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    Zero to Sixty

    @Wuxia

    I'm a Legend for real. you drop OK verses but you line it with bull
    Wux I paved the way, but you're ungrateful as fuck. minus the ful
    no more hugs when you're down & out, it's strictly spears til it's settled
    had to shake the rust off, cuz you faggots keep on getting tears on my medals
    it's like an abusive relationship, that's why I dipped on the league
    u bash me the entire time I'm here, then cry like a bitch when I leave
    get clapped I'm outta patience, too bad LLL needs helping hands
    I get full on ovations, without me ur pathetic league's left with empty stands
    trying to resurrect a dead cause, the rest of us just get on with life
    there's a reason u don't see Barc, Blue or anyone else worth a shit on the site
    nobody likes you & you're a failure. I actually feel sorry.
    you tried your best, so I know getting canned probably feels jarring
    you're nobody to me, I'll just spit the facts & I'm out
    I don't even know you. not only can I live with that, I'd go in halves on a house
    tho you definitely have skills when it comes to pouring on the sauce
    my pretending to care's got nothing on ur acting like a boss
    bitch I'ma roll you up & hit you so hard it'll shake the trees
    this ain't even a joint effort, I don't need Lay's help to break your knees
    ur fake so please stop talking. it's best you take a cold shower
    hit ur solar plexus so hard, you installed panels in your chest to absorb power


    @miracle

    I bring that guillotine, but I gotta give you respect now
    cuz I didn't get head all week til you started sticking your neck out
    stop frontin, aight? you don't wanna face mine it's nothin nice
    we battle again ur getting bodied, I can even waistlines on open mics
    reading ur verses I get bored. mir's dead I said it before
    hang your head in shame, cuz I couldn't find better decor
    act like you earned your run. I grab my bat, bringing back terror
    nobody buys what ur pitching, you come from a WACK ERA
    you're a clown & the leagues shit, still nothing but newbs browsin
    forced to live ur best years on a dead site we killed in the 2000's
    this the highlight of ur career, I been on three thousand reels
    won't give you guidance, just a tip: just to see how it feels
    claim you had 45 audios, provided ONE old link that's awful foul
    put you on blast, & my neighbors begged me please turn that garbage down
    I get it. you must be disappointed with your lack of success, bashing me
    I'm bout to turn your midlife crisis into an end of life catastrophy
    I can write a thousand lines, ur limited to 10 wack bars in your scripture
    everything I write screams talent & the volume you drop is less than a whisper
    so bitch just stop pleading, it's cardiac arrest when I drop seething
    you get the right to remain silent, & the left hook to stop breathing

    @Smod of War

    "I'm not an Internet troll" LMAO I can't believe this guys real
    gave him a platform, but he refuses to take off the high heels
    u act like a complete dick, meanwhile you think ur roasting us all
    can't we just all get along.. break from you even posting at all
    it must suck, to know that every person you ever felt dissed you
    your respect means as much to me as the outcome of Wux's health issues
    talking bout me crying over a loss. that's fucking funny son you're done
    rocking a signature still blubbering about a 1-2 loss from 2021
    you faggots amaze me. fucking ZERO self awareness.
    we're not the same, ur gasping for breath. I'm a king of text who's heirless
    so you can come with the fire? yeah maybe like twice a year, a hot flash
    I've dropped NOVELS of concepts, that's why you book it after you talk trash
    did a ton for the text community, by your own admission I'm hallowed
    beauty's skin deep & by the looks of it ur the definition of shallow
    it's cool tho, you're a dick but I'm honestly a bastard too
    I'm not a stand up guy, I just stage jokes that make the audience laugh at you
    I almost feel bad, this beef got to a level it was never meant to get
    in another life, we mighta been friends. instead you'll be intimate with death
    you managed to keep you wackness secret but now your shit's done, branded
    fuck tyranny, you'll be crying for every knee elbow & fist punch landed



    Peace.

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    Re: Zero to Sixty

    There's some wording flaws here and there that definitely hurts the punches. A couple bars where the setup doesn't really connect with the punch. Other than that though definitely a good way to shake the rust is dropping these. Helps from risking the record ratio. Would love feedback, maybe a nomination, on my serpent and the rainbow piece. Maybe a vote on me vs Lenox in FL too since I've fed and nominated one of your OMs.

    I think you have it to Zelph harder than the other two which probably makes sense considering.

    Hope they respond. Would be cool to see OM blow up. Even if it's a bunch of diss pieces lol.

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    Originally Posted by Wuxia
    You're a really talented writer. And I've only ever said that to Baron Mynd.

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    Re: Zero to Sixty

    Wow miracle really did a number on this fag

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    Originally Posted by 3viction
    I would have got Zunto too but he wouldn’t have even cared lmfao plus I ended his career anyway
    RIP TO MY CAREER

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    Re: Zero to Sixty

    Love you too Zun

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    Re: Zero to Sixty

    Is this the OM you said you were going to post before you left the site? Man this was fire. I'll always remember it. Great way to go out if you ask me. Wish you would of dropped this a little bit sooner.

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    Re: Zero to Sixty

    He's not leaving. Stop it lol.

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    Originally Posted by Wuxia
    You're a really talented writer. And I've only ever said that to Baron Mynd.

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    Re: Zero to Sixty

    Quote Originally Posted by Wuxia View Post
    Is this the OM you said you were going to post before you left the site? Man this was fire. I'll always remember it. Great way to go out if you ask me. Wish you would of dropped this a little bit sooner.
    I had to be motivated to drop

    I am actually pissed at myself for the wack keyed shit I attempted to pass off as verses against Len & Mir

    I was being lazy because there's nobody current that I feel is a threat, and it cost me.

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    Re: Zero to Sixty

    Always go 100%. I lost to some shitty topical verses because I didn't think I needed to try.

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    Originally Posted by Wuxia
    You're a really talented writer. And I've only ever said that to Baron Mynd.

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    Re: Zero to Sixty

    I'm a Legend for real. you drop OK verses but you line it with bull
    Wux I paved the way, but you're ungrateful as fuck. minus the ful
    Slick wording here but didn’t love the concept
    no more hugs when you're down & out, it's strictly spears til it's settled
    had to shake the rust off, cuz you faggots keep on getting tears on my medals
    I would have just said keep getting tears on my medals instead of on twice. This was raw tho
    it's like an abusive relationship, that's why I dipped on the league
    u bash me the entire time I'm here, then cry like a bitch when I leave
    Nah not feeling
    get clapped I'm outta patience, too bad LLL needs helping hands
    I get full on ovations, without me ur pathetic league's left with empty stands
    Dope
    trying to resurrect a dead cause, the rest of us just get on with life
    there's a reason u don't see Barc, Blue or anyone else worth a shit on the site
    Damn lol
    nobody likes you & you're a failure. I actually feel sorry.
    you tried your best, so I know getting canned probably feels jarring
    Lmfao corny but again, slick wording
    you're nobody to me, I'll just spit the facts & I'm out
    I don't even know you. not only can I live with that, I'd go in halves on a house
    Nice
    tho you definitely have skills when it comes to pouring on the sauce
    my pretending to care's got nothing on ur acting like a boss
    Nah
    bitch I'ma roll you up & hit you so hard it'll shake the trees
    this ain't even a joint effort, I don't need Lay's help to break your knees
    This was decent
    ur fake so please stop talking. it's best you take a cold shower
    hit ur solar plexus so hard, you installed panels in your chest to absorb power
    Didn’t love the execution but concept was cool


    @miracle

    I bring that guillotine, but I gotta give you respect now
    cuz I didn't get head all week til you started sticking your neck out
    Not feeling this, pretty generic
    stop frontin, aight? you don't wanna face mine it's nothin nice
    we battle again ur getting bodied, I can even waistlines on open mics
    Waistlines super played
    reading ur verses I get bored. mir's dead I said it before
    hang your head in shame, cuz I couldn't find better decor
    Generic again
    act like you earned your run. I grab my bat, bringing back terror
    nobody buys what ur pitching, you come from a WACK ERA
    Fire sports bars
    you're a clown & the leagues shit, still nothing but newbs browsin
    forced to live ur best years on a dead site we killed in the 2000's
    Damn lmao
    this the highlight of ur career, I been on three thousand reels
    won't give you guidance, just a tip: just to see how it feels
    Nahh
    claim you had 45 audios, provided ONE old link that's awful foul
    put you on blast, & my neighbors begged me please turn that garbage down
    Lmfaoo fire
    I get it. you must be disappointed with your lack of success, bashing me
    I'm bout to turn your midlife crisis into an end of life catastrophy
    Nah
    I can write a thousand lines, ur limited to 10 wack bars in your scripture
    everything I write screams talent & the volume you drop is less than a whisper
    Eh
    so bitch just stop pleading, it's cardiac arrest when I drop seething
    you get the right to remain silent, & the left hook to stop breathing
    Ok decent closer


    @Smod of War

    "I'm not an Internet troll" LMAO I can't believe this guys real
    gave him a platform, but he refuses to take off the high heels
    Not bad, kinda a jab tho wording wise
    u act like a complete dick, meanwhile you think ur roasting us all
    can't we just all get along.. break from you even posting at all
    This will never happen lmao
    it must suck, to know that every person you ever felt dissed you
    your respect means as much to me as the outcome of Wux's health issues
    Lmao nice
    talking bout me crying over a loss. that's fucking funny son you're done
    rocking a signature still blubbering about a 1-2 loss from 2021
    Facts lol
    you faggots amaze me. fucking ZERO self awareness.
    we're not the same, ur gasping for breath. I'm a king of text who's heirless
    Nah
    so you can come with the fire? yeah maybe like twice a year, a hot flash
    I've dropped NOVELS of concepts, that's why you book it after you talk trash
    Nah
    did a ton for the text community, by your own admission I'm hallowed
    beauty's skin deep & by the looks of it ur the definition of shallow
    Nah man
    it's cool tho, you're a dick but I'm honestly a bastard too
    I'm not a stand up guy, I just stage jokes that make the audience laugh at you
    Decent
    I almost feel bad, this beef got to a level it was never meant to get
    in another life, we mighta been friends. instead you'll be intimate with death
    Okay
    you managed to keep you wackness secret but now your shit's done, branded
    fuck tyranny, you'll be crying for every knee elbow & fist punch landed
    Dope

    Overall a lot of filler but it’s extremely impressive how well worded every single line is. Like fr.
    Each verse was good. I’d say the wuxia one was the best. Lot of funny personals throughout especially for a keyd 60

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    Re: Zero to Sixty

    I didn’t read the other verses but the one towards me.. on blast was nice

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    Re: Zero to Sixty

    Quote Originally Posted by $pitacular View Post
    I had to be motivated to drop

    I am actually pissed at myself for the wack keyed shit I attempted to pass off as verses against Len & Mir

    I was being lazy because there's nobody current that I feel is a threat, and it cost me.
    It's big of you to admit that not only to yourself but to the rest of us as well. All I've ever wanted was the best version of every battler. Not the guy who you want us to view you as, but as the guy who we see at the moment. What happened in the past is in the past. I only care about what's happening now.

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    Re: Zero to Sixty

    thought this was much bettter than what youve dropped recently in LLL... il break some stuff down later.

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    Re: Zero to Sixty

    @Wuxia

    no more hugs when you're down & out, it's strictly spears til it's settled
    had to shake the rust off, cuz you faggots keep on getting tears on my medals

    it's like an abusive relationship, that's why I dipped on the league
    u bash me the entire time I'm here, then cry like a bitch when I leave
    nobody likes you & you're a failure. I actually feel sorry.
    you tried your best, so I know getting canned probably feels jarring

    bitch I'ma roll you up & hit you so hard it'll shake the trees
    this ain't even a joint effort, I don't need Lay's help to break your knees
    ur fake so please stop talking. it's best you take a cold shower
    hit ur solar plexus so hard, you installed panels in your chest to absorb power



    @miracle

    reading ur verses I get bored. mir's dead I said it before
    hang your head in shame, cuz I couldn't find better decor

    act like you earned your run. I grab my bat, bringing back terror
    nobody buys what ur pitching, you come from a WACK ERA
    you're a clown & the leagues shit, still nothing but newbs browsin
    forced to live ur best years on a dead site we killed in the 2000's
    claim you had 45 audios, provided ONE old link that's awful foul
    put you on blast, & my neighbors begged me please turn that garbage down
    so bitch just stop pleading, it's cardiac arrest when I drop seething
    you get the right to remain silent, & the left hook to stop breathing


    @Smod of War

    "I'm not an Internet troll" LMAO I can't believe this guys real
    gave him a platform, but he refuses to take off the high heels
    u act like a complete dick, meanwhile you think ur roasting us all
    can't we just all get along.. break from you even posting at all
    it must suck, to know that every person you ever felt dissed you
    your respect means as much to me as the outcome of Wux's health issues

    talking bout me crying over a loss. that's fucking funny son you're done
    rocking a signature still blubbering about a 1-2 loss from 2021
    you faggots amaze me. fucking ZERO self awareness.
    we're not the same, ur gasping for breath. I'm a king of text who's heirless

    it's cool tho, you're a dick but I'm honestly a bastard too
    I'm not a stand up guy, I just stage jokes that make the audience laugh at you
    I almost feel bad, this beef got to a level it was never meant to get
    in another life, we mighta been friends. instead you'll be intimate with death




    Jesus fucking Christ. Ethered.
    Been a real one.

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    Re: Zero to Sixty

    no more hugs when you're down & out, it's strictly spears til it's settled
    had to shake the rust off, cuz you faggots keep on getting tears on my medals
    obody likes you & you're a failure. I actually feel sorry.
    you tried your best, so I know getting canned probably feels jarring

    this the highlight of ur career, I been on three thousand reels
    won't give you guidance, just a tip: just to see how it feels
    this seemed pretty gay lol

    claim you had 45 audios, provided ONE old link that's awful foul
    put you on blast, & my neighbors begged me please turn that garbage down
    so bitch just stop pleading, it's cardiac arrest when I drop seething
    you get the right to remain silent, & the left hook to stop breathing

    u act like a complete dick, meanwhile you think ur roasting us all
    can't we just all get along.. break from you even posting at all

    the heirless punch was pretty cool...

    overall solid stuff dude. like i said early i liked it more than what you've dropped recently in LLL, whether it was rust or like you said just keying quickly to get something in.. concepts were there that jarring bar i thought was pretty cool I've never seen it flipped before and its one of those where i feel like someone should have thought of that. I enjoyed it bruh.

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    Re: Zero to Sixty

    Appreciate all the feedback

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