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    [SEMI-FINALS] Battler #3 vs Battler #4 - Battler 4 ADVANCES!

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    Re: [SEMI-FINALS] Battler #3 vs Battler #4

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    Re: [SEMI-FINALS] Battler #3 vs Battler #4

    Battler #3:
    Red Dot for reach, So the scene will be a mess, I'll squeeze the tech,
    & expose shit w/ the 'beam on the stainless', The creator of UV Lights'll be impressed.
    Im on a violent path, Use my Idaho silencer and split this guy in half,
    Light up w/ the Potato... I could Kill him & get a A+ In Science class.
    Or I can beat'em the fuck up, He'll go home with alot aching,
    & enough 'Knots' on'em for Moses to mistake'em for the Stone Tablets that God gave him.
    Or should I give u a Headshot?, Ya soul will levitate for sure
    U'll be BEHR bones, after I finish lettin ur blood decorate the wall.
    He'll go into shock not able to use his brain after I bruise this lame;
    & a Black Friday window sale couldn't help to reduce the Pane.
    My heart is frost, U got A jaw made of Glass.. I'll knock it off,
    then Stomp On it in front of a bunch of Jews and scream "Mazel Tov!"


    vs

    Battler #4:
    4 Loco cabron, U dont understand the typa dude u bout to face;
    Ima really make this nigga 3 disappear tonight.. & I aint leavin a Tres.
    Still got the Halloween mood, & When u see the Docs u'll be betting they do too;
    Im comin at u like Freddy Krug...They spendin the entire night Dressin Up ur wounds.
    U should call 4 'father', Lemme address this first so u can hear it bro;
    That bitch U bout to wife up? Same hoe everyone seen 4 score seven yrs ago!
    Ill take broken bottles and feed 'em to u cuz Im an animal wit it;
    & Its gon hurt baaaad tryna talk thru that glass, like visiting family in prison.
    I hear laughters the best medicine, no operation or better pill my friend;
    So listen to some standup...after Im done wit U & they sayin that U never will again.
    Fuck baseball this is blood sport and U dont got what it takes;
    After 3 strikes?, I still just swing this bat & score a grand slam to his face.

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    Re: [SEMI-FINALS] Battler #3 vs Battler #4 - VOTE NOW!!

    Reserved for vote

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    Re: [SEMI-FINALS] Battler #3 vs Battler #4 - VOTE NOW!!

    Science class

    Vs

    Opener, freddy krueg (almost stand up)

    V/B4. He seemed alil more polished. Tie ins n were great and punches hit harder
    I dont need no army mr. smart ass... My son Damon home right now...


    ..Savages

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    Re: [SEMI-FINALS] Battler #3 vs Battler #4 - VOTE NOW!!

    Red Dot for reach, So the scene will be a mess, I'll squeeze the tech,
    & expose shit w/ the 'beam on the stainless', The creator of UV Lights'll be impressed.
    not feelin...
    Im on a violent path, Use my Idaho silencer and split this guy in half,
    Light up w/ the Potato... I could Kill him & get a A+ In Science class.
    lulz aite...
    Or I can beat'em the fuck up, He'll go home with alot aching,
    & enough 'Knots' on'em for Moses to mistake'em for the Stone Tablets that God gave him.
    nice wording and i wanna like it. but knots/nots is just too simple...
    Or should I give u a Headshot?, Ya soul will levitate for sure
    U'll be BEHR bones, after I finish lettin ur blood decorate the wall.
    nah, played...
    He'll go into shock not able to use his brain after I bruise this lame;
    & a Black Friday window sale couldn't help to reduce the Pane.
    lol come on man, shits played...
    My heart is frost, U got A jaw made of Glass.. I'll knock it off,
    then Stomp On it in front of a bunch of Jews and scream "Mazel Tov!"
    aite...


    vs


    4 Loco cabron, U dont understand the typa dude u bout to face;
    Ima really make this nigga 3 disappear tonight.. & I aint leavin a Tres.
    aite...
    Still got the Halloween mood, & When u see the Docs u'll be betting they do too;
    Im comin at u like Freddy Krug...They spendin the entire night Dressin Up ur wounds.
    nah...
    U should call 4 'father', Lemme address this first so u can hear it bro;
    That bitch U bout to wife up? Same hoe everyone seen 4 score seven yrs ago!
    this wasn't put together very well...loose assocations and theyre too far removed from one another. I li ke the concept, don't like how you used it...
    Ill take broken bottles and feed 'em to u cuz Im an animal wit it;
    & Its gon hurt baaaad tryna talk thru that glass, like visiting family in prison.
    aaaaaite...
    I hear laughters the best medicine, no operation or better pill my friend;
    So listen to some standup...after Im done wit U & they sayin that U never will again.
    nope...
    Fuck baseball this is blood sport and U dont got what it takes;
    After 3 strikes?, I still just swing this bat & score a grand slam to his face.
    wtf...no.


    overall: both had two hits, and one almost. this is tough, cuz one had some played ass lines with no fresh flip while the other just had some booty lines lol.

    3 strikes and standup were really bad. but pane, behr and knots are all super simple and played. i liked the flip on knots tho, was kinda cool.


    i'm going with battler 4. i thought tres and talkn thru the glass were better than science class and mazel tov. Mazel tov was lulz tho...good shit. props to both.

    could see either winning this tbc


    V. Faggot #4

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    Re: [SEMI-FINALS] Battler #3 vs Battler #4

    Quote Originally Posted by Amen View Post
    Battler #3:
    Red Dot for reach, So the scene will be a mess, I'll squeeze the tech,
    & expose shit w/ the 'beam on the stainless', The creator of UV Lights'll be impressed.
    --eh
    Im on a violent path, Use my Idaho silencer and split this guy in half,
    Light up w/ the Potato... I could Kill him & get a A+ In Science class.
    --ok
    Or I can beat'em the fuck up, He'll go home with alot aching,
    & enough 'Knots' on'em for Moses to mistake'em for the Stone Tablets that God gave him.
    --ok
    Or should I give u a Headshot?, Ya soul will levitate for sure
    U'll be BEHR bones, after I finish lettin ur blood decorate the wall.
    --this is dated
    He'll go into shock not able to use his brain after I bruise this lame;
    & a Black Friday window sale couldn't help to reduce the Pane.
    --really?
    My heart is frost, U got A jaw made of Glass.. I'll knock it off,
    then Stomp On it in front of a bunch of Jews and scream "Mazel Tov!"

    --ok

    vs

    Battler #4:
    4 Loco cabron, U dont understand the typa dude u bout to face;
    Ima really make this nigga 3 disappear tonight.. & I aint leavin a Tres.
    --cool
    Still got the Halloween mood, & When u see the Docs u'll be betting they do too;
    Im comin at u like Freddy Krug...They spendin the entire night Dressin Up ur wounds
    --ok
    U should call 4 'father', Lemme address this first so u can hear it bro;
    That bitch U bout to wife up? Same hoe everyone seen 4 score seven yrs ago!
    --eh wording but creative
    Ill take broken bottles and feed 'em to u cuz Im an animal wit it;
    & Its gon hurt baaaad tryna talk thru that glass, like visiting family in prison.
    --nice
    I hear laughters the best medicine, no operation or better pill my friend;
    So listen to some standup...after Im done wit U & they sayin that U never will again.
    --not a fan
    Fuck baseball this is blood sport and U dont got what it takes;
    After 3 strikes?, I still just swing this bat & score a grand slam to his face.
    --nah
    2-0 in quotes

    3 had some baddddddd misses

    4 had some hits but he had a couple bad misses too


    Anyway


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    Re: [SEMI-FINALS] Battler #3 vs Battler #4 - VOTE NOW!!

    Red Dot for reach, So the scene will be a mess, I'll squeeze the tech,
    & expose shit w/ the 'beam on the stainless', The creator of UV Lights'll be impressed.
    Im on a violent path, Use my Idaho silencer and split this guy in half,
    Light up w/ the Potato... I could Kill him & get a A+ In Science class.

    My heart is frost, U got A jaw made of Glass.. I'll knock it off,
    then Stomp On it in front of a bunch of Jews and scream "Mazel Tov!"

    vs.

    4 Loco cabron, U dont understand the typa dude u bout to face;
    Ima really make this nigga 3 disappear tonight.. & I aint leavin a Tres.

    Still got the Halloween mood, & When u see the Docs u'll be betting they do too;
    Im comin at u like Freddy Krug...They spendin the entire night Dressin Up ur wounds.
    Ill take broken bottles and feed 'em to u cuz Im an animal wit it;
    & Its gon hurt baaaad tryna talk thru that glass, like visiting family in prison.


    Vote: Battler #4

    Unfortunately battler 3 had some damaging misses and softly executed/lightly humored bars while battler 4 had some pretty hard hitting shit. honestly battler 3 was a lot more creative than 4. battles aren't all about talking about ways to dismember an opponent. but yeah. delivery > concept is how it goes these days. harshness/brutality in battler 3's shit was what it was missing.

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    Re: [SEMI-FINALS] Battler #3 vs Battler #4 - VOTE NOW!!

    Red Dot for reach, So the scene will be a mess, I'll squeeze the tech,
    & expose shit w/ the 'beam on the stainless', The creator of UV Lights'll be impressed.
    okay
    Im on a violent path, Use my Idaho silencer and split this guy in half,
    Light up w/ the Potato... I could Kill him & get a A+ In Science class.
    cool... don't really get the reference though I guess I skipped that class
    Or I can beat'em the fuck up, He'll go home with alot aching,
    & enough 'Knots' on'em for Moses to mistake'em for the Stone Tablets that God gave him.
    kinda stretched but this was decent
    Or should I give u a Headshot?, Ya soul will levitate for sure
    U'll be BEHR bones, after I finish lettin ur blood decorate the wall.
    okay
    He'll go into shock not able to use his brain after I bruise this lame;
    & a Black Friday window sale couldn't help to reduce the Pane.
    solid wording & the timing good... but the concept pretty old
    My heart is frost, U got A jaw made of Glass.. I'll knock it off,
    then Stomp On it in front of a bunch of Jews and scream "Mazel Tov!"
    haha aight

    vs.

    4 Loco cabron, U dont understand the typa dude u bout to face;
    Ima really make this nigga 3 disappear tonight.. & I aint leavin a Tres.
    I like the concept... coulda done more with it but still pretty nice
    Still got the Halloween mood, & When u see the Docs u'll be betting they do too;
    Im comin at u like Freddy Krug...They spendin the entire night Dressin Up ur wounds.
    cool
    U should call 4 'father', Lemme address this first so u can hear it bro;
    That bitch U bout to wife up? Same hoe everyone seen 4 score seven yrs ago!
    creative shit... doesn't really hit that hard but not bad
    Ill take broken bottles and feed 'em to u cuz Im an animal wit it;
    & Its gon hurt baaaad tryna talk thru that glass, like visiting family in prison.
    this is tough
    I hear laughters the best medicine, no operation or better pill my friend;
    So listen to some standup...after Im done wit U & they sayin that U never will again.
    not bad
    Fuck baseball this is blood sport and U dont got what it takes;
    After 3 strikes?, I still just swing this bat & score a grand slam to his face.
    okay

    props to both on makin it this far... this was pretty close
    neither was throwin crazy haymakers but the misses weren't bad whiffs to me
    the glass jaw/mazel tov from 3 was pretty good, & knots and potato was cool concepts
    I thought that visiting fam in prison bar from 4 was LOTB, that was heat
    That stood out above the rest in this battle, & Tres was there too...
    Coulda prolly gone either way so I'm surprised it's not any votes on the other side...
    but I got #4 here too

    V/ Battler 4
    Last edited by Junto; December 3rd, 2015 at 10:47 AM

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    Re: [SEMI-FINALS] Battler #3 vs Battler #4 - VOTE NOW!!

    lmao battler #3 had some decent ideas but then some god awful lines to be real

    black friday window sales / pane? fvbhgasdfbsjdgf that was paneful to even read that shit, it was so poor

    that potato line was kinda a cool idea, needs flipping into something better conceptually though @Hush there's one for you

    Im on a violent path, Use my Idaho silencer and split this guy in half,
    Light up w/ the Potato... I could Kill him & get a A+ In Science class.

    vs.

    tres was cool i guess, family in prison line was cool, didnt much care for anything else to be real

    second guy got it though

    just overall better ideas/wording that came off

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