Ya death's been Written In Stone & this Grave Sight's a hell of a chilling view
    I'll make Kryptonite knuckles & punch the fuck out you w/out caring to stop
    You'll start shaking;
    I'll treat you like a Recovering Crack Addict, how you're Scared Of The Rock
    Metropolis is weak,
    No real criminals; all ya citizens do is Watch You Fly, shit's absurd & it's lame
    While you show off, I'm tracking Drug Trades if I hear "It's a Bird, it's a Plane"
    Boooy you caught me in bed w/ Lois before. the bitch had to nickname me later
    You walked in,
    I leaped out the window w/ the sheets on my back: thus the Caped Crusader
    Gotta be sad knowing ya days are numbered. cause your villains have you in pain
    You gotta deal w/ an accurate Doomsday that'll put the Mayan Calendar to shame
    I'm a Tech Genius, so you won't stand the feel of what's in my hand, it's real
    Kryptonian bullets'll coat you head to toe in metal; you'll really be the Man of Steel

    ^I remember watching Darkseid break ya back... damnnnn, you BARELY landed
    Ya Vertebrae was one Shifting Column that'll get ya ass promoted in the Daily Planet
    Last edited by Ronin; December 17th, 2015 at 08:05 PM

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    Re: HMM FINALS: Superman Vs. Batman - EVERYONE VOTE NOW!!

    Bruce Played w/ a fresh twist - personal tie in.
    Bin Ladden was statement'ish - I mean other then saying he's a hated guy in a cave, I really didn't see to much of an insult there.
    Lois/Lowest was solid.
    Markt Wayne/Samuel Clemons - wasn't a fan of, really.
    Pennyworth/Butler thing was good.
    MaryJane was good.
    Bruce Bruce - wasn't feeling much.
    Riddler/questioned mark on his body was nice.

    vs

    Kidnapped was under worded - tie ins were all over the place w/ that one. Needed a cleaner more relevant execution.
    Same w/ Written in Stone IMO - Tie in a little better, but the execution took a turn for the worst.
    Recovering Crack Addict fell short, because the execution was bland.
    Tracking drug trades was a miss for me...
    Cape Crusader was an almost, felt you could have been a tad bit more creative, tho.
    Doomsday/Mayan concept is a pretty dated one. I think you could have been a tad bit more creative w/ that one too.
    Krypt Bullets was cool.
    Closer was definitely your best bar. Tie in was solid, wording a little rocky but decent enough and execution could have slightly been harsher but good none the less.

    Good battle & Pretty cool finals, fellas. Nice showing and glad you both showed. But as far as a winner, I got Superman here w/ a clear W. I just think his bars were more relevant too using his own and opponents character As were batman did but wasn't as witty/harsh w/ his concepts and executions. Good shit...

    Superman got it

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    Re: HMM FINALS: Superman Vs. Batman - READY FOR VERSES

    Quote Originally Posted by Amen View Post


    Congrat's to you both on making it to the 2015 HMM Finals!

    Writing out of the BLUE CORNER, we have Superman.
    &
    Writing out of the RED CORNER, we have Batman.

    Men, let's keep this a fair match, keep your pens up at all times! Let's keep it clean, touch note pads and obey my commands at all times!

    FIGHT!


    SUPERMAN'S VERSE:
    Dark Knight won't Rise after this - u ain't facin Bane here u bum
    make Bruce look like a bitch... call em Caitlyn Wayne when I'm done
    --ok
    He just hides in the hills cuz no one likes him. I doubt u & Robin was chill...
    You been the most hated guy livin in a cave waaaay before Bin Laden was killed
    --nice
    Couldn't save ur own parents, plus u feenin for some thot ur man loves
    If ur really a superhero... then ur the 'Lois form' that even I'M not a fan of
    --fire
    I used my hands as weapons, 50 shots to his face in a span of seconds
    ...and they all 'markt Wayne without his mask on'. That's Samuel Clemens.
    --ok
    yea u got money & gadgets, but I'm other-worldly... to me ur nothin soldier
    As far as natural ability u ain't got a Pennyworth. Fuck what ur butler told ya.
    --yeahhhhh son I dig this
    & Thinkin you'd win here? Haaaaa! now that's mighty rich...
    u better toss that MaryJane off a bridge like Green Goblin did wit Spidey's bitch
    --digging
    Batty Boys bettin he wins... hypin him up hopin he'll make it a fight
    Oh, your pockets on Bruce Bruce? Well u gettin ur money taken tonight
    --nah
    & if u think he beat the Superman then ur what Arkham embodies...
    He's not the Riddler. There ain't a single question mark on this body.
    --cool


    BATMAN'S VERSE:
    *Daily Planet is where Superman works as a journalist in Metropolis

    Bring that ass here, Clark Kent.


    Beat me?
    Even Lois Lane's always Held Hostage cause he ain't demanding w/ fists
    It's obvious I'll have this Kidnapped...I mean, he can't even handle his bitch
    --eh ok
    You must be feeling blue cause w/ DC Comics it's ALWAYS me killing you
    Ya death's been Written In Stone & this Grave Sight's a hell of a chilling view
    --cool concept not digging the execution/wording
    I'll make Kryptonite knuckles & punch the fuck out you w/out caring to stop
    You'll start shaking;
    I'll treat you like a Recovering Crack Addict, how you're Scared Of The Rock
    --ok
    Metropolis is weak,
    No real criminals; all ya citizens do is Watch You Fly, shit's absurd & it's lame
    While you show off, I'm tracking Drug Trades if I hear "It's a Bird, it's a Plane"
    --digggggin
    Boooy you caught me in bed w/ Lois before. the bitch had to nickname me later
    You walked in,
    I leaped out the window w/ the sheets on my back: thus the Caped Crusader
    --haha nice
    Gotta be sad knowing ya days are numbered. cause your villains have you in pain
    You gotta deal w/ an accurate Doomsday that'll put the Mayan Calendar to shame
    --nahhhhhh
    I'm a Tech Genius, so you won't stand the feel of what's in my hand, it's real
    Kryptonian bullets'll coat you head to toe in metal; you'll really be the Man of Steel
    --kind of obv flips too simple
    http://s256.photobucket.com/user/Dar...08_19.jpg.html
    ^I remember watching Darkseid break ya back... damnnnn, you BARELY landed
    Ya Vertebrae was one Shifting Column that'll get ya ass promoted in the Daily Planet
    --ok
    Cool read but supes kinda went in
    Batty had some shit but tooooo inconsistent for me

    Propsbros

    V/ that fucking faggot superman


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    SUPERMAN'S VERSE:
    Dark Knight won't Rise after this - u ain't facin Bane here u bum
    make Bruce look like a bitch... call em Caitlyn Wayne when I'm done
    ^^^ nice

    He just hides in the hills cuz no one likes him. I doubt u & Robin was chill...
    You been the most hated guy livin in a cave waaaay before Bin Laden was killed
    ^^^ lol nice

    Couldn't save ur own parents, plus u feenin for some thot ur man loves
    If ur really a superhero... then ur the 'Lois form' that even I'M not a fan of
    ^^^ nice

    I used my hands as weapons, 50 shots to his face in a span of seconds
    ...and they all 'markt Wayne without his mask on'. That's Samuel Clemens.
    ^^^ ok

    yea u got money & gadgets, but I'm other-worldly... to me ur nothin soldier
    As far as natural ability u ain't got a Pennyworth. Fuck what ur butler told ya.
    ^^^ nice lol

    & Thinkin you'd win here? Haaaaa! now that's mighty rich...
    u better toss that MaryJane off a bridge like Green Goblin did wit Spidey's bitch
    ^^^ ok

    Batty Boys bettin he wins... hypin him up hopin he'll make it a fight
    Oh, your pockets on Bruce Bruce? Well u gettin ur money taken tonight
    ^^^^ not feelin this so much

    & if u think he beat the Superman then ur what Arkham embodies...
    He's not the Riddler. There ain't a single question mark on this body.
    ^^^ nice

    Nice verse here, consistency on point decent concepts flipped well

    BATMAN'S VERSE:

    Beat me?
    Even Lois Lane's always Held Hostage cause he ain't demanding w/ fists
    It's obvious I'll have this Kidnapped...I mean, he can't even handle his bitch
    ^^^ nah weak concept bad wording

    You must be feeling blue cause w/ DC Comics it's ALWAYS me killing you
    Ya death's been Written In Stone & this Grave Sight's a hell of a chilling view
    ^^^ meh ok

    I'll make Kryptonite knuckles & punch the fuck out you w/out caring to stop
    You'll start shaking;
    I'll treat you like a Recovering Crack Addict, how you're Scared Of The Rock
    ^^^^ ok loose connection

    Metropolis is weak,
    No real criminals; all ya citizens do is Watch You Fly, shit's absurd & it's lame
    While you show off, I'm tracking Drug Trades if I hear "It's a Bird, it's a Plane"
    ^^^ way to wordy

    Boooy you caught me in bed w/ Lois before. the bitch had to nickname me later
    You walked in,
    I leaped out the window w/ the sheets on my back: thus the Caped Crusader
    ^^^ no

    Gotta be sad knowing ya days are numbered. cause your villains have you in pain
    You gotta deal w/ an accurate Doomsday that'll put the Mayan Calendar to shame
    ^^^^ eh

    I'm a Tech Genius, so you won't stand the feel of what's in my hand, it's real
    Kryptonian bullets'll coat you head to toe in metal; you'll really be the Man of Steel
    ^^^ no

    http://s256.photobucket.com/user/Dar...08_19.jpg.html
    ^I remember watching Darkseid break ya back... damnnnn, you BARELY landed
    Ya Vertebrae was one Shifting Column that'll get ya ass promoted in the Daily Planet
    ^^^ok

    Not a good verse here batman, really like, u shooting guns, wow. Well superman lived up to his name here and kicked the bat symbol of ya suit

    Vote superman

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    Re: HMM FINALS: Superman Vs. Batman - EVERYONE VOTE NOW!!

    Bin laden
    Lois
    Samuel clemens
    Closer

    Vs

    Opener
    Crack addict
    Its a bird
    Mayan
    Closer

    V/Batman. Battle was flames. I have bruce edging it by a bar. A tad bit more consistent. Good showing fellas
    I dont need no army mr. smart ass... My son Damon home right now...


    ..Savages

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    Re: HMM FINALS: Superman Vs. Batman - EVERYONE VOTE NOW!!

    Ayyyye...ones verse was just plain cleaner and easier to read...his concepts led to really dope punches and didnt feel forced....other had that fire too but readability was harder...concepts were jsut as dope but i did not feel his punches were as hard hitting...

    Dark Knight won't Rise after this - u ain't facin Bane here u bum
    make Bruce look like a bitch... call em Caitlyn Wayne when I'm done

    HAHAHA. Nice

    He just hides in the hills cuz no one likes him. I doubt u & Robin was chill...
    You been the most hated guy livin in a cave waaaay before Bin Laden was killed

    Okay. Set up was blah tho

    Couldn't save ur own parents, plus u feenin for some thot ur man loves
    If ur really a superhero... then ur the 'Lois form' that even I'M not a fan of

    dont like this


    I used my hands as weapons, 50 shots to his face in a span of seconds
    ...and they all 'markt Wayne without his mask on'. That's Samuel Clemens.

    ok, decent

    yea u got money & gadgets, but I'm other-worldly... to me ur nothin soldier
    As far as natural ability u ain't got a Pennyworth. Fuck what ur butler told ya.

    decent, ok

    & Thinkin you'd win here? Haaaaa! now that's mighty rich...
    u better toss that MaryJane off a bridge like Green Goblin did wit Spidey's bitch
    eh no.

    Batty Boys bettin he wins... hypin him up hopin he'll make it a fight
    Oh, your pockets on Bruce Bruce? Well u gettin ur money taken tonight
    ight this is cool

    & if u think he beat the Superman then ur what Arkham embodies...
    He's not the Riddler. There ain't a single question mark on this body.
    seen this concept before. ok flip


    BATMAN'S VERSE:
    *Daily Planet is where Superman works as a journalist in Metropolis

    Bring that ass here, Clark Kent.

    Beat me?
    Even Lois Lane's always Held Hostage cause he ain't demanding w/ fists
    It's obvious I'll have this Kidnapped...I mean, he can't even handle his bitch
    okay. i like!
    You must be feeling blue cause w/ DC Comics it's ALWAYS me killing you
    Ya death's been Written In Stone & this Grave Sight's a hell of a chilling view
    not bad.
    I'll make Kryptonite knuckles & punch the fuck out you w/out caring to stop
    You'll start shaking;
    I'll treat you like a Recovering Crack Addict, how you're Scared Of The Rock
    no

    Metropolis is weak,
    No real criminals; all ya citizens do is Watch You Fly, shit's absurd & it's lame
    While you show off, I'm tracking Drug Trades if I hear "It's a Bird, it's a Plane"
    nah

    Boooy you caught me in bed w/ Lois before. the bitch had to nickname me later
    You walked in,
    I leaped out the window w/ the sheets on my back: thus the Caped Crusader
    dont like this

    Gotta be sad knowing ya days are numbered. cause your villains have you in pain
    You gotta deal w/ an accurate Doomsday that'll put the Mayan Calendar to shame
    il like
    I'm a Tech Genius, so you won't stand the feel of what's in my hand, it's real
    Kryptonian bullets'll coat you head to toe in metal; you'll really be the Man of Steel
    eh okay, cool.

    ^I remember watching Darkseid break ya back... damnnnn, you BARELY landed
    Ya Vertebrae was one Shifting Column that'll get ya ass promoted in the Daily Planet
    LOTB lmfao.



    Ayyyye...batman verse was just plain cleaner and easier to read...his concepts led to really dope punches and didnt feel forced..other one ...c.k's concepts were jsut as dope but i did not feel his punches were as hard hitting...mvgt bruce

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    Superman:

    I used my hands as weapons, 50 shots to his face in a span of seconds
    Fuck what ur butler told ya.
    u better toss that MaryJane off a bridge like Green Goblin did wit Spidey's bitch
    Batty Boys bettin he wins... hypin him up hopin he'll make it a fight
    Oh, your pockets on Bruce Bruce? Well u gettin ur money taken tonight
    ^^^(although I would have prefered one 'Bruce' not two.)
    He's not the Riddler. There ain't a single question mark on this body.
    (nice ending but I think it could have been a bit stronger, only since it's the outro.)


    V



    Batman:

    It's obvious I'll have this Kidnapped...I mean, he can't even handle his bitch
    I leaped out the window w/ the sheets on my back: thus the Caped Crusader
    Kryptonian bullets'll coat you head to toe in metal; you'll really be the Man of Steel
    I remember watching Darkseid break ya back... damnnnn, you BARELY landed
    Ya Vertebrae was one Shifting Column that'll get ya ass promoted in the Daily Planet

    I liked both verses gentlemen. Good job on this battle. I think things could have been a little bit tighter (flow wise)
    and cleaner in concepts at stages, but I think you both did well jam packing all that info in.
    I preferred Batman's outro, it was nice and strong, well, stronger than Superman's outro anyway.
    Mind you I liked Superman's outro, but for last lines, I would have liked it to go out with more of a bang.
    And if all of Batman's verse was as strong and confident as that outro, it would have taken this, but as it stands,
    I think Superman's work had a little more in it for me.
    Great job fellas.
    Nice work.


    V - Superman


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    Dark Knight won't Rise after this - u ain't facin Bane here u bum
    make Bruce look like a bitch... call em Caitlyn Wayne when I'm done
    --- Bruce Jenner concept is played but I like it here as an actual np..........
    He just hides in the hills cuz no one likes him. I doubt u & Robin was chill...
    You been the most hated guy livin in a cave waaaay before Bin Laden was killed
    --- cool..............
    Couldn't save ur own parents, plus u feenin for some thot ur man loves
    If ur really a superhero... then ur the 'Lois form' that even I'M not a fan of
    --- fire..............
    I used my hands as weapons, 50 shots to his face in a span of seconds
    ...and they all 'markt Wayne without his mask on'. That's Samuel Clemens.
    --- aite..........
    yea u got money & gadgets, but I'm other-worldly... to me ur nothin soldier
    As far as natural ability u ain't got a Pennyworth. Fuck what ur butler told ya.
    --- nice............
    & Thinkin you'd win here? Haaaaa! now that's mighty rich...
    u better toss that MaryJane off a bridge like Green Goblin did wit Spidey's bitch
    --- not really feelin the spiderman reference when this is a DC battle.............
    Batty Boys bettin he wins... hypin him up hopin he'll make it a fight
    Oh, your pockets on Bruce Bruce? Well u gettin ur money taken tonight
    --- I think a lot of ppl not getting this...I got it tho.............
    & if u think he beat the Superman then ur what Arkham embodies...
    He's not the Riddler. There ain't a single question mark on this body.
    --- good closer.............


    Vs.



    Beat me? 
    Even Lois Lane's always Held Hostage cause he ain't demanding w/ fists 
    It's obvious I'll have this Kidnapped...I mean, he can't even handle his bitch
    --- kidnapped is played, tie in was aite...........
    You must be feeling blue cause w/ DC Comics it's ALWAYS me killing you
    Ya death's been Written In Stone & this Grave Sight's a hell of a chilling view
    --- aite..........
    I'll make Kryptonite knuckles & punch the fuck out you w/out caring to stop
    You'll start shaking;
    I'll treat you like a Recovering Crack Addict, how you're Scared Of The Rock
    --- ehh, decent'ish............
    Metropolis is weak,
    No real criminals; all ya citizens do is Watch You Fly, shit's absurd & it's lame
    While you show off, I'm tracking Drug Trades if I hear "It's a Bird, it's a Plane"
    --- not feelin...coulda used this concept better imo............
    Boooy you caught me in bed w/ Lois before. the bitch had to nickname me later
    You walked in,
    I leaped out the window w/ the sheets on my back: thus the Caped Crusader
    --- over worded as fuck but I like it..............
    Gotta be sad knowing ya days are numbered. cause your villains have you in pain
    You gotta deal w/ an accurate Doomsday that'll put the Mayan Calendar to shame
    --- accurate doomsday is ehh, thought u coulda done this better too....its aite tho...........
    I'm a Tech Genius, so you won't stand the feel of what's in my hand, it's real
    Kryptonian bullets'll coat you head to toe in metal; you'll really be the Man of Steel
    --- nah.............
    ^I remember watching Darkseid break ya back... damnnnn, you BARELY landed
    Ya Vertebrae was one Shifting Column that'll get ya ass promoted in the Daily Planet
    --- nice...........



    Overall: I thought Superman had a much cleaner verse, and was more consistent. Batman had some good concepts and they was on par with Superman but his wording hurt him a lot, while Superman's wording was clean. Supe's had the harder hitting punches too.



    V. Superman
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    Re: HMM FINALS: Superman Vs. Batman - EVERYONE VOTE NOW!!

    Congrat's to you both on making it to the 2015 HMM Finals!

    Writing out of the BLUE CORNER, we have Superman.
    &
    Writing out of the RED CORNER, we have Batman.

    Men, let's keep this a fair match, keep your pens up at all times! Let's keep it clean, touch note pads and obey my commands at all times!

    FIGHT!

    SUPERMAN'S VERSE:
    Dark Knight won't Rise after this - u ain't facin Bane here u bum
    make Bruce look like a bitch... call em Caitlyn Wayne when I'm done
    I don't like Bruce Jenner references but I'm fucking with this I likes it
    He just hides in the hills cuz no one likes him. I doubt u & Robin was chill...
    You been the most hated guy livin in a cave waaaay before Bin Laden was killed
    Solid uppercut
    Couldn't save ur own parents, plus u feenin for some thot ur man loves
    If ur really a superhero... then ur the 'Lois form' that even I'M not a fan of
    Decent
    I used my hands as weapons, 50 shots to his face in a span of seconds
    ...and they all 'markt Wayne without his mask on'. That's Samuel Clemens.
    Not feeling
    yea u got money & gadgets, but I'm other-worldly... to me ur nothin soldier
    As far as natural ability u ain't got a Pennyworth. Fuck what ur butler told ya.
    Nice concept didn't like the execution
    & Thinkin you'd win here? Haaaaa! now that's mighty rich...
    u better toss that MaryJane off a bridge like Green Goblin did wit Spidey's bitch
    First line did t tie it in enough shoulda said "think I beating me u smoking dope" or summ
    Batty Boys bettin he wins... hypin him up hopin he'll make it a fight
    Oh, your pockets on Bruce Bruce? Well u gettin ur money taken tonight
    Brilliant concept not the best execution I still like but just don't sting
    & if u think he beat the Superman then ur what Arkham embodies...
    He's not the Riddler. There ain't a single question mark on this body.
    Not feeling
    BATMAN'S VERSE:
    *Daily Planet is where Superman works as a journalist in Metropolis

    Bring that ass here, Clark Kent.


    Beat me?
    Even Lois Lane's always Held Hostage cause he ain't demanding w/ fists
    It's obvious I'll have this Kidnapped...I mean, he can't even handle his bitch
    Light jab
    You must be feeling blue cause w/ DC Comics it's ALWAYS me killing you
    Ya death's been Written In Stone & this Grave Sight's a hell of a chilling view
    Solid
    I'll make Kryptonite knuckles & punch the fuck out you w/out caring to stop
    You'll start shaking;
    I'll treat you like a Recovering Crack Addict, how you're Scared Of The Rock
    Dope
    Metropolis is weak,
    No real criminals; all ya citizens do is Watch You Fly, shit's absurd & it's lame
    While you show off, I'm tracking Drug Trades if I hear "It's a Bird, it's a Plane"
    Ill
    Boooy you caught me in bed w/ Lois before. the bitch had to nickname me later
    You walked in,
    I leaped out the window w/ the sheets on my back: thus the Caped Crusader
    Oooweee pound that bish pussy... This is a hit
    Gotta be sad knowing ya days are numbered. cause your villains have you in pain
    You gotta deal w/ an accurate Doomsday that'll put the Mayan Calendar to shame
    Average
    I'm a Tech Genius, so you won't stand the feel of what's in my hand, it's real
    Kryptonian bullets'll coat you head to toe in metal; you'll really be the Man of Steel
    Nice

    ^I remember watching Darkseid break ya back... damnnnn, you BARELY landed
    Ya Vertebrae was one Shifting Column that'll get ya ass promoted in the Daily Planet
    Yup
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    I'm rocking with batman.. Good solid battle. Best I've read today... Superman had brilliant concepts but I didn't like the wording.. Batman stuck to the bread and butter n it worked


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  12. #12
    Best in the World Tempest's Avatar
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    Re: HMM FINALS: Superman Vs. Batman - EVERYONE VOTE NOW!!

    Dark Knight won't Rise after this - u ain't facin Bane here u bum
    make Bruce look like a bitch... call em Caitlyn Wayne when I'm done
    Like the concept
    He just hides in the hills cuz no one likes him. I doubt u & Robin was chill...
    You been the most hated guy livin in a cave waaaay before Bin Laden was killed
    Concept is cool but the wording was a bit off for me
    Couldn't save ur own parents, plus u feenin for some thot ur man loves
    If ur really a superhero... then ur the 'Lois form' that even I'M not a fan of
    Eh not feeling it honestly
    I used my hands as weapons, 50 shots to his face in a span of seconds
    ...and they all 'markt Wayne without his mask on'. That's Samuel Clemens.
    Not liking it
    yea u got money & gadgets, but I'm other-worldly... to me ur nothin soldier
    As far as natural ability u ain't got a Pennyworth. Fuck what ur butler told ya.
    Lol cool
    & Thinkin you'd win here? Haaaaa! now that's mighty rich...
    u better toss that MaryJane off a bridge like Green Goblin did wit Spidey's bitch
    My comic nerd is coming out here. You used a Marvel punch in a DC battle. - 1
    Batty Boys bettin he wins... hypin him up hopin he'll make it a fight
    Oh, your pockets on Bruce Bruce? Well u gettin ur money taken tonight
    No. There's really nothing there.
    & if u think he beat the Superman then ur what Arkham embodies...
    He's not the Riddler. There ain't a single question mark on this body.
    Not feeling the wording here.

    Superman started off okay but then it seemed toward the end he ran out of fuel. I'm assuming Bruce decided to take the gloves off and use kryptonite until he could recover from the few serious hits in the beginning and middle. You ran outta juice but what you had going was pretty nice. Really liked the pennyworth and Caitlyn lines but otherwise i feel like wording or concept issues held you back here. Decent shit though.

    vs.

    Beat me?
    Even Lois Lane's always Held Hostage cause he ain't demanding w/ fists
    It's obvious I'll have this Kidnapped...I mean, he can't even handle his bitch
    Eh not really into the wording here.
    You must be feeling blue cause w/ DC Comics it's ALWAYS me killing you
    Ya death's been Written In Stone & this Grave Sight's a hell of a chilling view
    Decent concept, could've been a bit harsher
    I'll make Kryptonite knuckles & punch the fuck out you w/out caring to stop
    You'll start shaking;
    I'll treat you like a Recovering Crack Addict, how you're Scared Of The Rock
    Awesome
    Metropolis is weak,
    No real criminals; all ya citizens do is Watch You Fly, shit's absurd & it's lame
    While you show off, I'm tracking Drug Trades if I hear "It's a Bird, it's a Plane"
    Eh, not into it
    Boooy you caught me in bed w/ Lois before. the bitch had to nickname me later
    You walked in,
    I leaped out the window w/ the sheets on my back: thus the Caped Crusader
    Kinda cool lol
    Gotta be sad knowing ya days are numbered. cause your villains have you in pain
    You gotta deal w/ an accurate Doomsday that'll put the Mayan Calendar to shame
    Nice
    I'm a Tech Genius, so you won't stand the feel of what's in my hand, it's real
    Kryptonian bullets'll coat you head to toe in metal; you'll really be the Man of Steel
    Wording was a bit meh but I fucks with the concept

    ^I remember watching Darkseid break ya back... damnnnn, you BARELY landed
    Ya Vertebrae was one Shifting Column that'll get ya ass promoted in the Daily Planet
    Bane broke your back but all in all it was a decent punch

    Started off a little shaky but I think after you pulled out the kryptonite you basically took full control of this battle. Seen three or four really legit punches here and about halfway in your consistency spiked up by triple digits. Really fucks with the drug addict and doomsday punches. Good shit.

    Vote Batman, just felt he was a tid bit more consistent and the punches that landed landed a ton harder than Superman. Sorry.

  13. #13
    Goon World Order
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    Re: HMM FINALS: Superman Vs. Batman - EVERYONE VOTE NOW!!

    Dark Knight won't Rise after this - u ain't facin Bane here u bum
    make Bruce look like a bitch... call em Caitlyn Wayne when I'm done
    the whole Caitlyn Jenner concepts played but this twist worked well for the context
    He just hides in the hills cuz no one likes him. I doubt u & Robin was chill...
    You been the most hated guy livin in a cave waaaay before Bin Laden was killed
    solid
    Couldn't save ur own parents, plus u feenin for some thot ur man loves
    If ur really a superhero... then ur the 'Lois form' that even I'M not a fan of
    nice
    I used my hands as weapons, 50 shots to his face in a span of seconds
    ...and they all 'markt Wayne without his mask on'. That's Samuel Clemens.
    creative shit. I like it
    yea u got money & gadgets, but I'm other-worldly... to me ur nothin soldier
    As far as natural ability u ain't got a Pennyworth. Fuck what ur butler told ya.
    damn
    & Thinkin you'd win here? Haaaaa! now that's mighty rich...
    u better toss that MaryJane off a bridge like Green Goblin did wit Spidey's bitch
    not bad
    Batty Boys bettin he wins... hypin him up hopin he'll make it a fight
    Oh, your pockets on Bruce Bruce? Well u gettin ur money taken tonight
    ehhh I see what you were goin for, doesn't really hit though
    & if u think he beat the Superman then ur what Arkham embodies...
    He's not the Riddler. There ain't a single question mark on this body.
    pretty good close

    vs.

    Even Lois Lane's always Held Hostage cause he ain't demanding w/ fists
    It's obvious I'll have this Kidnapped...I mean, he can't even handle his bitch
    ehhh
    You must be feeling blue cause w/ DC Comics it's ALWAYS me killing you
    Ya death's been Written In Stone & this Grave Sight's a hell of a chilling view
    okay
    I'll make Kryptonite knuckles & punch the fuck out you w/out caring to stop
    You'll start shaking;
    I'll treat you like a Recovering Crack Addict, how you're Scared Of The Rock
    pretty simplistic concept even with the tie in
    Metropolis is weak,
    No real criminals; all ya citizens do is Watch You Fly, shit's absurd & it's lame
    While you show off, I'm tracking Drug Trades if I hear "It's a Bird, it's a Plane"
    nah
    Boooy you caught me in bed w/ Lois before. the bitch had to nickname me later
    You walked in,
    I leaped out the window w/ the sheets on my back: thus the Caped Crusader
    haha okay
    Gotta be sad knowing ya days are numbered. cause your villains have you in pain
    You gotta deal w/ an accurate Doomsday that'll put the Mayan Calendar to shame
    aight
    I'm a Tech Genius, so you won't stand the feel of what's in my hand, it's real
    Kryptonian bullets'll coat you head to toe in metal; you'll really be the Man of Steel
    not bad
    ^I remember watching Darkseid break ya back... damnnnn, you BARELY landed
    Ya Vertebrae was one Shifting Column that'll get ya ass promoted in the Daily Planet
    strong close

    Good battle, props to both makin it this far
    Bruce had a couple good ones. Shifting column close was his best, I liked that.
    Lotta bland concepts that didn't really tie in that well too.
    Superman had a nice verse... maybe one or two ehhs but the rest was good
    Lois form and Mark Twain were both fresh and connected nice, Pennyworth was done real well
    Pretty decisive victory for Superman

    V/ Superman

  14. #14
    Cold as ice. Allen Knight's Avatar
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    Re: HMM FINALS: Superman Vs. Batman - EVERYONE VOTE NOW!!

    He just hides in the hills cuz no one likes him. I doubt u & Robin was chill...
    You been the most hated guy livin in a cave waaaay before Bin Laden was killed

    Couldn't save ur own parents, plus u feenin for some thot ur man loves
    If ur really a superhero... then ur the 'Lois form' that even I'M not a fan of

    I used my hands as weapons, 50 shots to his face in a span of seconds
    ...and they all 'markt Wayne without his mask on'. That's Samuel Clemens.
    yea u got money & gadgets, but I'm other-worldly... to me ur nothin soldier
    As far as natural ability u ain't got a Pennyworth. Fuck what ur butler told ya.


    Vs

    You must be feeling blue cause w/ DC Comics it's ALWAYS me killing you
    Ya death's been Written In Stone & this Grave Sight's a hell of a chilling view
    I'm a Tech Genius, so you won't stand the feel of what's in my hand, it's real
    Kryptonian bullets'll coat you head to toe in metal; you'll really be the Man of Steel
    I remember watching Darkseid break ya back... damnnnn, you BARELY landed
    Ya Vertebrae was one Shifting Column that'll get ya ass promoted in the Daily Planet


    v/Clark Kent...this was a dope finals, both had bars...i thought bat's daily planet bar
    was niceee, kryptonian was good too..solid verse.but i think superman verse was more consistent
    & had 2 haymakers superhero & cave were fire, props to both here.
    good read. but superman got it.
    Name plays on me are old.
    Legion Of Legends

  15. #15
    Obnoxious Amen's Avatar
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    Re: HMM FINALS: Superman Vs. Batman - EVERYONE VOTE NOW!!

    Superman WINS by way of split decision: 6-4.

    Congrats to the NEW HMM CHAMPION and Good showing by the RUNNER UP!


    Give me some time to get the mag together & Get these Brackets uploaded so I can post both Alias Bracket & Username Brackets!

    All record will be updated with in the next few days.

    Be mindful - Those that no showed will be receiving 2'Ls.

    Stated at the beginning of the tournament, so don't act surprised.

    Will be up by tomorrow morning. Want to add some shit and touch up/revise what I already have!

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