Originally Posted by
useless
Smog's Verse:
Against muff I gave u votw n each bar ranged from worthless to decent
It was iiiiiiiight.....
.. but when the next best was ehh, u know that week was the worst of the season
☆☆☆ (statementish, which I don't mind from you, but overly statementish without any real creative twist)
See I done told u that wasn't muff, u think he would type that crap?
Not sayin he'd lose his love for text... So like a sweetheart he let her write that rap
☆ (not big on the simplicity and indirect focus here)
Gotta salute kid fa bodyin useless, I figured the 2 cats'll clash better
So yeah props for runnin thru this league no sweat.... Facing dudes' half ass efforts
☆☆☆☆☆ (great personal)
What I says off the heart, so I mean it that in a way dawg, ur smart
For singin in late season.. When the only care was if an early playoffs would start
☆☆☆ (enjoyed the personal but wasn't completely sold on the misdirect)
Basically ur streaks been a fluke, n I'm shocked from what the hell that I've seen
Cuz liquidity is the proof... Since 2011 no accomps...n motherfucker UR 12-19
☆☆☆☆☆ (another great personal)
N How's exposing broke gay, But it's ok u chill on that cats dick
So Fuck u dawg I just blew up ur spot too... N revealed ur a faggot
☆☆☆ (I didn't rate this low bc of the personal involving broke, that was pretty nice, I just disliked the anticlimactic "N revealed ur a faggot" finish)
If u think u'll beat me by reachin, pffffttt... I'll swat anything u try throwin
I mean u force so many plays... Cutler passin in triple coverage looks wide open
☆☆☆☆☆ (I'll disregard the overdone football concept as it was flipped humorously)
Ur punches might sting a tad but mine'll bring ya mad head stress
See urs might hurt but the counterpane's like watchin me fuck ur girl on ur bed spread
☆☆ (this was okay but the simile usage felt inconvenient, there had to be a better way to word this)
I got 7 gram nickels, but fa fiends like u I got plenty cheap laced coke, see fam..
..if it's fuck Hot Niks.... then sniff till u die so we can see M.E.T.H. od man
☆ (the concept was extremely played and this was unforgivable)
S'like comin home to ur wife's writing on paper, "I'm outta ya life u stupid joke"
The way this season'll resemble that letter... Cuz for u its ending on a losing note
☆☆☆ (decent closer, these kind of bars are your specialty)
Vs.
Meth's Verse:
Smog aka Bust
Let's Dance
Ya girl told me ya fuck game wack and you cant hold a nut
She said my sex is on fire. You're just one to spontaneously cum Bust
☆ (lmao I saw the "cum" wp and instantly frowned)
You in a champ match? Wowww. Carry on with the slop drops
You don't ever conveyor belt credentials since all you do is lose non stop
☆☆☆☆☆ (clever wp and personal)
You got a fake gangsters vernacular. Wigga ya gots ta go
Irony 101; He talks like he's Robin Hood's when he actually just robbed Broke
☆☆☆ (this a dope misdirect, I just failed to see where Robin Hood fit into the equation and that dropped this from a ☆☆☆☆☆ rating)
Fuck tired cliches. Get off my turf faggot kick a rock
You better stay off my blockbuster you'll be returned days later in a box
☆☆☆ (I've been seeing Blockbuster lines since the mid-90's, what saved this was the "returned day later in a box"..that was fresh to me)
Heard you delivered patties. One punch and this fags done see
One hit'll give u this ride to work and now McDonald's owes me gas money
☆☆☆ (great personal, "One punch" and "One hit'll" were redundant enough to distract me)
In a pm u said I missed ur line. But that's whore shit.
I don’t care what Jumentous when all ur drops reek of horse piss
☆☆☆☆☆ (lmao this was a great wp and funny personal)
Fuck a gun. This bow will stick u to a tree so stop it G
Have ya swaying to Aero so much we thought u could mod the league
☆☆☆☆ (I've seen alot of Aero/Bow lines but the reference was unique)
You the best with women? Ya past says no. You die if u tell it kid
When ya exquisite we find out that ur the furthest thing from fine or elegant
☆☆☆☆ (I thought of using "exquisite" as a wp but honestly couldn't come up with anything that worked the way you did it, so props)
You? OK, C u a snitch and a gay dude and it’s a wonder…
If Bustyness Can Terpenes its just because this faggot loves the guy from the Thunder
☆☆☆ (I googled my way to my conclusion here, it took a few searches but I was able to piece it together, complexity is to be admired)
So fuck u. Get kleyed on. I'm LeBron. You Scalebrine.
Want to be me? The heats on so I'll hit u with my cavalier so pal can see me
☆ (I can legit say there have been way more than enough heat/cavalier/lebron concepts to consider this original)
lol