LLL Week 9: OG maestro 4-2 vs. Galactic 2-1 - Galactic Wins

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@OG Maestro @Galactic

[OG Maestro]

Check

[Tic]

Yup.

[Tic]

Ext...

[OG Maestro]

Ext...

Granted, and I need an Ext also.

[Tic]

Weak shit, but.....

My goons strapped w/ triple beams, you’ll get dropped like a bid
So many red dots on you, it’d rival the worse case of chicken pox as a kid
But I don't need a gun, my Moving Parts’ll Blow you apart & drop you for dead
I’m something like an engine…push me too hard & I’ll get Piston Put a Rod thru ya Head
Switch girls, not names...she's a whale, now this guy is the dead type
You'll get crushed under Maestro...which I'm beginning to realize also applies to ya sex life
Stay in FL, otherwise ya Food to the vets, & I'm not gonna digress..
But I don't need to be a Subscriber to know that you're part of the Popular Digest
Ya girl's a Celebrity, b. Congrats dude that's rare!!
'N the way she Gives Back to the community, you'd think she actually grew up there

[OG Maestro]

@Galactic it is what it is.

Galactic a.k.a Tic Tac a.k.a Dark Matter

I'll CLOCK Tic Tac 'till he fall Backwards. his time's done, what a tragedy
That'll show what makes Tac TIC, & prove his weak ass don't have a strategy
When 1 uppercut put 'em in Space, Gallery think about going with the fists
+ I'll upload that^ Slide of Pics from his death to IG & show it to his kids

http://rapbattles.com/showthread.php...k-Matter-Wins)

This dude ain't pimping hoes lately. What the fuck? It's crazy how he bluff
Ask around. Gal been on the corner selling ass.
The Gauntlet Finals ain't the only time he was caught taking 80 from a Muff

Pistol raised, his Body catch shots fired; Blood drips then Smoke splits & pasts
Murdered down to a science:
Cause we just saw this State of Matter go from a Solid to a Liquid to Gas
He'll be chilling in his bed -- then I gun 'em dead while smoking a blunt
I'll show his wife how Matador...
Lift Red Sheets & she'll See Through him cause the shotty Opened Him Up

[Aero]

G:

My goons strapped w/ triple beams, you’ll get dropped like a bid
So many red dots on you, it’d rival the worse case of chicken pox as a kid
ok
But I don't need a gun, my Moving Parts’ll Blow you apart & drop you for dead
I’m something like an engine…push me too hard & I’ll get Piston Put a Rod thru ya Head
ok
Switch girls, not names...she's a whale, now this guy is the dead type
You'll get crushed under Maestro...which I'm beginning to realize also applies to ya sex life
different wording needed
Stay in FL, otherwise ya Food to the vets, & I'm not gonna digress..
But I don't need to be a Subscriber to know that you're part of the Popular Digest
no
Ya girl's a Celebrity, b. Congrats dude that's rare!!
'N the way she Gives Back to the community, you'd think she actually grew up there
lol

rushed, you have a couple important battles ahead so this is forgiven


O:
Galactic a.k.a Tic Tac a.k.a Dark Matter

I'll CLOCK Tic Tac 'till he fall Backwards. his time's done, what a tragedy
That'll show what makes Tac TIC, & prove his weak ass don't have a strategy
aiiiight
When 1 uppercut put 'em in Space, Gallery think about going with the fists
+ I'll upload that^ Slide of Pics from his death to IG & show it to his kids
creative but ok
This dude ain't pimping hoes lately. What the fuck? It's crazy how he bluff
Ask around. Gal been on the corner selling ass.
The Gauntlet Finals ain't the only time he was caught taking 80 from a Muff
lol... long but good
Pistol raised, his Body catch shots fired; Blood drips then Smoke splits & pasts
Murdered down to a science:
Cause we just saw this State of Matter go from a Solid to a Liquid to Gas
niiiice
He'll be chilling in his bed -- then I gun 'em dead while smoking a blunt
I'll show his wife how Matador...
Lift Red Sheets & she'll See Through him cause the shotty Opened Him Up
cool

youd prolly do well in long bar too


OG with the vic

[Greedy]

Gal:
My goons strapped w/ triple beams, you’ll get dropped like a bid
So many red dots on you, it’d rival the worse case of chicken pox as a kid
GOOD OPENER

But I don't need a gun, my Moving Parts’ll Blow you apart & drop you for dead
I’m something like an engine…push me too hard & I’ll get Piston Put a Rod thru ya Head
DOPE HERE. NICE WP'S

Switch girls, not names...she's a whale, now this guy is the dead type
You'll get crushed under Maestro...which I'm beginning to realize also applies to ya sex life
NICE NAMEPLAY

Stay in FL, otherwise ya Food to the vets, & I'm not gonna digress..
But I don't need to be a Subscriber to know that you're part of the Popular Digest
YIKES

Ya girl's a Celebrity, b. Congrats dude that's rare!!
'N the way she Gives Back to the community, you'd think she actually grew up there
DAMN. DOPE CLOSER

VS

OMG maestro:

Galactic a.k.a Tic Tac a.k.a Dark Matter

I'll CLOCK Tic Tac 'till he fall Backwards. his time's done, what a tragedy
That'll show what makes Tac TIC, & prove his weak ass don't have a strategy
OK NAME PLAY. OK OPENER

When 1 uppercut put 'em in Space, Gallery think about going with the fists
+ I'll upload that^ Slide of Pics from his death to IG & show it to his kids 
DOPE NAMEPLAY HERE. GOOD SHIT

http://rapbattles.com/showthread.php...k-Matter-Wins)

This dude ain't pimping hoes lately. What the fuck? It's crazy how he bluff
Ask around. Gal been on the corner selling ass. 
The Gauntlet Finals ain't the only time he was caught taking 80 from a Muff
DIDNT LIKE THIS

Pistol raised, his Body catch shots fired; Blood drips then Smoke splits & pasts
Murdered down to a science:
Cause we just saw this State of Matter go from a Solid to a Liquid to Gas
DOPE CONCEPT. BUT EXECUTED WAAAY TO WORDY

He'll be chilling in his bed -- then I gun 'em dead while smoking a blunt
I'll show his wife how Matador...
Lift Red Sheets & she'll See Through him cause the shotty Opened Him Up
NAH. THIS IS PLAYED HERE BRO


overall. Close battle here.
Og. U had some dope lines but execution hurt u. Badly because gal had no misses imo

Vote: tic dark tac matter

[Attack of the Muff]

My goons strapped w/ triple beams, you’ll get dropped like a bid
So many red dots on you, it’d rival the worse case of chicken pox as a kid
(mmm ok)
But I don't need a gun, my Moving Parts’ll Blow you apart & drop you for dead
I’m something like an engine…push me too hard & I’ll get Piston Put a Rod thru ya Head
(lol nice. the piston wp is old but had tie ins that were nicely done)
Switch girls, not names...she's a whale, now this guy is the dead type
You'll get crushed under Maestro...which I'm beginning to realize also applies to ya sex life
(mmmm nah)
Stay in FL, otherwise ya Food to the vets, & I'm not gonna digress..
But I don't need to be a Subscriber to know that you're part of the Popular Digest
(dope)
Ya girl's a Celebrity, b. Congrats dude that's rare!!
'N the way she Gives Back to the community, you'd think she actually grew up there
(pretty good)

pretty consistent verse. only one line I didn't fuck w/ at all




I'll CLOCK Tic Tac 'till he fall Backwards. his time's done, what a tragedy
That'll show what makes Tac TIC, & prove his weak ass don't have a strategy
(nameplay is played but I think u did enough extra to warrant an "ok")
When 1 uppercut put 'em in Space, Gallery think about going with the fists
+ I'll upload that^ Slide of Pics from his death to IG & show it to his kids
(pretty slick)

http://rapbattles.com/showthread.php...k-Matter-Wins)

This dude ain't pimping hoes lately. What the fuck? It's crazy how he bluff
Ask around. Gal been on the corner selling ass.
The Gauntlet Finals ain't the only time he was caught taking 80 from a Muff
(this was weak imo)

Pistol raised, his Body catch shots fired; Blood drips then Smoke splits & pasts
Murdered down to a science:
Cause we just saw this State of Matter go from a Solid to a Liquid to Gas
(creatice but entirely too longwinded. u know this is stretched beyond imagination right? thing is w/ 3 line bars is the last line better be short. or the setup. if both the setup AND punch are pretty long (they weren't stretched by themselves. but adding another phrase in the middle just put it over the top. blanco had a good 3 line bar this week that employs exactly what im talking about)
He'll be chilling in his bed -- then I gun 'em dead while smoking a blunt
I'll show his wife how Matador...
Lift Red Sheets & she'll See Through him cause the shotty Opened Him Up
(nahhhhhh and I get it too)

yeah I got galactic but not a badshowing by both. galatic was much more consistent in this instance

v/gal

[Wuxia]

But I don't need a gun, my Moving Parts’ll Blow you apart & drop you for dead
I’m something like an engine…push me too hard & I’ll get Piston Put a Rod thru ya Head
Ya girl's a Celebrity, b. Congrats dude that's rare!!
'N the way she Gives Back to the community, you'd think she actually grew up there

Og Maestro really squandered an opportunity to upset Galactic here by providing absolutely nothing to quote. Any "Tic" np is dated and has been done before so attempting that angle on him was foolhardy. He had alot of 3-line bars that either didn't hit or were too wordy to connect as a 3 line bar. I've seen Galactic drop so much better than this and was really disappointed to see the amount of played stuff he brought to the table. OG being unable to top his verse says alot about him.

v-Galactic

[Smog]

Gal


Opener was ok
I thought piston was good..
Didn't lije maestro play
Popular digest was dope
Closer was ok

Vs..

Og
Opener was ok, pretty creative
Thought the space gallery/ gal a rethink was creative af n overall pretty cool

Sellin ass was stretched man coulda done that better
Again man state of matter coulda been door if u tightened it up a lil
I've seen like ten matador plays on him


Overall pretty good read from bothm I mean IF gad a couple door barz good creativity but some were too stretched n lacked imoact while gal stayed fairly consistent with a couple nice joint in there too n overall had the better barz Ono.. Good read from both but I got gal takin this


Vote gal