(0-1)Pistols Pete vs (0-1)The Infamous [Inf Wins]

[Donald Trump]

ODue Dates
Matches set Sunday night.
Check-Ins due Tuesday midnight
Punches due Thursday midnight
Voting concludes Sunday 9pm
(all times pacific)

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Failure to meet voting quota 3 times results in boot remainder of season/playoffs.
Only votes from 1-2 Punch season 23 participants will count.
Non 1-2 punch votes will be allowed as feedback but will not count towards final tally.
Example of an acceptable vote:

Smog n Let in the finals ? Someone loan a punch cos these cats really need one.
I'll hit these faggots w/ so many fly kicks - the new Jordan's 6's'll have a nation wide refund.
-I thought this was cool, at first I thought it was a reach with the punch/kick reference. But I think the Jordan 6/finals reference was cool. I just think the wordin' on this was pretty bad.

Smog wears the pants. He maid ill his bitch but chances of offspring are kinda slim
Unless he wants to see decrease in his genes...every night when Kay's done ironing them
-Nice, I like the maid/bitch work slap that you hit kay with lol. but I don't think you really dissed smog. you kinda big upped him lol.

These faggot fucks ain't felt, it's obvious along the ways some massive luck was dealt...
When all it takes is knuckles to silence letter K.... or anybody tryna grab or touch my belt...
-I think you shoulda spelled out Kay, but other than that I thought this was nice.


I think smog got this. Kay had bad wording. So it was between Letterman and Smog to me. And Letterman didn't really diss Smog with his punch imo.

Vote - Smog

Example of an Unacceptable vote:

v/kid

i thought letter was choppy.. n smogs bar got little choppy toward the end..with saying 'or' twice

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Failure to check in on time will result in loss and battler will be replaced in the battle.
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Voters List
Zelph
Coup
Meks
Alphadog
Pavonia
ILLunatic
Spaz
Fresh
Joe
3bet
Muff
Spree

[Pistols Pete]

Here

[The Infamous]

jjjj

[Donald Trump]

@Pistols Pete @The Infamous this has become a 1 vs 1.. Ready for blind drops

[The Infamous]

when i send shots they not going over heads, direct shit you'll die in seconds
after i pop this bitch i dump 'pistol in the river to hide the evidence..

[ILLunatic]

The Infamous posted @Pistols Pete

[Pistols Pete]

I keep clips talking, they popular among ya chest with rounds
Scatter ya organs no rumor, The In will really be in the crowd

[Flying Carcass]

lol both posted gun bars as expected..

Infamous - not bad, could have used the nameplay a tad bit better but overall this was a pretty decent punch. Wording was ok, nothing bad about it imo. Cool.

Pistols Pet - yours wasnt terrible either, but it was weaker than imfamous' gun bar. the wording and use of concept took away from the maximum amount of impact it could have had. Overall decent attempt, but fell short.

Vote: Infamous

[Coup.]

famous i liked the nameplay gun bar concept it worked well n flowed smoothly

pistol ur bar seemed a little over worded I couldn't really grasp were u were going w it


vote IN

[Meks.]

Tough call here, infamous had a cool nameplay no doubt , and pistol had a pretty good concept IMO .. But it was worded bad and it threw off the impact of the punch for me.. Good concept tho if worded better you'd have won. Infamous was straight to the point, cool little diss.

Vote - in

[alphadog]

when i send shots they not going over heads, direct shit you'll die in seconds
after i pop this bitch i dump 'pistol in the river to hide the evidence

So basically ur going to shoot pistol w/ a pistol and hide both pistols in a river, from the set up this was very predicable and not creativite at all, it was just boring my man tbh


I keep clips talking, they popular among ya chest with rounds
Scatter ya organs no rumor, The In will really be in the crowd

Another gun bar badly worded, wasn't feel the np tbh thought it was wack bro, focus on substance not food


Mvgt infa better bar

[PAVONIA]

Pete, you had a pretty dope concept but the wording and angle you toom was off. Worded correctly it would have hit a lot harder. Infamous, nice punch. Dump the pistol in the river was a nice play man. Well set up and solid punch.

Vote infamous

[ILLunatic]

After reading The Infamous bar, I figured it'd be a no brainier for Pisols Pete to take the win here but he severely dropped the ball. Infamous had a basic name play but it actually was directed towards his opponent and wasn't all that bad. Pistols Pete tried doing a name play as well, which I thought his concept was better but the execution lacked here pretty bad.

Vote - The Infamous

[iSpaz]

- inf this was not bad. It works if your throwing a pistol in the river, but how's throwing someone in the river gonna hide the evidence lol.

- pistol thought was gonna go in with this one. But wasn't feeling it man

V/inf

[Fresh]

Infamous you actually had a cool bar, diggin it.. Like the concept and the name flip was on point. Good shit not much bad to say about this other than the rhyme scheme being off syllables.

PP I get what u were going for but this felt like an unfinished concept, not put together properly. Cool attempt but this fell short imo