(2-1)iSpaz vs (2-1)Killing Spree[Open For Votes]

[Donald Trump]

Due Dates
Matches set Sunday night.
Check-Ins due Tuesday midnight
Punches due Thursday midnight
Voting concludes Sunday 9pm
(all times pacific)

Voting
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Failure to meet voting quota 3 times results in boot remainder of season/playoffs.
Only votes from 1-2 Punch season 23 participants will count.
Non 1-2 punch votes will be allowed as feedback but will not count towards final tally.
Example of an acceptable vote:

Smog n Let in the finals ? Someone loan a punch cos these cats really need one.
I'll hit these faggots w/ so many fly kicks - the new Jordan's 6's'll have a nation wide refund.
-I thought this was cool, at first I thought it was a reach with the punch/kick reference. But I think the Jordan 6/finals reference was cool. I just think the wordin' on this was pretty bad.

Smog wears the pants. He maid ill his bitch but chances of offspring are kinda slim
Unless he wants to see decrease in his genes...every night when Kay's done ironing them
-Nice, I like the maid/bitch work slap that you hit kay with lol. but I don't think you really dissed smog. you kinda big upped him lol.

These faggot fucks ain't felt, it's obvious along the ways some massive luck was dealt...
When all it takes is knuckles to silence letter K.... or anybody tryna grab or touch my belt...
-I think you shoulda spelled out Kay, but other than that I thought this was nice.


I think smog got this. Kay had bad wording. So it was between Letterman and Smog to me. And Letterman didn't really diss Smog with his punch imo.

Vote - Smog

Example of an Unacceptable vote:

v/kid

i thought letter was choppy.. n smogs bar got little choppy toward the end..with saying 'or' twice

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Failure to check in on time will result in loss and battler will be replaced in the battle.
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Recycling will result in DQ and league ban.

@iSpaz @Killing Spree

[iSpaz]

RB knows you like dick. I would spit in ur face but I'm too class..
..And even if i Spatula wished you had somethin like that in your ass

[Spree]

Check

[Spree]

U'v brought ur boys to an ENDzone, & fags wat ya name rhymes wit
Cos there's no need to watch football & know I-Formation's come wit two guys behind him

[Meks.]

Kinda funny bar from spaz, wp was cool, little reach but it worked, was effective, decent bar.

Spree - lol'd at this. Good set up, decent football flip and it worked well here, cool diss IMO

Vote spree

[ILLunatic]

iSpaz didn't seem to put much effort in to his punch, if any at all. Either underestimated or simply didn't care.

Killing Spree had an alright concept although the execution could have been worded slit lay better to make it hit much harder, overall enough for the win.

Vote - Killing Spree

[alphadog]

RB knows you like dick. I would spit in ur face but I'm too class..
..And even if i Spatula wished you had somethin like that in your ass

This was wack af, dude if ya gonna drop early put some effort in ya shits, wp was a reach like dude, even if I spatula, makes no sense, even if I spat u la wished, blah still don't make sense, there's no direction towards spree, no creativity and spree hates dick the most, hence flippin at chicken nig for postin dic pic lol but w/e


U'v brought ur boys to an ENDzone, & fags wat ya name rhymes wit
Cos there's no need to watch football & know I-Formation's come wit two guys behind him

Wasn't feelin this tbh, rhymes wit/ behind him- I don't really care bout these rhymes but there wack I expect better from u dude, any way bit more creativity here and directed @ spaz, np a stretch tho along w/ the second line, enough for the win

Mvgr spree

[Fresh]

iSpaz w/p didn't work for me. I'd figure it would have to go "i spat you'da" not "spat you la". This punch falls flat for me.

Spree not bad actually. Decent name play here tied in ok. Enough for the win thats for sure.

v/Spree

[Greedy]

Didn't like either tbh. But vote Killin sprees

spaz:
not feeling urs from start to finish. And ur spatula wordplay don't work for me
kill:
urs was more creative. And I liked ur nameplay but something about your execution made me hate ur bar

[Greedy]

Didn't like either tbh. But vote Killin sprees

spaz:
not feeling urs from start to finish. And ur spatula wordplay don't work for me
kill:
urs was more creative. And I liked ur nameplay but something about your execution made me hate ur bar

[Flying Carcass]

Spaz - meh, you based your whole bar on the wordplay you tried using and it didn't work out, the wordplay was kinda forced and weird, had to say it a few times to finally understand where you were going. Seen much better from you bro.

Kissing - actually liked this. Pretty cool bar I'm surprised you had it in you to create something like this. I'm baffled. Cool concept, creative. Nice execution.

Vote: kisser

[Joe Boston]

wordplay from Ispaz was forced and just didn't work. Funny nameplay reference from killing spree hated his setup tho. finisher was executed good.

V/Killing Spree

[Not N Nice]

Spree's bar (nameplay) seems to be a fresh concept imo, but
The delivery of it seems wayyyy too generic and/or played when reading

Only thing I really fault spaz for is that the 'spat you'll a'... Yeah... You already know
It works for a ghetto dialect or w/e but in text it's kinda out of bounds,
But you made it work with the entire concept to still pack a decent diss... & tougher one
Mvgt iSpaz for the best of the garbage... Yeah... Y'all slacked a bit

[Barcotic]

both were dope ass concepts but I also think both were executed poorly tbh, tie ins & wording in general were ehh

I think spaz had the slightly less wordy of the 2 tho

v/ispaz

[Lenox]

iSpaz: Eh, if you're going to come with gay jokes come with more creativity and humor.. This wasn't funny, I didn't understand the word play.. Plus it was probably hella stretched.. But I did like the wording of this bar.

Vs

Killing Spree: two gay jokes this battle..... Well let's just say this was funny as shit and had me cracking up.. The creativity was genuine and unique with the formation/behind him concept even though NFL/football concepts are played.

Vote: Killing Spree for having a more funny punch and being a bit more creative.


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