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    Multiverse

    Flow biometrics that ethics is an accosted atrocity
    Ominously vaulting like apostle's ascending velocity
    Marginally comedies ramble on about Ramadan
    Posturing on the fostering gone in teletrons
    Swelling cerebellums that when Sarah Palin tell them
    Russian bunching on doorsteps ignored, we heckle them
    Speckle the spectacle with pyrotechnicals
    Environs reflecting those who's viably disrespectful
    Complying to directions injecting genuflection
    One ingredient niggas filling up wanting menu stretching
    Then you bettin' a Bedouin sweater sweatin' Federates
    Deeper the probing showing guilt on Confederate letterhead
    What's better said when your dead are the ones better fed
    Like wanting a talented bitch's slob pitch to be wetter head
    Wetter beds etch with cum and slob marks from job starts
    Slam dunking red bulls like John Starks
    See see through peek a boo gowns when hands make palms part
    Masterpiece like Van Goh's art on walls of ramparts
    I'm Banksy, spit canker sores in tanker whores
    Then thank her more than banker boars with hankered scores
    Planking explorers than Moors with elephantiasis
    Elegant like white ice Nike's blurring accelerant spices
    Arresting developments volunteering Tennessee's re engineering
    To Al Jazeer's domineering condescending interfering
    I'm a clearing searing edges of humanity with stalwart calamity
    Rooted with infektion lacking detection like Walmart families
    Can it be the cannabis hidden in canopy's storage spaces
    Forage places that'll have my rattled diction racing...
    Ignition gracing the end like drapes tasting salted airflow
    Resisting the permission to escape making stalking walking very slow.....


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    Re: Multiverse

    Lots of consistency, slant rhymes and multies, pretty cool read... just a nice braggadociery like piece here... The vocab was pretty cool, cool creative language with a nice build up to each line, looks like you were just trying to outdo yourself with each line that came haha .... I'm pretty sure if you did record this it'd be with a heavy accent cos some of those rhymes can only be pulled off with such. Thanks for sharing.... keep at it

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