Originally Posted by Goliath
Thank you.I'll make sure Peaky Rhymers helps keeps this forum active and in the mean time, add some more accomplishments to our belts.
good luck to you all
thanks for the support
Thank you.
good luck to you all
thanks for the support
Last edited by Emily; March 2nd, 2016 at 12:49 AM
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Not here. Originally registered as Wayfarer; go by Synic elsewhere.
Aight no doubt well welcome to rb. If you need anything.....ask Emily lol
lol
I've got no problem with that.
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Terraforming a terror dome!
I'm a depressed happy cunt. Don't fuck with me. I love you, but I'm crazy.[/I]
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Thanks amigo. And Emily has always been the go-to gal.
A question to all...
What's the best piece you've ever written and why?
Links encouraged.
What is yours?
I would say mine is a tie between my latest drop, "The Vision Heir," and a drop from October of last year titled "I Versus Me." While I am sure there are some improvements that could be made to each (we can always improve, right?), I feel like with both pieces I really captured what I was aiming to accomplish. "The Vision Heir" is really more about displaying metaphor after metaphor with a sick rhyme scheme filled with multis after multis, alliteration, and assonance to really give it a flawless flow, allowing the reader to read it without struggling and picking up my intended flow naturally whilst interpreting it however one deems necessary. Sort of like an open-ended adventure where you get to pick what you want to believe is happening without regard to wondering what I was attempting to convey. "I Versus Me" is more of an emotional outlook on my existential angst and battles with self-hatred, low self-esteem, and overall bitter narcissistic vindictiveness. I feel like it was written and polished very well (even more so than my latest piece), crafted exactly to my liking, whilst still maintaining all of the elements that make a topical or poem a good read. There's a dichotomy between these two pieces now that I think on it: one was written for an audience whilst the other was written for myself.
Don't really want to drop links in the thread, but "The Vision Heir" is top of the list (freshly dropped) and I can PM you or anyone the link to "I Versus Me" if interested.
I don't think dropping links should be a problem. This is your work. There shouldn't be an expiration date on when to feed or discover it.
But, I'm going to check out your latest. I respect any writer than can explain or provide insight into what their work was intended to mean, be about, or the motive behind the writing writing it. So, interesting stuff dude. I'll go drop some feed.
If you say so. =] Here is "I Versus Me." Posted it in PC last year to help stimulate activity in that area, but is more of an OM piece to be honest.
regarding 'I versus Me' it didn't get the feed it should have, and really wasn't a pc drop but as you say, should have been put into om. Juke and I weren't modding back then, but I've talked to Jukon and he's given me the green light to allow you to drop that piece into om when and if you feel you'd like to do that. I'd like you to do that. It was a good piece that should have had more feed and I think it's because it was in pc that it really didn't get the chance it needed.
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'Our Quiet Raven'. I wish it got more attention than it did, but I did get absolutely excellent feed from Emily and Sammy and for that I will thank them a million times over. Perhaps it was too long for people to feed properly, idk. But, to me it had some of my best word placement, word choice, imagery, layers of meaning with metaphors. It's a bit of a tribute to Edgar Allan Poe, but at the same time it's still my own work. An exploration of the darkness of the human condition, life and death, our obsession with knowing things we might not need to know through the paths of our life. It's in the Poetry section, so I guess it doesn't really go with the OM world. Here's the link anyway! http://www.rapbattles.com/showthread...ur-Quiet-Raven
“Those whom life does not cure death will. The world is quite ruthless in selecting between the dream and the reality, even where we will not. Between the wish and the thing the world lies waiting.”
Good question
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Not my best but my favorite, as for why, dunno, just seemed like a good end to a really long drawn out chapter
http://www.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?488877-emptied
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the theory of cause and effect is flawed,
we expect the outcome to mirror the struggle, that's wrong.
pft' this didnt get the feed it deserved either.
this was a great piece though TheIllyricist,
top notch writing right here.
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I just post for Emily's feedback(s) and its like fishing for diamonds...
I'm a depressed happy cunt. Don't fuck with me. I love you, but I'm crazy.[/I]
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