I Am Picasso

[143]

question in writing....

Test those who care

In the eyes of tigers raging in syntax I am a butterfly without worry

If you live in an edgeless world, how can those who like being bottled up fathom your scope
So they battle the intent as if it was a roach near their Big Mac licking his chops

These are the people who feel that blues skies must be blue
That oxygen resides in its hue not any other color

I envision green clouds raining yellow snow
A grey sun shining on the melancholy of structure
Guarding the normality most people relay on for comfortableness and understanding

It is easy to reject what is not common to you
Being different is the spike that wedges creativity from insanity

I move with a directionless delivery
I am everywhere and nowhere at the same time

You can tout my flaws and blast my offerings
But as many are in life, not perfect.
Do not conform to what we deem right
And in reclusive reasoning, they are rejected and prosecuted

So I am Picasso

I live between the space where form and structure fail to sustain my creativeness
Dining on what you render as garbage
Full of myself
Reinventing my English to irrelevance......

[SELF ACTIVATE]

This was dope.

I could understand it all because you illustrated a state of mind I often reside in. A perspective that does not conform or accept what has been force feed as being the norm (the evil of those whom live backwards). I enjoyed this piece. Top shelf writing right her bruh. Props through and through.

[graf-x]

awesome imagery here man... i thought this was very enjoyable
You wrote something that can connect with everyone here - i felt like the direction you approached was in a creative way as well as making one person an outcast living completely different yet that's what makes that individual & this was captured well.

favorite lines were
I envision green clouds raining yellow snow
A grey sun shining on the melancholy of structure
Guarding the normality most people relay on for comfortableness and understanding


overall i thought you did great here - wording was on point - message was great - topic was executed properly with thought imo. i enjoyed this one quite a bit.

[Emily]

question in writing....

Test those who care Interesting intro. Straight to the point without frills.

In the eyes of tigers raging in syntax I am a butterfly without worry And I am wax that just melted. lol

If you live in an edgeless world, how can those who like being bottled up fathom your scope
So they battle the intent as if it was a roach near their Big Mac licking his chops classic imagery. So true.

These are the people who feel that blues skies must be blue
That oxygen resides in its hue not any other color

I envision green clouds raining yellow snow
A grey sun shining on the melancholy of structure
Guarding the normality most people relay on for comfortableness and understanding

It is easy to reject what is not common to you
Being different is the spike that wedges creativity from insanity That's good.

I move with a directionless delivery
I am everywhere and nowhere at the same time

You can tout my flaws and blast my offerings
But as many are in life, not perfect.
Do not conform to what we deem right
And in reclusive reasoning, they are rejected and prosecuted

So I am Picasso

I live between the space where form and structure fail to sustain my creativeness
Dining on what you render as garbage Love this bit!
Full of myself How clever.
Reinventing my English to irrelevance...... Nice outro.


143, you're a great creator of original work. Skilled at pulling out emotions and concepts we might not be ready
to digest, because sometimes, your work doesn't look like our work. You don't look like us. Act like us. Speak like us.
But you always have a full plate of food for thought. When I read your work, it's always got your signature
all over it. The fact that I don't know anyone here, who could replace you, is testament to your unique nature and storytelling.
There are a lot of gifted individuals here, but I doubt many have had to deal with the flack you've copped, just by being you.
Everyone is unique, but you have been pushed to conform more than any other writer I've known while I've been here.
It's always a pleasure to read your work, and see you not only not conforming, but shining more, with an autonomous glow that comes from confidence of self.
People fear/tease/mock what they don't understand.

In the eyes of tigers raging in syntax I am a butterfly without worry

^^This sums up everything for me. Very well put.
Eloquently spoken words that hold much truth and emit light.

Stunning work 143.

Great Read.