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    Battling Elevation

    If you are looking to broaden your battling abilities, post in here describing exactly what you need help with and we will do our best to assist you in achieving your best.


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    Re: Battling Elevation

    anyone wana help a rookie

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    Re: Battling Elevation

    bumpp lol

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    Re: Battling Elevation

    upp

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    Re: Battling Elevation

    Sorry about the delay, didn't happen to see this until now.

    One thing I see about your verses are the flow gets sketchy often. If you used multies, I feel your flow would tighten up and get better. Some of your personals seem a bit played as they only focus on names, try researching some of their other stuff (as you did in the King battle) but make your punches more solid.

    You definitely have potential, just keep working on it.

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    Re: Battling Elevation

    I have a problem. I keep making statements, how can I prevent that? And how would you describe a metaphore?
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    I also dont really know how to come up with concepts? Could it be anything or does the person I battle against needs to be involved with it.
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    Re: Battling Elevation

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    Re: Battling Elevation

    How do i make my 1-2 punch creative and with sting

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    Re: Battling Elevation

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    I have a problem. I keep making statements, how can I prevent that? And how would you describe a metaphore?
    Courtesy of Dictionary.com
    Metaphor - a figure of speech in which a term or phrase is applied to something to which it is not literally applicable in order to suggest a resemblance

    Example: “A mighty fortress is our God.”


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    I also dont really know how to come up with concepts? Could it be anything or does the person I battle against needs to be involved with it.
    Concepts can come from anything... Wording it to pertain to your opponent is the key

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    How do i make my 1-2 punch creative and with sting
    Find a solid concept, make it pertain to your opponent. The best thing to do is write a verse against your opponent, identify your best bar/punch and use that.


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    Re: Battling Elevation

    Aight, thanks dude
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    Re: Battling Elevation

    Not a problem.


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    Re: Battling Elevation

    Can I contact you anytime here? Im part of a crew which helps me great, but it is also useful to hear others advice.
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    Re: Battling Elevation

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