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    Charged Up



    0:22-0:41

    [Hook]
    These boys beating around the bush without causing contusions
    Crew will stomp 'em to death, man, I guess they Jump To Conclusions
    No confusions, but I'm Confucius with the consciousness
    They useless, they need sponsorship; they 'bout to catch a consequence
    I'm rapping all kinds of shit.
    This mic a reconnaissance of my cognizance
    But I guess these people never Change, though, that's Common Cents-
    And I'm... charged up...
    I'm charged up.

    0:43

    [Verse 1]
    Time to Raise Arms to Rise... Son, this a eulogy (Day-Day / @YD)
    Ya Whole Site catching bullets. I'm Up, Lifting my Community.
    This the perfect start to the middle of the Fall
    Their hands closed and feet out-
    The same niggas Guilt Tripping from it all
    Y'all ain't got the Arsenal.
    Ya crew against what y'all barely can face.
    A pocket full of ammunition,
    If I give all I got then it's a charity case.
    Okay, the flow is moving -- it's airing this place.
    My drops Dump Knowledge and Take Out Trash,
    But with all the old niggas like you, it couldn't compare to the Waste
    ...Still, I could see it coming.
    And I waited for 'em to send something
    Happened just like a Jailbreak,
    I was at the War, 'den I could hear The Pen Rushing
    I live for the craft while y'all focus on putting up wins
    Suited for a Funeral for the lames that's Pushing Buttons
    Professor Frost since day one but they neglect the teachers
    Fake fucks got the wrong Makeups,
    At least when I write nobody has to Check for Features
    You faggots can't compete with the best when the threshold high
    A crew of poets? But what you all specialize is telling special lies
    Funny how y'all shit still stink yet y'all Washed Up...
    Cleaning Up The Game y'all made; to play it didn't cost much
    We starting to collect, your crew can't see how to connect
    Zero Contacts = Tunnel Vision + it's obvious, y'all Lost Touch
    A certain low life had attempted a "burn", I thought it was unusual
    Thought he'd be more concerned with the sperm under his cuticles(@Letterman)
    In Hip-Hop I'm the Alpha, bet anything that the mission is my hobby
    I'll beat his ass from A to Z: that's the Definition Of A Body
    So I'll be here... just waiting,
    The true God MC, and I really hope you're prepared to face him
    Disarm us?
    Watch us drop a bomb, dust scatter as I light a cigar up
    Y'all can't harm much, you niggas won't starve us.
    I'm charged up.

    [Outro]
    I’m so sorry
    Did you hope I was crying?
    It was rough without you
    It was rough without you

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    Last edited by OG Maestro; November 7th, 2015 at 02:43 PM

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    Re: Charged Up

    decent this time

    like the last one better but there was flow to that hook

    Y'all ain't got the Arsenal.
    Ya crew against what y'all barely can face.
    A pocket full of ammunition,
    If I give all I got then it's a charity case.
    Okay, the flow is moving -- it's airing this place.
    My drops Dump Knowledge and Take Out Trash,
    But with all the old niggas like you, it couldn't compare to the Waste

    thought that segment flowed nice. considering I listened to the beat n lined up the timing like u suggested.

    the latter half I really didn't like much tho. iono. from letterman on down

    good shit tho. worth a read n listen

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    Re: Charged Up

    a member of staff leaving no links! what an example tisk tisk

    lmao
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    Re: Charged Up

    Quote Originally Posted by Attack of the Muff View Post
    decent this time

    like the last one better but there was flow to that hook

    Y'all ain't got the Arsenal.
    Ya crew against what y'all barely can face.
    A pocket full of ammunition,
    If I give all I got then it's a charity case.
    Okay, the flow is moving -- it's airing this place.
    My drops Dump Knowledge and Take Out Trash,
    But with all the old niggas like you, it couldn't compare to the Waste

    thought that segment flowed nice. considering I listened to the beat n lined up the timing like u suggested.

    the latter half I really didn't like much tho. iono. from letterman on down

    good shit tho. worth a read n listen
    thanks bruh. this is the worm at the end of the fishing rod sort of thing tho lmao.

    Quote Originally Posted by Endeva aka DEV View Post
    a member of staff leaving no links! what an example tisk tisk

    lmao
    yooo hahaha, true
    http://rapbattles.com/showthread.php...ing-Conclusion

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    Re: Charged Up

    2 links or ur shits closed
    I'm a depressed happy cunt. Don't fuck with me. I love you, but I'm crazy.[/I]


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    Re: Charged Up

    Why didn't you @ me? Lol dead.

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    Re: Charged Up

    Quote Originally Posted by 'phX View Post
    2 links or ur shits closed
    lol hahahahaha.
    http://rapbattles.com/showthread.php...ith-Wonderland
    (:

    Quote Originally Posted by Letterman View Post
    Why didn't you @ me? Lol dead.
    I did try to, look at the verse.
    A certain low life had attempted a "burn", I thought it was unusual
    Thought he'd be more concerned with the sperm under his cuticles(@Letterman)
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    Re: Charged Up

    glad u got the joke lolol
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    Re: Charged Up

    You fucked up boy...

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    Re: Charged Up

    Quote Originally Posted by Letterman View Post
    You fucked up boy...
    thas what ya momma said when ya pops nutted inside of her by accident

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    Re: Charged Up

    this was cool
    flow was solid.. nice drop man..

    heres the lines i liked the best

    Y'all ain't got the Arsenal.
    Ya crew against what y'all barely can face.
    A pocket full of ammunition,
    If I give all I got then it's a charity case.

    You faggots can't compete with the best when the threshold high
    A crew of poets? But what you all specialize is telling special lies
    Funny how y'all shit still stink yet y'all Washed Up...
    Cleaning Up The Game y'all made; to play it didn't cost much


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    Re: Charged Up

    Quote Originally Posted by mic s View Post
    this was cool
    flow was solid.. nice drop man..

    heres the lines i liked the best

    Y'all ain't got the Arsenal.
    Ya crew against what y'all barely can face.
    A pocket full of ammunition,
    If I give all I got then it's a charity case.

    You faggots can't compete with the best when the threshold high
    A crew of poets? But what you all specialize is telling special lies
    Funny how y'all shit still stink yet y'all Washed Up...
    Cleaning Up The Game y'all made; to play it didn't cost much
    thanks big bro, salute.

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    Re: Charged Up

    Interesting topic.... this sound pretty good, it flowed nicely.

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    Re: Charged Up

    "Watch us drop a bomb, dust scatter as I light a cigar up
    Y'all can't harm much, you niggas won't starve us.
    I'm charged up"

    i really enjoy how you used the name of this song to kind of end it with this,
    really stuck with your guns and on point with your message didn't really stray.
    i am not much to be a critic but i have to say all and all i really enjoyed this. your word play was pretty awesome!

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    Re: Charged Up

    Flow was good on this and definitely liked the lines! Would like to hear this recorded, keep at it!

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