CONTENDERS MATCH: Week 11: Muff 8-2 vs. Smog 7-3 - MUFF WINS

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@attack of the muff @Smog

[Attack of the Muff]

lol I feel like ive battled u too much

how many

jus throwin this out there...iono if u ever done it but wanna roast battle?

something different. but if not we can go reg idc

[Smog]

Just reg man, n no mo than 14 cool

[Smog]

14 complete @attack of the muff

[Attack of the Muff]

ill get at it when I work up some inspiration

[Attack of the Muff]

def need an ext

I might've burned myself out yo. not kidding lol. never thought id say this but I cant think of SHIT

im blaming it on me not having any weed for like the past week

[Smog]

Instead a 14 complete its 14 sent lol

[Attack of the Muff]

smog aka 48-44
mickey d's truck driver who supplements his income by acquiring foreclosed homes n renovating them

foooooooooh, listen

ur career has been a Stalemate. I tend to wonder why u AINT leavin
but a war of Attrition to me? is watching u battle for YEARS n struggle to BREAK EVEN
Ur "Blood on my Sneaks". try to defend yourself...but you failin, hoss
Call me Pigpen from Peanuts. w/ every Step I take ur gonna see the Trail of Smog
bitch u don't enjoy life. keep it a buck
u been all across the U.S.- n all u got to show for it is a imprint in the seat of your truck
Muff'll put u to sleep nigga. i can see the lame in ur eyes
punches have u seein 'La La Land' like Carmelo waitin on her plane to arrive
get it str8. im the best. 'Pet Semetary' shit. fgt pay your respects
u better Lay it Down, Old Boy. or fk around n get this Gage to Your Neck
put u in my Dark ass Trunk. no use in fightin, dawg
ull never Emergency Light. but you WILL see me Drivin' Smog
fuk ur business enterprises. whyd u mention it queer
fk Fix n Flippin houses. u need 2 Fix n Flip the fact that u been ass since u registered here

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@useless

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I gtg

going out

[Smog]

It's either Get doe oooor....


Be like U, bummy, beggin fa booze money hoping hush'll send a fuckin stack
Im sayin, we can make dissolute comparison, But my wallet'll crush ur drunken ass
Which makes ME what U wanna be, pull a 100 G's out whenever
No lie, I make money in my fuckin sleep dawg...U just DREAM bout the chedda
U know u ain't poppin heat, cuz by now we'd see ur ass in the slammer
But I could amputate ur fuckin arms..n ud STILL talk about clappin the hammers
N When u catch L's? I avoid the chat, won't even go near or enter it
Got me partially lackin the desire to body u....Cuz I won't FUCKIN HEAR the end of it..
But fuck it I'll still beat u, just learn to deal with ur twat drippin
S'like a battle with self...
...ok his cryin'll annoy the fuck outta me.. but dammit I will NOT GIVE IN
At 16 I dipped on school, left my pops crib n ran wit some clout
Muffs 30 sump'm asking his mom," when dad passes can I be the man of the house? "
See normally losers of cont. n champ matches face, thats how they usually do shit
So ur chance to face Areo stays the same..u just gotta HOPE he looses to useless

[Meth]

smog aka 48-44
mickey d's truck driver who supplements his income by acquiring foreclosed homes n renovating them

foooooooooh, listen

ur career has been a Stalemate. I tend to wonder why u AINT leavin
but a war of Attrition to me? is watching u battle for YEARS n struggle to BREAK EVEN
--this is ok.
Ur "Blood on my Sneaks". try to defend yourself...but you failin, hoss
Call me Pigpen from Peanuts. w/ every Step I take ur gonna see the Trail of Smog
--i like this
bitch u don't enjoy life. keep it a buck
u been all across the U.S.- n all u got to show for it is a imprint in the seat of your truck
--solid
Muff'll put u to sleep nigga. i can see the lame in ur eyes
punches have u seein 'La La Land' like Carmelo waitin on her plane to arrive
--lol, cool
get it str8. im the best. 'Pet Semetary' shit. fgt pay your respects
u better Lay it Down, Old Boy. or fk around n get this Gage to Your Neck
--eh, ok
put u in my Dark ass Trunk. no use in fightin, dawg
ull never Emergency Light. but you WILL see me Drivin' Smog
--haha, solid
fuk ur business enterprises. whyd u mention it queer
fk Fix n Flippin houses. u need 2 Fix n Flip the fact that u been ass since u registered here
--solid

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@useless

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I gtg

going out

It's either Get doe oooor....


Be like U, bummy, beggin fa booze money hoping hush'll send a fuckin stack
Im sayin, we can make dissolute comparison, But my wallet'll crush ur drunken ass
--this is solid/good
Which makes ME what U wanna be, pull a 100 G's out whenever
No lie, I make money in my fuckin sleep dawg...U just DREAM bout the chedda
--i see this obviously. idk tho. i feel like if u take a simple approach for a bar like this it really has to be worded harsh. like hurt a dudes feelings harsh. this is ok. i just felt like it could have been so much more as either a harsher, simple bar. or a complex bar. its like u went for the best of both worlds approach and didnt get the best of either. hope this makes sense bro.
U know u ain't poppin heat, cuz by now we'd see ur ass in the slammer
But I could amputate ur fuckin arms..n ud STILL talk about clappin the hammers
--ok, i guess. not hugely feeling it but i wouldnt definitely call it a miss either.
N When u catch L's? I avoid the chat, won't even go near or enter it
Got me partially lackin the desire to body u....Cuz I won't FUCKIN HEAR the end of it.
--nah, miss for me. see where you were going here but, eh. doesnt seem like it has enough behind it. sorry if it feels like im ragging you bro i guess your type of bars just aint my preference iono..
But fuck it I'll still beat u, just learn to deal with ur twat drippin
S'like a battle with self...
...ok his cryin'll annoy the fuck outta me.. but dammit I will NOT GIVE IN
--nah, dont feel this either.
At 16 I dipped on school, left my pops crib n ran wit some clout
Muffs 30 sump'm asking his mom," when dad passes can I be the man of the house? "
--ok.
See normally losers of cont. n champ matches face, thats how they usually do shit
So ur chance to face Areo stays the same..u just gotta HOPE he looses to useless
--neh.

this is a solid battle. not as good as i was hoping. idk man. i dont wanna seem like im hating on the dude smog cuz i have no reason too i just wasnt feelin much of his verse after the first bar. his type of shit just aint my style or something. idk bro. muff had some funny/cool shit. lala land lotb for me. good battle but i got muff, stay up brosss

v/ muff

[Ryno]

Pigpen, la la land, emergency light

Vs

Dissolute, clappin hammers, hear the end of it

V/Muff... I think his creativity saved him a bit in this one. Smog dropped so direct this time it didnt really come off as a personal w/ a twist but just a flat out statement. And in some cases the statement can be so harsh n bold it can slide but these just came off to me as, "what ur saying is true but ehhhh".

[A. Diction]

ur career has been a Stalemate. I tend to wonder why u AINT leavin
but a war of Attrition to me? is watching u battle for YEARS n struggle to BREAK EVEN
--- aite..........
Ur "Blood on my Sneaks". try to defend yourself...but you failin, hoss
Call me Pigpen from Peanuts. w/ every Step I take ur gonna see the Trail of Smog
--- lol okay...........
bitch u don't enjoy life. keep it a buck
u been all across the U.S.- n all u got to show for it is a imprint in the seat of your truck
--- I thought u coulda flipped imprint here and it woulda been better but its still good as is.............
Muff'll put u to sleep nigga. i can see the lame in ur eyes
punches have u seein 'La La Land' like Carmelo waitin on her plane to arrive
--- this is nice.................
get it str8. im the best. 'Pet Semetary' shit. fgt pay your respects
u better Lay it Down, Old Boy. or fk around n get this Gage to Your Neck 
--- ehh, decent................
put u in my Dark ass Trunk. no use in fightin, dawg
ull never Emergency Light. but you WILL see me Drivin' Smog
--- wp is fire...I liked the angle but I think u coulda flipped this to be dope....still good tho............
fuk ur business enterprises. whyd u mention it queer
fk Fix n Flippin houses. u need 2 Fix n Flip the fact that u been ass since u registered here
--- lol aite.................


Vs.


Be like U, bummy, beggin fa booze money hoping hush'll send a fuckin stack 
Im sayin, we can make dissolute comparison, But my wallet'll crush ur drunken ass
--- lol aite..............
Which makes ME what U wanna be, pull a 100 G's out whenever 
No lie, I make money in my fuckin sleep dawg...U just DREAM bout the chedda
--- aite...coulda been more creative but I like it................
U know u ain't poppin heat, cuz by now we'd see ur ass in the slammer
But I could amputate ur fuckin arms..n ud STILL talk about clappin the hammers 
--- decent..................
N When u catch L's? I avoid the chat, won't even go near or enter it
Got me partially lackin the desire to body u....Cuz I won't FUCKIN HEAR the end of it..
--- lmao this is nice..................
But fuck it I'll still beat u, just learn to deal with ur twat drippin 
S'like a battle with self... 
...ok his cryin'll annoy the fuck outta me.. but dammit I will NOT GIVE IN
--- this coulda been worded better, I like the concept but it didn't come across clean enuff....................
At 16 I dipped on school, left my pops crib n ran wit some clout 
Muffs 30 sump'm asking his mom," when dad passes can I be the man of the house? "
--- lol, I usually don't really like lines where u imitating someone speaking but this was lulz...................
See normally losers of cont. n champ matches face, thats how they usually do shit 
So ur chance to face Areo stays the same..u just gotta HOPE he looses to useless
--- aite.................



Overall: this is a typical smog battle, he drops a good verse and mahfuckers hate on him...whatever. This is a good battle, and its close. Both had some heaters BUT muff only had one line I wasn't really feeling, whereas smog had two. Muff came personal cuz he knew smog would, and it worked for him. Y'all pretty much went bar for bar but like I said smog had two lines I wasn't really feeling and that's why i gotta vote for muff.

Fuck what they talm bout tho @Smog that's a good verse bro.


V. Muff

[Wuxia]

smog aka 48-44
mickey d's truck driver who supplements his income by acquiring foreclosed homes n renovating them

foooooooooh, listen

ur career has been a Stalemate. I tend to wonder why u AINT leavin
but a war of Attrition to me? is watching u battle for YEARS n struggle to BREAK EVEN

☆☆☆☆☆

Ur "Blood on my Sneaks". try to defend yourself...but you failin, hoss
Call me Pigpen from Peanuts. w/ every Step I take ur gonna see the Trail of Smog

☆☆☆☆☆

bitch u don't enjoy life. keep it a buck
u been all across the U.S.- n all u got to show for it is a imprint in the seat of your truck

☆☆☆☆☆

Muff'll put u to sleep nigga. i can see the lame in ur eyes
punches have u seein 'La La Land' like Carmelo waitin on her plane to arrive

☆

get it str8. im the best. 'Pet Semetary' shit. fgt pay your respects
u better Lay it Down, Old Boy. or fk around n get this Gage to Your Neck

☆☆☆☆☆

put u in my Dark ass Trunk. no use in fightin, dawg
ull never Emergency Light. but you WILL see me Drivin' Smog

☆ (loved everything but "but you WILL see me Drivin' Smog")

fuk ur business enterprises. whyd u mention it queer
fk Fix n Flippin houses. u need 2 Fix n Flip the fact that u been ass since u registered here

☆☆

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@useless

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I gtg

going out

It's either Get doe oooor....


Be like U, bummy, beggin fa booze money hoping hush'll send a fuckin stack
Im sayin, we can make dissolute comparison, But my wallet'll crush ur drunken ass

☆☆☆☆☆

Which makes ME what U wanna be, pull a 100 G's out whenever
No lie, I make money in my fuckin sleep dawg...U just DREAM bout the chedda

☆☆☆☆☆

U know u ain't poppin heat, cuz by now we'd see ur ass in the slammer
But I could amputate ur fuckin arms..n ud STILL talk about clappin the hammers

☆☆☆☆☆ (lol we both used an amputation bar)

N When u catch L's? I avoid the chat, won't even go near or enter it
Got me partially lackin the desire to body u....Cuz I won't FUCKIN HEAR the end of it..

☆☆☆

But fuck it I'll still beat u, just learn to deal with ur twat drippin
S'like a battle with self...
...ok his cryin'll annoy the fuck outta me.. but dammit I will NOT GIVE IN

☆

At 16 I dipped on school, left my pops crib n ran wit some clout
Muffs 30 sump'm asking his mom," when dad passes can I be the man of the house? "

☆ (roflz nice but statementish so i can't give it the ☆☆☆☆☆ it deserves apparently)

See normally losers of cont. n champ matches face, thats how they usually do shit
So ur chance to face Areo stays the same..u just gotta HOPE he looses to useless

☆☆☆

Close battle here. I have Muff winning on consistency but I have to get this off my chest. For some reason, similes are now acceptable in text again. It was always considered off limits in text because of it being a shortcut to wording, in TEXT. Now it's back for some reason. That's bullshit. Audios, yes. Text, NO. If similes are permissible, statements should be too. Smog had a couple statements in his verse that I would have 5☆'ed if not for the unspoken rule. Statements were dope in years past but now they're shunned. We legit need to have a summit on this matter.

v-Muff

[OG Maestro]

ur career has been a Stalemate. I tend to wonder why u AINT leavin
but a war of Attrition to me? is watching u battle for YEARS n struggle to BREAK EVEN
Ur "Blood on my Sneaks". try to defend yourself...but you failin, hoss
Call me Pigpen from Peanuts. w/ every Step I take ur gonna see the Trail of Smog
bitch u don't enjoy life. keep it a buck
u been all across the U.S.- n all u got to show for it is a imprint in the seat of your truck
get it str8. im the best. 'Pet Semetary' shit. fgt pay your respects
u better Lay it Down, Old Boy. or fk around n get this Gage to Your Neck

vs.

Be like U, bummy, beggin fa booze money hoping hush'll send a fuckin stack
Im sayin, we can make dissolute comparison, But my wallet'll crush ur drunken ass
Which makes ME what U wanna be, pull a 100 G's out whenever
No lie, I make money in my fuckin sleep dawg...U just DREAM bout the chedda
U know u ain't poppin heat, cuz by now we'd see ur ass in the slammer
But I could amputate ur fuckin arms..n ud STILL talk about clappin the hammers
See normally losers of cont. n champ matches face, thats how they usually do shit
So ur chance to face Areo stays the same..u just gotta HOPE he looses to useless

Vote: Muff for lotb

Smog would have won this battle easily if not for all of those direct punches w/ statements.
I couldn't quote what I wanted to because there was no lyrical substance behind a lot of the gold lines Smog had waiting to be haymakers, they were just true statements without anything else attached. muff was creative and had bigger concepts + more variety.

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