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    Picture Perfect September '15 [Erebus]

    Winning Poem
    Written by: Erebus


    Shooting star, began closing in
    A question bodes a friend or foe?
    Its lights flashed as the air grew thin
    Which alien life will they show?

    It landed, our hearts filled with dread
    Airlock opened, pressure released
    Fleshy skin, hands raised, then they said
    “Don’t worry folks, we come in peace”

    We can take from them their wisdom
    We can hear them all, if we must
    Gates open, we show our kingdom,
    Each of us is a slave to trust

    We introduce our finest lords
    Their grateful smiles are just pretend
    Their knives sever our spinal cords
    Back-stabbed by our treacherous friends

    Mothers cried, losing their daughters
    One decision, left us ruing
    A whole race, murdered and slaughtered
    Our world, gone, destroyed by humans.
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    Re: Picture Perfect September '15 [Erebus]

    Congrats @Erebus

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    Re: Picture Perfect September '15 [Erebus]

    I was like "Shit I better get this done quick" and enjoyed writing the poem like 50 times more than I've enjoyed writing topicals. Might have to enter this genre a bit more. Cheers. Will defo be in for the next un.

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    Re: Picture Perfect September '15 [Erebus]

    Quote Originally Posted by Erebus View Post
    I was like "Shit I better get this done quick" and enjoyed writing the poem like 50 times more than I've enjoyed writing topicals. Might have to enter this genre a bit more. Cheers. Will defo be in for the next un.

    Funny how it works out sometimes isn't it?
    Actually I was impressed by all the entries.
    Yours had an edge though, so for that, congrats from me too.

    : )

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    Re: Picture Perfect September '15 [Erebus]

    Good stuff man, nice writing

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    Re: Picture Perfect September '15 [Erebus]

    Fuck you Erebus I wanted to win

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    I.P. You bastards


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    Re: Picture Perfect September '15 [Erebus]

    Quote Originally Posted by YD View Post
    Fuck you Erebus I wanted to win
    lol that's the spirit.


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