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    Re: Smirk 1-3 vs Joe Boston

    10 @Smirk

    Ass kicking anytime u request it test this and see how many broken bones ur left with
    Punches could either bomb through ya or ill straight clock ya like that muslim boy in texas
    U have a bad history with exes they give u the runaround everytime u wanna fuck
    If chicks wiping smirk off face its just sarcasm to say ur performance really sucks
    Your pressing ur own luck here risking it all cost
    Funny couldnt beat Bash last week so y plan to throw one to tell everybody u lost
    toss ur self into a bigger ball of flame if u ever think ur creating urself a name
    show u i aint playing lotto cuz the price on ur head will be far from a numbers game
    this lame wont see me in the ring under pressure he dont make manuevers
    Should i let him Leveon bell time these punches hit him harder then any marijuana user
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    Re: Smirk 1-3 vs Joe Boston - JB WINS BY NS/OPEN FOR FEED

    Was just about to post if u want to open this here's my verse

    Quote Originally Posted by Joe Boston View Post
    not sure my neighbor work for Sam adams though gets all different types of beer. I had this Honey Blonde or some shit it was called fucking good
    u never getting pussy fam cus u lack having any flavour
    ur only chance of getting a honey blonde is receiving special beer from ur neighbour
    u poor as fuck, just a weak dude n a geek who
    begs for votes but that ain't new u do that for money the other 6 days of the week too
    when it comes to girls cus of ur size u've never bin fly
    u'll always be overweight joeseph rogan is ur idea of a slim guy
    beat bash challenging muff, got a name for yaself at ya own place
    u been on a good run but no baseball I'll stomp u out at ur home base
    u ain't close to top tier so stop queer or u'll see the gun come
    ur just average joe.. skill wise & that u'll never gonna be a someone

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    Re: Smirk 1-3 vs Joe Boston - OPEN FOR VOTES

    JB

    Ass kicking anytime u request it test this and see how many broken bones ur left with
    Punches could either bomb through ya or ill straight clock ya like that muslim boy in texas
    You could've done so much better with this.
    U have a bad history with exes they give u the runaround everytime u wanna fuck
    If chicks wiping smirk off face its just sarcasm to say ur performance really sucks
    its an obvious angle. Didn't do much for Aero
    Your pressing ur own luck here risking it all cost
    Funny couldnt beat Bash last week so y plan to throw one to tell everybody u lost
    what?
    toss ur self into a bigger ball of flame if u ever think ur creating urself a name
    show u i aint playing lotto cuz the price on ur head will be far from a numbers game
    pretty good
    this lame wont see me in the ring under pressure he dont make manuevers
    Should i let him Leveon bell time these punches hit him harder then any marijuana user
    lay v on bell? Is this np on the running back? I don't get this

    Overall was not feeling this verse


    Smirk

    u never getting pussy fam cus u lack having any flavour
    ur only chance of getting a honey blonde is receiving special beer from ur neighbour
    ooooook
    u poor as fuck, just a weak dude n a geek who
    begs for votes but that ain't new u do that for money the other 6 days of the week too
    no
    when it comes to girls cus of ur size u've never bin fly
    u'll always be overweight joeseph rogan is ur idea of a slim guy
    cool
    beat bash challenging muff, got a name for yaself at ya own place
    u been on a good run but no baseball I'll stomp u out at ur home base
    i like the stomp you out as a concept, I just don't think u did it justice here
    u ain't close to top tier so stop queer or u'll see the gun come
    ur just average joe.. skill wise & that u'll never gonna be a someone
    booty cheeks



    JB had one bar that was decent and so did Smirk. joes misses were less bad.



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    Re: Smirk 1-3 vs Joe Boston - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Ass kicking anytime u request it test this and see how many broken bones ur left with
    Punches could either bomb through ya or ill straight clock ya like that muslim boy in texas
    could done a lot more with this
    U have a bad history with exes they give u the runaround everytime u wanna fuck
    If chicks wiping smirk off face its just sarcasm to say ur performance really sucks
    this was ok. work on wording and using less words to get ur point across
    Your pressing ur own luck here risking it all cost
    Funny couldnt beat Bash last week so y plan to throw one to tell everybody u lost
    i used this same bar against tucks last week
    toss ur self into a bigger ball of flame if u ever think ur creating urself a name
    show u i aint playing lotto cuz the price on ur head will be far from a numbers game
    this was cool
    this lame wont see me in the ring under pressure he dont make manuevers
    Should i let him Leveon bell time these punches hit him harder then any marijuana user
    i dont get this.

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    u never getting pussy fam cus u lack having any flavour
    ur only chance of getting a honey blonde is receiving special beer from ur neighbour
    nah
    u poor as fuck, just a weak dude n a geek who
    begs for votes but that ain't new u do that for money the other 6 days of the week too
    umm..
    when it comes to girls cus of ur size u've never bin fly
    u'll always be overweight joeseph rogan is ur idea of a slim guy
    what?
    beat bash challenging muff, got a name for yaself at ya own place
    u been on a good run but no baseball I'll stomp u out at ur home base
    no
    u ain't close to top tier so stop queer or u'll see the gun come
    ur just average joe.. skill wise & that u'll never gonna be a someone
    no

    not a good battle. both came week. joe had the numbers line tho so i got him takin the win.

    vote - jumpoff joey boston
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    Re: Smirk 1-3 vs Joe Boston - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Ass kicking anytime u request it test this and see how many broken bones ur left with
    Punches could either bomb through ya or ill straight clock ya like that muslim boy in texas 
    --- coulda flipped this better. This is the basic JB punch lol. Word association and simile to a current event..........
    U have a bad history with exes they give u the runaround everytime u wanna fuck 
    If chicks wiping smirk off face its just sarcasm to say ur performance really sucks 
    --- OK np but I've seen it flipped every which way and u didn't do anything special with it.........
    Your pressing ur own luck here risking it all cost 
    Funny couldnt beat Bash last week so y plan to throw one to tell everybody u lost
    --- lol this is aite but worded bad..........
    toss ur self into a bigger ball of flame if u ever think ur creating urself a name
    show u i aint playing lotto cuz the price on ur head will be far from a numbers game
    --- cool.......
    this lame wont see me in the ring under pressure he dont make manuevers 
    Should i let him Leveon bell time these punches hit him harder then any marijuana user
    --- i don't get the wp. Miss......

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    u never getting pussy fam cus u lack having any flavour
    ur only chance of getting a honey blonde is receiving special beer from ur neighbour
    --- cool personal. Kinda obvious tho. As soon as I read the quote n started reading ur line I knew what it was gonna be............
    u poor as fuck, just a weak dude n a geek who
    begs for votes but that ain't new u do that for money the other 6 days of the week too 
    --- what? Why is he begging for votes the other six days of the week? Is he in public office? Miss.......
    when it comes to girls cus of ur size u've never bin fly
    u'll always be overweight joeseph rogan is ur idea of a slim guy
    --- nahh bruh............
    beat bash challenging muff, got a name for yaself at ya own place
    u been on a good run but no baseball I'll stomp u out at ur home base
    --- nahh cmon breh ur better than this.........
    u ain't close to top tier so stop queer or u'll see the gun come
    ur just average joe.. skill wise & that u'll never gonna be a someone
    --- nononononono. This np has been used on Joe a billion times...now a billion n one.........

    Overall: typical jb verse but I see him trying some diff stuff and I hope he works on it and gets his wording game up. Quit using the first flip u think of bruh. Idk what happened to smirk but his verse was not good this week. I've seen him drop light years better than this.

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    Re: Smirk 1-3 vs Joe Boston - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Jb

    Opener was ok, u should try n flip some of these without using like man I think they'll land harder
    Wiping smirk is to played, nothin fresh bout it
    Bash play was executed poorly especially after seein PG's
    Playing Lotto is also played but ur flip was dope, worded better too man
    Think ur closer might a went over my head so please explain when this shits finished lol

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    Opener was ok, good way to start
    Didnt really like the beggin for votes joint
    Joesph Rohan didn't work
    Good run was week
    Closer was ehh.. Played


    Iight yall kinda got similar style tho, I mean u afraid to u commas, lol, just think it'd help the read.. Ok I got joe talkin this pretty easy more consistent better hits.. Man I've seen smirk drop nice on nc u musta rushed this.. Do ur thing man, n joe, ud be a lot better if u touched up in a few areas like ur opener coulda been harder if reworded... Good shit tho yall


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    Re: Smirk 1-3 vs Joe Boston - OPEN FOR VOTES

    Numbers game

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    Opener

    Joe had better misses here, although not great. There is a wording disconnect.

    V/ Joe

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