(0-3)Alphadog vs (1-1)The Infamous[Open For Votes]

[Donald Trump]

Due Dates
Matches set Sunday night.
Check-Ins due Tuesday midnight
Punches due Thursday midnight
Voting concludes Sunday 9pm
(all times pacific)

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Only votes from 1-2 Punch season 23 participants will count.
Non 1-2 punch votes will be allowed as feedback but will not count towards final tally.
Example of an acceptable vote:

Smog n Let in the finals ? Someone loan a punch cos these cats really need one.
I'll hit these faggots w/ so many fly kicks - the new Jordan's 6's'll have a nation wide refund.
-I thought this was cool, at first I thought it was a reach with the punch/kick reference. But I think the Jordan 6/finals reference was cool. I just think the wordin' on this was pretty bad.

Smog wears the pants. He maid ill his bitch but chances of offspring are kinda slim
Unless he wants to see decrease in his genes...every night when Kay's done ironing them
-Nice, I like the maid/bitch work slap that you hit kay with lol. but I don't think you really dissed smog. you kinda big upped him lol.

These faggot fucks ain't felt, it's obvious along the ways some massive luck was dealt...
When all it takes is knuckles to silence letter K.... or anybody tryna grab or touch my belt...
-I think you shoulda spelled out Kay, but other than that I thought this was nice.


I think smog got this. Kay had bad wording. So it was between Letterman and Smog to me. And Letterman didn't really diss Smog with his punch imo.

Vote - Smog

Example of an Unacceptable vote:

v/kid

i thought letter was choppy.. n smogs bar got little choppy toward the end..with saying 'or' twice

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Failure to check in on time will result in loss and battler will be replaced in the battle.
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@alphadog @The Infamous

[The Infamous]

Dead...

[alphadog]

End

[Donald Trump]

Ready for blind drops

[The Infamous]

im sure u ugly ass fuck,no chick giving ass to this chump
if u hear a chick letting 'the dog pound, she was a groupie to daz n kurupt..

[Donald Trump]

@alphadog infamous posted

[alphadog]

This is a Mild Steal if he comin with gun bars i'll leave his Hearth open if hammers suddenly raising
Stop the talk u ain't poppin glocks cuz if we see that Ingot iron, I'll pick up a lump n pummel his face in

[Flying Carcass]

Lmfao bra I can't vote on this

[Not N Nice]

Kind of an easy win... Kind of!

Only setback to inf's bar is the "letting" part kinda destructs tge duality of reading
Smooth concept though
Only setback to alphas bar it's the length takes away from the diss
If the whole concept was strong enough, I could overlook long bar for quality
But... The concepts one of those imo that require swift delivery of the punch
Mvgt infamous

[ILLunatic]

Infamous had an outdated as fuck bar, but it was still a nice jab and actually got me to laugh

Alphadog... You did too much for such a little reward. The punch itself was wack, but e fact that you put so much build up into e set up and the punch made it appear even less impactful

Infamous should get this by a landslide for the overall better attempt.

Vote - The Infamous

[Fresh]

infamous had an ok name play nothing crazy but it connected.


alpha alpha alpha, you still trying to pack to much shit into one punch. Hypothetically IF ingot was pronounced in got (its pronounced in get) u coulda have axed away alot of words here to make this cleaner. This is a complete miss for me.

v/Infamous

[Joe Boston]

alpha man your punch is too stretched man u need to lengthen up ur choice of wording. infamous had a good punch overall good humor factor.

V/Infamous

[Spree]

Cool battle. Infa I lied your concept, seen it used in alpha but your approach was better. Alpha this bar was stretched but waaaay better than ur last two weeks. I liked the name play better than infas dog pound concept. If u dumb it down a bit and make it smoother, less filler bar could be dope.


Vote/alph

[Barcotic]

inf's was on the simple side, a little corny too but not horrible

alphadog surprised me here w/ a pretty good concept. execution was blah but def a good nameplays

v/adog

[Meks.]

Alpha was a little wordy, and also worded strangely, took away from the impact of the punch, the dog pound play was cool and the bar hit well at the end, easy one here vote infamous