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    Titans of Tarsis - The Shadow Dragon





    Evil looms of a tyrant; rumored throughout history; clues of a titan..
    'cruel as it's violence pursuing this life and piercing moons with a silence',
    haunting whispers deafen sounds in depths of the nethered descensions
    'sharper than water, more silent than air, spread through every dimension-
    be it thy deadliest message it comes stalking every death that it's beckoned,
    one swing of his scythe bellows blistering sighs vexed with a vengeance,
    'tis the black maw of hexes embellished with hellish elements of malevolence;
    turn a regiment to excrement in tourniquets' merciless' deception's testaments;
    put the world in detriments with my mind that is desolate spewing pestilence,
    blood'll leak through your pours as you feel grue, turned blue; fueling an exodus,
    gifts that're demonically inclined unearthing; stewing the fumes as an exorcist,
    drew from its crevices... stains blanketing floors with sin and bewildering whims;
    thou ecliptic doom be an arisen wound lay on a hilt of their kin;
    chills in the wind lay siege; hate breeds; pining the kill of a king;
    bound in the beginning; "o' heartless one.. the city of Tarsis' son",
    bringer of death, the linger of heaven, hell and the Darkest sun,
    from harlots and charlatans put in eternal slumber's artist dun -
    to the chilled still of a witches tongue lay a grim hindered love,
    wind's churn a withered curse; loosening grips of shivered burns;
    those that have blamed plague made waste of their coveted omen,
    loveless, ferocious; lusting and hopeless as a plummeting crow brinks,
    foreshadowing logic; "non compos mentis"; being thee ominous retribution,
    calm as I lessen illusions of lies fusing inside a crucifix of gruesome alignments;
    awry with chaos, disorder, I crave God's adornments; A misplaced arch of lordship,
    bellowing through ancient; seeping through every crack of pavement,
    witness the sky fall ashes of cataclysm that ever-last evisceration,
    silhouettes of my doppelganger's constantly follow you, all of you,
    embedded within every one of your souls, driven 'till your call of truth,
    you beckon thee among exit scenes, I now come as this pawn in rouge,
    slaying every one faux in lieu of the throne, this is you who has chose,-
    every sickly woe in the folds of eternity that emerges the queue of penumbra;
    summoning every apparition's gloom, set forth wickedness; strew with it's comer,
    you lay under my cover of night, storms churn for me as I am the drummer of blight,
    cometh o' might which not even a God to attest thee; unleashing vortexes funneling light...
    Death shall begin as I awaken bringing fires to rages, squires in faceless dismay,
    ashes will be o' the coming of all beckoned courageous; decayed; for this place,
    where rigor mortis be laid, rooted from the stems of history traced in the graves...



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    Last edited by Kill The Shadow; October 19th, 2015 at 05:39 AM
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    Re: Titans of Tarsis - The Shadow Dragon

    upping this for feed.
    How did this get slept on?

    sorry phX
    Last edited by Emily; November 3rd, 2015 at 12:34 AM

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    Re: Titans of Tarsis - The Shadow Dragon

    Quote Originally Posted by Emily View Post
    upping this for feed.
    How did this get slept on?

    sorry phX
    not upset in the slightest, not a problem haha.... dont worry bout it

    the sites not that active atm so its ok
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    Re: Titans of Tarsis - The Shadow Dragon

    Well, shit. Guess it's time someone gave this some feed yeah? I'm not a fan of long lines when it comes to poetry, might be that I'm not that great at it when I try it. Something about the flow throws me off. Anyway, you did not have that particular problem. Rhymes fit, you had some real solid multis in here that brought this big motherfucker together. Especially the placement of non compos mentis in particular. Subject wise this is pretty fucking ambitious. From religious callings with 'Tarsis' and the imagery that followed with words like 'crucifix' 'sins' sprinkled throughout. I've got this feeling of this being a study or a reflection of the nature of tyranny and evil within the human condition that we often battle against. It also makes us wonder if we are the titans of tarsis, this great evil because indeed our history has been built upon the foundation of many corpses (but also quite a few good deeds as well, I might add). Thoughtful piece, intriguing style that I'm not a complete fan of, but overall you got quality work here.

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