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    [RD2] Sub Zero vs Scorpion - Scorpion ADVANCES!

    VERSUS DUE: MONDAY OCTOBER 19th @ 11:59 PM EST
    Regular Round LINE LIMIT: 6 Bars/12 Lines


    ** NO BITING/RECYCLING, NO EXCEPTIONS **

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    Round 2 (Swag&Flow): Battler will be assigned an alias. Battlers must become the character assigned and use that characters strengths to display why he/she is more of a threat then their opponent. Incorporate witty concepts with dope rhyme schemes bragging and displaying why you are the supreme villain compared to your opponent.
    - For an example; Freddy Kruger
    - Freddy Has Clawed Gloves/Razor Sharp Knives for fingers.
    - Freddy Kruger appears in nightmares while opponent is asleep.

    The more Superior Swag & Flow'ish verse will WIN.


    ROUND 2



    vs



    PM me for your check in & PM me your verse when it's ready!
    GOOD LUCK!

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    Re: [RD2] Sub Zero vs Scorpion

    SCORPION HAS CHECKED IN

    - - - Updated - - -

    SUBZERO HAS CHECKED IN

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    Re: [RD2] Sub Zero vs Scorpion - READY FOR VERSES

    SUBZERO:
    Weak lines w/ no zing, is what you gon bring
    Guess that makes you the first Scorpion everrrr to attack with no sting
    "Get over here" I got em; imma champ, this queer a problem?
    Nah.. you'll never take subtitle, cuz all your words are near the bottom
    Frost hammer to ur skull leads to a loss of your breath
    & I'll beheading to the top, once they see Isis the cause of your death
    I'm too cold. This foo bold but he gon need the heat n lava
    It's nothing to Freiza nigga, when I blast & destroy your 'plan it's' like a DBZ saga
    I should've slacked, cuz u a tier below. I don't fear this hoe
    Didn't need to come dope fourscore.. plus all his concepts were dated 80 years ago
    Chillin while I'm killin. A quick stab is like a reflex cuz this bitch wack
    Then give him that "is he dead" kick.. & thankfully this faggot wont be able to kickback



    SCORPION:
    Bitch get overrrr heree!! coming with the sharpness of scorpions spear
    spare arm spare legs deterioting in the Mortal Kombat leer
    Fire from the breath i breathe fear i scorch anything thats near
    I score chins like im leveling with uppercuts just to hit u there
    Pull off the facemask skulls revealed
    I reveal a bare skull im fucking grizzly during every meal
    im concealed with hellfire go to hell fire a round
    its always hell when im firing rounds cuz i get fired up when on firing grounds
    I got fatalies but favorite one i use is the Stop Ahead
    I make them Stop Ahead functioning need to fucking slow down thats a stop at red
    I leave bodies burnt to crisp often bodies laying burnt in a crisp coffin
    smoke have them excavate the area with sounds of crisp coughing

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    Re: [RD2] Sub Zero vs Scorpion - VOTE NOW!!!

    a reg battle verse

    Vs


    Pull off the facemask skulls revealed
    I reveal a bare skull im fucking grizzly during every meal
    im concealed with hellfire go to hell fire a round
    its always hell when im firing rounds cuz i get fired up when on firing grounds


    Well if this was a ref battle... Sub had a dope verse. Scorpions flow was iffy except what I quoted was dope imo

    So vote scorpion for having a snf verse

    Sorry I couldn't break down bar for bar I'm on my phone

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    Re: [RD2] Sub Zero vs Scorpion - VOTE NOW!!!

    Weak lines w/ no zing, is what you gon bring
    Guess that makes you the first Scorpion everrrr to attack with no sting
    --- ehh aite...light tho..........
    "Get over here" I got em; imma champ, this queer a problem?
    Nah.. you'll never take subtitle, cuz all your words are near the bottom
    --- this is fire............
    Frost hammer to ur skull leads to a loss of your breath
    & I'll beheading to the top, once they see Isis the cause of your death
    --- nice...........
    I'm too cold. This foo bold but he gon need the heat n lava
    It's nothing to Freiza nigga, when I blast & destroy your 'plan it's' like a DBZ saga
    --- this is played but it goes with the character so well Imma look past that...good line...........
    I should've slacked, cuz u a tier below. I don't fear this hoe
    Didn't need to come dope fourscore.. plus all his concepts were dated 80 years ago
    --- partial np but decent.............
    Chillin while I'm killin. A quick stab is like a reflex cuz this bitch wack
    Then give him that "is he dead" kick.. & thankfully this faggot wont be able to kickback
    --- ehhh....cool closer but still ehh..........


    Vs.


    Bitch get overrrr heree!! coming with the sharpness of scorpions spear
    spare arm spare legs deterioting in the Mortal Kombat leer 
    --- what...not feelin it............
    Fire from the breath i breathe fear i scorch anything thats near 
    I score chins like im leveling with uppercuts just to hit u there
    --- score chins/scorching? That's a lil forced and the wording was doodoo............
    Pull off the facemask skulls revealed 
    I reveal a bare skull im fucking grizzly during every meal 
    --- no........
    im concealed with hellfire go to hell fire a round
    its always hell when im firing rounds cuz i get fired up when on firing grounds
    --- not feelin..........
    I got fatalies but favorite one i use is the Stop Ahead 
    I make them Stop Ahead functioning need to fucking slow down thats a stop at red
    --- this doesn't even make sense...stop at red does but the rest of the bar is barely coherent..........
    I leave bodies burnt to crisp often bodies laying burnt in a crisp coffin 
    smoke have them excavate the area with sounds of crisp coughing
    --- ehhh......


    Overall: sub zero got it easy...scorpions shit was wack. I'm not tryna be an asshole but that verse was like a mentally impaired person rambling on and on...there wasn't one line I liked...I mean....idk.......it was bad.......it wasn't even SnF, cuz the flow was booty sweat and there was no swag, there were attempts but they were failed attempts.



    V. Subzero

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    Re: [RD2] Sub Zero vs Scorpion - VOTE NOW!!!

    No quotes

    vs

    I reveal a bare skull im fucking grizzly during every meal

    im concealed with hellfire go to hell fire a round
    ^YO. a slight tweak coulda been nice
    "I'M CONCEALED WITH HELLFIRE AROUND... GO TO HELL FIRE A ROUND"
    its always hell when im firing rounds cuz i get fired up when on firing grounds
    ^This wasn't all that.

    I didn't like Sub Zero's because it wasn't a direct SnF verse. I didn't like Scorpion's material, thought it was corny
    But he had 2 decent lines that I enjoyed

    Vote: Scorpion

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    Re: [RD2] Sub Zero vs Scorpion - VOTE NOW!!!

    SUBZERO:
    Weak lines w/ no zing, is what you gon bring
    Guess that makes you the first Scorpion everrrr to attack with no sting
    pretty cool
    "Get over here" I got em; imma champ, this queer a problem?
    Nah.. you'll never take subtitle, cuz all your words are near the bottom
    good again
    Frost hammer to ur skull leads to a loss of your breath
    & I'll beheading to the top, once they see Isis the cause of your death
    oh shit dope!
    I'm too cold. This foo bold but he gon need the heat n lava
    It's nothing to Freiza nigga, when I blast & destroy your 'plan it's' like a DBZ saga
    yup good again
    I should've slacked, cuz u a tier below. I don't fear this hoe
    Didn't need to come dope fourscore.. plus all his concepts were dated 80 years ago
    hmmm ok
    Chillin while I'm killin. A quick stab is like a reflex cuz this bitch wack
    Then give him that "is he dead" kick.. & thankfully this faggot wont be able to kickback
    nah

    Alright this was a dope reg battle verse, unfortuneatly this round is some gay S&F type shit so judging on what scorpion brings will determine the outcome..


    vs


    SCORPION:
    Bitch get overrrr heree!! coming with the sharpness of scorpions spear
    spare arm spare legs deterioting in the Mortal Kombat leer
    nahhhh. leer? lol what is this a pokemon attack?
    Fire from the breath i breathe fear i scorch anything thats near
    I score chins like im leveling with uppercuts just to hit u there
    alright
    Pull off the facemask skulls revealed
    I reveal a bare skull im fucking grizzly during every meal
    no
    im concealed with hellfire go to hell fire a round
    its always hell when im firing rounds cuz i get fired up when on firing grounds
    alright
    I got fatalies but favorite one i use is the Stop Ahead
    I make them Stop Ahead functioning need to fucking slow down thats a stop at red
    no
    I leave bodies burnt to crisp often bodies laying burnt in a crisp coffin
    smoke have them excavate the area with sounds of crisp coughing
    ahh no again

    Scorpion had 2 alright lines because of S&F, if it were reg he'd of had no quotes whatsoever.


    OK...so i understand this is a s&f battle and subzero didnt really write for that, he came with a nice reg battle verse...scorpion came with a weak s&f verse with just a couple of ok lines. Idc what this round topic is because both did bad at it, so Im voting based on better quality verse overall. Based on that im voting subzero easily..

    vote Subzero...he deserves to advance rather than scorpion

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    Re: [RD2] Sub Zero vs Scorpion - VOTE NOW!!!

    Sub had a pretty dope verwe...if it was a reguler battle. While i felt scorpion had an underwhelming Snf verse, the grizzly lin was the coolest thing in there i thought firing grounds was okay too. Felf like there were a couple of typo's r wording issues here n there.

    My vote goes to scorpion , for doing what was asked.
    Nowadays an Ezekiel be enough to stake a kosher death
    Left ghost instead, these Dudes don't even know their dead

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    Re: [RD2] Sub Zero vs Scorpion - VOTE NOW!!!

    Okay one had the BETTER verse and one had the verse that fit the SnF direction of this round so I'm soley basing my vote on what we came here to do its not about out barring here its about out swaggin the verse so Idc if u say the dopest shit, If its in a regular format It cant receive my vote at all its like a swimming competition and a nigga do the best dive if that makes any sense lmfaoo so with all that being said I have to vote Scorpion sadly
    D O 0 O 0 M

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    Re: [RD2] Sub Zero vs Scorpion - VOTE NOW!!!

    Sub zero:
    I liked two of ur setups. But only that because thats the only time u were bragging about urself.
    Way to focused on dissing. If ur gonna diss in swag/flow then it needs to be a comparison.

    Vs

    Scorpion:
    Fire from the breath i breathe fear i scorch anything thats near
    I score chins like im leveling with uppercuts just to hit u there
    THIS HAD POTENTIAL. CAME OFF SUB PAR IMO. PLUS U BUTCHERED THAT SCORCHING WP.
    im concealed with hellfire go to hell fire a round
    its always hell when im firing rounds cuz i get fired up when on firing grounds
    A BIT BETTER. GOOD WORDFLIP ATTEMPTS.

    I leave bodies burnt to crisp often bodies laying burnt in a crisp coffin
    smoke have them excavate the area with sounds of crisp coughing
    BEST U HAD. I LIKED IT.

    Verdict:
    Vote scorpion.

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    Re: [RD2] Sub Zero vs Scorpion - VOTE NOW!!!

    "Get over here" I got em; imma champ, this queer a problem?
    Nah.. you'll never take subtitle, cuz all your words are near the bottom
    Frost hammer to ur skull leads to a loss of your breath
    & I'll beheading to the top, once they see Isis the cause of your death

    vs

    im concealed with hellfire go to hell fire a round
    its always hell when im firing rounds cuz i get fired up when on firing grounds
    I leave bodies burnt to crisp often bodies laying burnt in a crisp coffin
    smoke have them excavate the area with sounds of crisp coughing

    This is really a tough one to vote on. On one hand, felt like Sub Zero infused the most creativity into his verse, with more interesting concepts and overall better flow. But more of his bars were constructed as direct disses as opposed to self hype/ swag and compare disses. On the other hand, Scorpion's verse had more SNF elements to it, more self hype, but his concepts were not as creative nor was his flow as on point as Sub Zero's.

    After much thought, going to cast my vote for Sub Zero. While his verse did not utilize as much SNF as Scorpion, I think it incorporated just enough self hype to be considered worthy of the next round. His concepts were overall more effective, and with better flow than his opponent, it was enough to compensate for a lack of SNF elements throughout the battle.

    V/ Sub Zero

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    Re: [RD2] Sub Zero vs Scorpion - READY FOR VERSES

    Quote Originally Posted by Amen View Post
    SUBZERO:
    Weak lines w/ no zing, is what you gon bring
    Guess that makes you the first Scorpion everrrr to attack with no sting

    Frost hammer to ur skull leads to a loss of your breath
    & I'll beheading to the top, once they see Isis the cause of your death



    SCORPION:

    I got fatalies but favorite one i use is the Stop Ahead
    I make them Stop Ahead functioning need to fucking slow down thats a stop at red
    I leave bodies burnt to crisp often bodies laying burnt in a crisp coffin
    smoke have them excavate the area with sounds of crisp coughing
    One was doing alright however he came with a normal battle verse. scorpion did what he was told, voting for who i thought connected more

    vote -scorpion

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    Re: [RD2] Sub Zero vs Scorpion - READY FOR VERSES

    hate voting on s&f battles but ill help out i guess bruh

    Quote Originally Posted by Amen View Post
    SUBZERO:
    Weak lines w/ no zing, is what you gon bring
    Guess that makes you the first Scorpion everrrr to attack with no sting
    --nothing here.
    "Get over here" I got em; imma champ, this queer a problem?
    Nah.. you'll never take subtitle, cuz all your words are near the bottom
    --this cool s&f or not
    Frost hammer to ur skull leads to a loss of your breath
    & I'll beheading to the top, once they see Isis the cause of your death
    --this is cool for a reg battle, this doesnt reach me in both types of battle tho unfortunately
    I'm too cold. This foo bold but he gon need the heat n lava
    It's nothing to Freiza nigga, when I blast & destroy your 'plan it's' like a DBZ saga
    --seen this so many times bro
    I should've slacked, cuz u a tier below. I don't fear this hoe
    Didn't need to come dope fourscore.. plus all his concepts were dated 80 years ago
    --yeah uve had some cool stuff its just.. its a s&f battle
    Chillin while I'm killin. A quick stab is like a reflex cuz this bitch wack
    Then give him that "is he dead" kick.. & thankfully this faggot wont be able to kickback
    --this ight



    SCORPION:
    Bitch get overrrr heree!! coming with the sharpness of scorpions spear
    spare arm spare legs deterioting in the Mortal Kombat leer
    Fire from the breath i breathe fear i scorch anything thats near
    I score chins like im leveling with uppercuts just to hit u there
    Pull off the facemask skulls revealed
    I reveal a bare skull im fucking grizzly during every meal
    im concealed with hellfire go to hell fire a round
    its always hell when im firing rounds cuz i get fired up when on firing grounds
    I got fatalies but favorite one i use is the Stop Ahead
    I make them Stop Ahead functioning need to fucking slow down thats a stop at red
    I leave bodies burnt to crisp often bodies laying burnt in a crisp coffin
    smoke have them excavate the area with sounds of crisp coughing
    --generic s&f verse. everything was pretty general. nothing bad, nothing breathtaking
    v/ scorpion for writing closer to a s&f


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    Re: [RD2] Sub Zero vs Scorpion - VOTE NOW!!!

    SCORPION ADVANCES!

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