Laura

[Cody Phoenix]

The way she moves is art on the canvas
with a heart full of banter in time,
Silky, smooth, like milk and honey,
every step is so sunny - dancing with life!
Violins, pianos, rhythmic escapes of
glistening places! Such a vivid oasis!
it is amazing, laughs, smiles for miles
and miles as we're flipping the pages!
Chapters, novels, the topic is rich,
what we see is such a flux of ocular rifts!
Kaleidoscopes, the finest notes,
a song of color, a dance in all that we live,
love, trust, a kiss, my miss, this
this is what we call the pieces together,
young, just, the highs, the lows,
a roller coaster of hopes!
If I may, I'll keep this forever...

[Emily]

Laura is lovely. And loved. And sweet. And a rainbow of colourful melodic words.
I'm normally not big on coloured spectrums when in verse but, the rainbow affect showcases
the light and love you have for her not only with words but also visually in an artistic way.
I like the way you start by saying that her movements are like art. That's kind of sensual and gives off an imagery that pretty much sums her up with the first few words.

Silky, smooth, like milk and honey,

Such a vivid oasis!
it is amazing, laughs, smiles for miles
and miles as we're flipping the pages!
Chapters, novels, the topic is rich,

It seems like an endless supply of love. It seems perfect.

Kaleidoscopes, the finest notes,

If I may, I'll keep this forever...

That's so friggen romantic.
It's so nice to read something uplifting and positive.
As writers, I think we rely on misery a lot of the time, for self expression, so it's
refreshing to read something that's the opposite of that.

Very well done 'phX

I enjoyed this.
Looking forward to reading your other drops here.

Nice one.