(2-1)Joe Boston vs (2-1)Fresh Open For Votes!!!

[Donald Trump]

Due Dates
Matches set Sunday night.
Check-Ins due Tuesday midnight
Punches due Thursday midnight
Voting concludes Sunday 9pm
(all times pacific)

Voting
Everyone is required to vote on EVERY battle.
1 vote deduction for every battle link missed.
Failure to meet quota results in 1 week boot.
Failure to meet voting quota twice times results in 2 week boot.
Failure to meet voting quota 3 times results in boot remainder of season/playoffs.
Only votes from 1-2 Punch season 23 participants will count.
Non 1-2 punch votes will be allowed as feedback but will not count towards final tally.
Example of an acceptable vote:

Smog n Let in the finals ? Someone loan a punch cos these cats really need one.
I'll hit these faggots w/ so many fly kicks - the new Jordan's 6's'll have a nation wide refund.
-I thought this was cool, at first I thought it was a reach with the punch/kick reference. But I think the Jordan 6/finals reference was cool. I just think the wordin' on this was pretty bad.

Smog wears the pants. He maid ill his bitch but chances of offspring are kinda slim
Unless he wants to see decrease in his genes...every night when Kay's done ironing them
-Nice, I like the maid/bitch work slap that you hit kay with lol. but I don't think you really dissed smog. you kinda big upped him lol.

These faggot fucks ain't felt, it's obvious along the ways some massive luck was dealt...
When all it takes is knuckles to silence letter K.... or anybody tryna grab or touch my belt...
-I think you shoulda spelled out Kay, but other than that I thought this was nice.


I think smog got this. Kay had bad wording. So it was between Letterman and Smog to me. And Letterman didn't really diss Smog with his punch imo.

Vote - Smog

Example of an Unacceptable vote:

v/kid

i thought letter was choppy.. n smogs bar got little choppy toward the end..with saying 'or' twice

Battle Rules
Punches must be dropped AFTER both participants check in.
Failure to check in on time will result in loss and battler will be replaced in the battle.
NO EXTENSIONS. It's only 1 bar.
NO editing punches after your opponent drops
Biting will result is league/site ban.
Recycling will result in DQ and league ban.

@Joe Boston @Fresh

[Joe Boston]

Check

[Fresh]

check..

[Donald Trump]

Ready for blind drops

[Fresh]

Everyone should have 14 links there are 14 battles

According to Joe we vote on our own battles... shows how smart he isn't
I was so startled he was able to 'Bypass ILL for modspot, I'd be dead if I had a heart condition

[Donald Trump]

@Joe Boston fresh posted

[Joe Boston]

Your all about love and rapping but im the one your bitch refers
U try to flatter a chick with a Roseanne Barr its obvious shes going blind like her

[Joe Boston]

@Magnum P.I. @Fresh I dropped open for votes

[3bet]

good battle here... loving this week so far.

Joe i liked this one from you one of your better bars this season the wording just needed some work but still pretty good man. but damn.. fresh!!!! this was a dope bar.. one of my favourites since joining this league.. loved the bypass/heart condition thing you were workin with the whole bar flowed.. was slick. good work.

good luck to both, sorry joe you did well man but he edged you here bro.

V-fresh

[Coup.]

I liked the personal aspect especially in 2 liner the bypass was a tad played but tied in rather nicely


another current event flip wasted .. no offense but the concept is there ur punches are just all over the place .. ur like a drunk driver behind the wheel stay in 1 fukkin lane


fresh

[Flying Carcass]

Fresh - bypass concept a bit played but you had a cool flip on it, wording ok; wasn't feeling the "how smart he isn't" part but that's besides the point. Pretty good flip executed well and I overall liked this.

Joe Boston - man you had a pretty good concept and wordplay usage to run with but the wording here ruined it tbh, if you would have done shit a bit differently with the concept and reworded everything then you could have easily won. But as of now it doesn't beat fresh's bar.

Vote: Fresher

[Not N Nice]

Lmao, that rose and bar is hot concept imo
Like the way you made it all cohere

Good lil bar to you too Mr.
Only thing is... The tricky/double wordplay of it
(using 'bypass ill' & 'heart condition' but not under "exact" same coordinates)
Hoe you get that^ mvgt Boston for more clarity without sacrificing creativity

[ILLunatic]

Fresh's set up had me laughing as I've been expecting this to come up. The lunch itself was alright conceptually, but the execution felt off here.

Joe Boston, I expected better from you. You took a less than mediocre concept and added a false personal twist to it that just didn't work here.

If I could, I'd vote coup here for actually dissing fresh but considering its Fresh vs Joe Boston, Imma vote fresh simply for his set up... And the fact that he actually tried

Vote - Fresh

[Meks.]

I'd better vote against this faggot fresh, since I purposely do it every battle. Pussy.

Joe - meh, wasn't really feeling it, the wordplay was a basic one I seen what u went for, just wasn't that hard of a hit or attempt for me..

Gaylord - not the best bar really, mainly I think the wording may have been off or... Maybe it just didn't hit that hard, it all worked, and u tied it in well, it just wasn't the hardest hit in the end, but a decent diss.

Vote - frazzled

[Barcotic]

fresh I've seen that bypass concept more than one too many times now, played many

rose an bar was actually decent n made me lol

v/joe bahston