I see what ill was going for w/ the current event type punch but the concept as a whole was lacking. weird n a bit soft, not very witty either. not really feeling it
tay's was lackluster, the wp could've been used a hell of a lot better but it was somewhat decent nonetheless
v/taytay
ILLunatic aka banner - wasn't really feeling this, you had a new concept I haven't seen but the way you used it and the execution was off. However I'm glad you actually tried to diss your opponent rather than use some wordplay by itself.
Tay - no matter how many times and different ways I try and pronounce your illustrate wordplay/nameplay it just doesn't register for me. And aside from the wordplay I didn't see any actual punching on your part. You could have easily won this IMO but as of now..
Vote: ILLunatic /:
V.illu/tay couldve won this, strate and trait is kinda a reach
These were both weirdly worded. Uh not too sure who actually won, both were ok.
V mag
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"Ill is straight" is that he can't draw a vote? The illustrate play is played but even if it wasn't, you didn't do it properly. ILL's bar was wordy but it was actually a solid hit. I got ILL winning
v/ILL
Cool battle. Ills bar was smooth with much more aggression and contact. Tats nameplay was a good idea but needed to be worded differently. So I got ILL taking this with the harder and better executed bar
ill was okay but didnt come of to smooth. Felt rushed and it didn't come together as well as it could though.
mag - I though the concept was cool, although the wording on the punch felt like it needed tweaking slightly. Thought it ws better than ill's overall
vote mag
Eh... not really feeling either punch tbh... Ill's just came off too statementish and the setup didn't tie into the punch well... Mag had the name flip but it fell flat to me... i guess I'll give it to PI for a better overall punch in this format... barely lol
10-6 in favor of ILLunatic
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