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    [RD2] Shredder vs Wolverine - Wolverine ADVANCES!

    VERSUS DUE: MONDAY OCTOBER 19th @ 11:59 PM EST
    Regular Round LINE LIMIT: 6 Bars/12 Lines


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    Round 2 (Swag&Flow): Battler will be assigned an alias. Battlers must become the character assigned and use that characters strengths to display why he/she is more of a threat then their opponent. Incorporate witty concepts with dope rhyme schemes bragging and displaying why you are the supreme villain compared to your opponent.
    - For an example; Freddy Kruger
    - Freddy Has Clawed Gloves/Razor Sharp Knives for fingers.
    - Freddy Kruger appears in nightmares while opponent is asleep.

    The more Superior Swag & Flow'ish verse will WIN.


    ROUND 2



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    PM me for your check in & PM me your verse when it's ready!
    GOOD LUCK!

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    Re: [RD2] Shredder vs Wolverine

    SHREDDER HAS CHECKED IN

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    Re: [RD2] Shredder vs Wolverine

    WOLVERINE HAS CHECKED IN

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    Re: [RD2] Shredder vs Wolverine - READY FOR VERSES

    SHREDDER:
    Im suitable for a heartless slash... When you start to dash i'll scar ya ass,
    While ya claws r trash. Only childs play... Suitable for classroom Art n crafts.
    Trust me ur worsthless dude. Look at me, then look at you... Bitch im shinnin down to the stainless suit,
    When my armors off you can catch me in the coop.. N yes.. Im rockin the turtle neck w/ the a side of turtle soup.
    N you cant ever top me, against the hulk boy ya moves were just sloppy,
    Dawg you'll need a whole army, n even then Leonardo can tell u there aint a shell that could stop me.
    My kungfu is so crude. Heres the puzzle my ninja listen... Hand combat... Arsenal... Secretive stealth position,
    The leader of my missions...a brain thats really gifted <--- put it all together... I've got that shit that Bruce n Jet were Missin.
    So i bet u think ur fly? Not. Not enough belles not even a side flock, dumb jock,
    You get no respect n what not, ask ya group... The words hot... S'why i could never respect a nigga that losses his bitch to cyclops.
    As for ya newest bitch? Shredders come to smash, trust me i'll go ninjitsu on the hag,
    Fuck those rust slow pokes... Ya poor joke... I've got these serrated knuckles that'll fuck her in the ass.


    WOLVERINE:
    aka Oroku Saki

    Got impenetrable specs, ur like a drunken cruise guest the way these claws got u hittin the deck.
    Iím Weapon X, itíd be wise to duck when I flex; this look like a crash test the way Iím wreckin Asian defects.
    The way a Splinter brought this faggot to his knees, he can consider me, a whole fuckin forest of trees.
    These fistsíll Shred flesh with ease, corpse left gaping to bleed like itís been infested with the Ebola disease.
    Iíll slash blood vessels n make sure itís not in vein; Sink these blades in until ur life force adequately drains.
    Iíve got the intel of a million soldierís brains, shits insane, a Swiss army knife of combat skills that no shill like Shredís built to restrain.
    Iím a Stroke of genius, the consummate genetic mutation. Your extra chromosome yields a different situation.
    I decorate with the Art of War as inspiration; Iím into rearranging faces that could be mistaken for Picasso paintings.
    Healing powers prevent my demise; go ahead and try n watch me regenerate right before ur eyes.
    Truth is ur an embarrassment to samurais. A faggot in disguise, that not even seppuku could legitimize.
    From the shadows, Iíll stalk Shred like a night scout. Then that Adamantium gripíll crush u, its light out.
    So in this bout b Iím predicting a nice rout; Iím downing Saki faster than Jap alkies after a rice drought.

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    Re: [RD2] Shredder vs Wolverine - VOTE NOW!!!

    Wolverine:
    The way a Splinter brought this faggot to his knees, he can consider me, a whole fuckin forest of trees.
    I’m a Stroke of genius, the consummate genetic mutation. Your extra chromosome yields a different situation.
    I decorate with the Art of War as inspiration; I’m into rearranging faces that could be mistaken for Picasso paintings.

    From the shadows, I’ll stalk Shred like a night scout. Then that Adamantium grip’ll crush u, its light out.
    So in this bout b I’m predicting a nice rout; I’m downing Saki faster than Jap alkies after a rice drought.(ehh)

    Vs

    Shredder:
    Im suitable for a heartless slash... When you start to dash i'll scar ya ass,
    While ya claws r trash. Only childs play... Suitable for classroom Art n crafts.
    Trust me ur worsthless dude. Look at me, then look at you... Bitch im shinnin down to the stainless suit,
    When my armors off you can catch me in the coop.. N yes.. Im rockin the turtle neck w/ the a side of turtle soup.
    Leonardo can tell u there aint a shell that could stop me.

    Vote shredder. More enjoyable content

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    Re: [RD2] Shredder vs Wolverine - VOTE NOW!!!

    Im suitable for a heartless slash... When you start to dash i'll scar ya ass,
    While ya claws r trash. Only childs play... Suitable for classroom Art n crafts.
    N you cant ever top me, against the hulk boy ya moves were just sloppy,
    Dawg you'll need a whole army, n even then Leonardo can tell u there aint a shell that could stop me.
    As for ya newest bitch? Shredders come to smash, trust me i'll go ninjitsu on the hag,
    Fuck those rust slow pokes... Ya poor joke... I've got these serrated knuckles that'll fuck her in the ass.

    Vs

    I’m a Stroke of genius, the consummate genetic mutation. Your extra chromosome yields a different situation.
    I decorate with the Art of War as inspiration; I’m into rearranging faces that could be mistaken for Picasso paintings.

    I got Shredder taking this one comfortably. He had the better overall verse imo

    v/Shred

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    Re: [RD2] Shredder vs Wolverine - VOTE NOW!!!

    Im suitable for a heartless slash... When you start to dash i'll scar ya ass,
    While ya claws r trash. Only childs play... Suitable for classroom Art n crafts.
    --- aite...but too direct of a diss to him.........
    Trust me ur worsthless dude. Look at me, then look at you... Bitch im shinnin down to the stainless suit,
    When my armors off you can catch me in the coop.. N yes.. Im rockin the turtle neck w/ the a side of turtle soup.
    --- this was over worded and stretched as fuck...just cuz its SnF doesn't mean its long bar...u said ALL that just to get to turtle neck/turtle soup lol...this woulda been nice with less words............
    N you cant ever top me, against the hulk boy ya moves were just sloppy,
    Dawg you'll need a whole army, n even then Leonardo can tell u there aint a shell that could stop me.
    --- stretched, and the flow was choppy...I like shells can't stop me tho...........
    My kungfu is so crude. Heres the puzzle my ninja listen... Hand combat... Arsenal... Secretive stealth position,
    The leader of my missions...a brain thats really gifted <--- put it all together... I've got that shit that Bruce n Jet were Missin.†
    --- damn stretched again........
    So i bet u think ur fly? Not. Not enough belles not even a side flock, dumb jock,
    You get no respect n what not, ask ya group... The words hot... S'why i could never respect a nigga that losses his bitch to cyclops.
    --- lol, but u coulda did a lot more with this...and it was stretched again............
    As for ya newest bitch? Shredders come to smash, trust me i'll go ninjitsu on the hag,
    Fuck those rust slow pokes... Ya poor joke... I've got these serrated knuckles that'll fuck her in the ass.
    --- ehh nothing special here......


    Vs.


    aka Oroku Saki

    Got impenetrable specs, ur like a drunken cruise guest the way these claws got u hittin the deck.
    I’m Weapon X, it’d be wise to duck when I flex; this look like a crash test the way I’m wreckin Asian defects.
    --- stretched...flow was aite but wreckn Asian defects is ehhh...coulda done more with self hyping weapon X.............
    The way a Splinter brought this faggot to his knees, he can consider me, a whole fuckin forest of trees.
    These fists’ll Shred flesh with ease, corpse left gaping to bleed like it’s been infested with the Ebola disease.
    --- the splinter part was cool but u coulda used it a lot better, not feelin the Ebola part, if it wasn't for Ebola this woulda been aite.........
    I’ll slash blood vessels n make sure it’s not in vein; Sink these blades in until ur life force adequately drains.
    I’ve got the intel of a million soldier’s brains, shits insane, a Swiss army knife of combat skills that no shill like Shred’s built to restrain.
    --- ehhh...not feelin........
    I’m a Stroke of genius, the consummate genetic mutation. Your extra chromosome yields a different situation.
    I decorate with the Art of War as inspiration; I’m into rearranging faces that could be mistaken for Picasso paintings.
    --- aite but played, I seen the concept before.........
    Healing powers prevent my demise; go ahead and try n watch me regenerate right before ur eyes.
    Truth is ur an embarrassment to samurais. A faggot in disguise, that not even seppuku could legitimize.
    --- not feelin........
    From the shadows, I’ll stalk Shred like a night scout. Then that Adamantium grip’ll crush u, its light out.
    So in this bout b I’m predicting a nice rout; I’m downing Saki faster than Jap alkies after a rice drought.
    --- aite.............


    Overall: both these verses was over worded and stretched as fuck...u can get ur multis in and keep the flow smooth without stretching ur lines to death lol....both had some OK lines, this I actually kinda close imo cuz both had similar styles...but I think shredders verse flowed better and he executed his concepts better.


    V. Shredder

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    Re: [RD2] Shredder vs Wolverine - VOTE NOW!!!

    Im suitable for a heartless slash... When you start to dash i'll scar ya ass,
    While ya claws r trash. Only childs play... Suitable for classroom Art n crafts.

    ^This was decent, not bad right here
    Dawg you'll need a whole army, n even then Leonardo can tell u there aint a shell that could stop me.
    ^Not enough word association for "Shell" to be highlighted for a heavy flex bar. but it was light

    vs

    The way a Splinter brought this faggot to his knees, he can consider me, a whole fuckin forest of trees.
    ^This is what I'm talking about. Talk yo shit boy. Talk yo shit. That's a balanced SnF punch
    I decorate with the Art of War as inspiration; I’m into rearranging faces that could be mistaken for Picasso paintings.
    ^Started off generic, really picked up into something creative. I thought that shit was cool because Picasso's paints have them oddly proportioned faces which are shaped all over the place. nice line
    From the shadows, I’ll stalk Shred like a night scout. Then that Adamantium grip’ll crush u, its light out.
    So in this bout b I’m predicting a nice rout; I’m downing Saki faster than Jap alkies after a rice drought.


    Vote: Wolverine

    I enjoyed Logan's verse better, dude was thinking outside of the box. Shredder was alright and almost tied with Wolverine, thanks to the over-extending bars their concepts were often underwhelming tho.

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    Re: [RD2] Shredder vs Wolverine - VOTE NOW!!!

    Nothing

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    I’m a Stroke of genius, the consummate genetic mutation. Your extra chromosome yields a different situation.
    I decorate with the Art of War as inspiration; I’m into rearranging faces that could be mistaken for Picasso paintings.


    idk this wasnt that great of a round imo, One had a better character + SnF feel to me, 100.

    v/Wolverine
    D O 0 O 0 M

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    Re: [RD2] Shredder vs Wolverine - VOTE NOW!!!

    Didn't like much from shredder cheese

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    I’m a Stroke of genius, the consummate genetic mutation. Your extra chromosome yields a different situation.
    I decorate with the Art of War as inspiration; I’m into rearranging faces that could be mistaken for Picasso paintings.


    Wolverine had the better s&f verse

    Vote wolverine

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    Re: [RD2] Shredder vs Wolverine - VOTE NOW!!!

    Im suitable for a heartless slash... When you start to dash i'll scar ya ass,
    While ya claws r trash. Only childs play... Suitable for classroom Art n crafts.


    Vs

    Iím a Stroke of genius, the consummate genetic mutation. Your extra chromosome yields a different situation.
    I decorate with the Art of War as inspiration; Iím into rearranging faces that could be mistaken for Picasso paintings.

    good rhymes from the both of you. Personally thought one flowed better, had better the better snf verse

    vote wolverine

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    Re: [RD2] Shredder vs Wolverine - VOTE NOW!!!

    I got Logan takin this. Shredder showed some glimpses of potential as a writer here but I fel snf wise Logan came stronger. The Picasso painting was the best section of the whole battle. That scheme just kep gradually getting better.

    Vote logan
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    Re: [RD2] Shredder vs Wolverine - READY FOR VERSES

    Quote Originally Posted by Amen View Post
    SHREDDER:
    Im suitable for a heartless slash... When you start to dash i'll scar ya ass,
    While ya claws r trash. Only childs play... Suitable for classroom Art n crafts.
    --enjoy
    Trust me ur worsthless dude. Look at me, then look at you... Bitch im shinnin down to the stainless suit,
    When my armors off you can catch me in the coop.. N yes.. Im rockin the turtle neck w/ the a side of turtle soup.
    --lol
    N you cant ever top me, against the hulk boy ya moves were just sloppy,
    Dawg you'll need a whole army, n even then Leonardo can tell u there aint a shell that could stop me.
    --this ight
    My kungfu is so crude. Heres the puzzle my ninja listen... Hand combat... Arsenal... Secretive stealth position,
    The leader of my missions...a brain thats really gifted <--- put it all together... I've got that shit that Bruce n Jet were Missin.
    --too wordy for me to enjoy honestly. its ok tho
    So i bet u think ur fly? Not. Not enough belles not even a side flock, dumb jock,
    You get no respect n what not, ask ya group... The words hot... S'why i could never respect a nigga that losses his bitch to cyclops.
    --bleh
    As for ya newest bitch? Shredders come to smash, trust me i'll go ninjitsu on the hag,
    Fuck those rust slow pokes... Ya poor joke... I've got these serrated knuckles that'll fuck her in the ass.
    --bleh


    WOLVERINE:
    aka Oroku Saki

    Got impenetrable specs, ur like a drunken cruise guest the way these claws got u hittin the deck.
    I’m Weapon X, it’d be wise to duck when I flex; this look like a crash test the way I’m wreckin Asian defects.
    --haha
    The way a Splinter brought this faggot to his knees, he can consider me, a whole fuckin forest of trees.
    These fists’ll Shred flesh with ease, corpse left gaping to bleed like it’s been infested with the Ebola disease.
    --bleh
    I’ll slash blood vessels n make sure it’s not in vein; Sink these blades in until ur life force adequately drains.
    I’ve got the intel of a million soldier’s brains, shits insane, a Swiss army knife of combat skills that no shill like Shred’s built to restrain.
    I’m a Stroke of genius, the consummate genetic mutation. Your extra chromosome yields a different situation.
    I decorate with the Art of War as inspiration; I’m into rearranging faces that could be mistaken for Picasso paintings.
    Healing powers prevent my demise; go ahead and try n watch me regenerate right before ur eyes.
    Truth is ur an embarrassment to samurais. A faggot in disguise, that not even seppuku could legitimize.
    --these last 6 were ok
    From the shadows, I’ll stalk Shred like a night scout. Then that Adamantium grip’ll crush u, its light out.
    So in this bout b I’m predicting a nice rout; I’m downing Saki faster than Jap alkies after a rice drought.
    solid
    idk. didnt love either, ejoyed shredders more tho. i dont really know what else to say honestly sorry
    v/ shredder


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    Re: [RD2] Shredder vs Wolverine - VOTE NOW!!!

    WOLVERINE ADVANCES!

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