(0-2)Alphadog vs (0-2)Lenox [Lenox Wins]

[Donald Trump]

Due Dates
Matches set Sunday night.
Check-Ins due Tuesday midnight
Punches due Thursday midnight
Voting concludes Sunday 9pm
(all times pacific)

Voting
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Failure to meet voting quota twice times results in 2 week boot.
Failure to meet voting quota 3 times results in boot remainder of season/playoffs.
Only votes from 1-2 Punch season 23 participants will count.
Non 1-2 punch votes will be allowed as feedback but will not count towards final tally.
Example of an acceptable vote:

Smog n Let in the finals ? Someone loan a punch cos these cats really need one.
I'll hit these faggots w/ so many fly kicks - the new Jordan's 6's'll have a nation wide refund.
-I thought this was cool, at first I thought it was a reach with the punch/kick reference. But I think the Jordan 6/finals reference was cool. I just think the wordin' on this was pretty bad.

Smog wears the pants. He maid ill his bitch but chances of offspring are kinda slim
Unless he wants to see decrease in his genes...every night when Kay's done ironing them
-Nice, I like the maid/bitch work slap that you hit kay with lol. but I don't think you really dissed smog. you kinda big upped him lol.

These faggot fucks ain't felt, it's obvious along the ways some massive luck was dealt...
When all it takes is knuckles to silence letter K.... or anybody tryna grab or touch my belt...
-I think you shoulda spelled out Kay, but other than that I thought this was nice.


I think smog got this. Kay had bad wording. So it was between Letterman and Smog to me. And Letterman didn't really diss Smog with his punch imo.

Vote - Smog

Example of an Unacceptable vote:

v/kid

i thought letter was choppy.. n smogs bar got little choppy toward the end..with saying 'or' twice

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Voters List
Infamous
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Coup
Pavonia
ILLunatic
Spaz
Fresh
Joe
3bet
Spree
Enbombz
Muff
Meks

[Lenox]

goodbye faggot

[alphadog]

Woof

[ILLunatic]

Ready for Blind Drops

[Lenox]

I've beaten you plenty.. No reason why I shouldn't beat you again



This dudes straight retarded, brain all tangled and caught,
Tie him down on tracks to rearrange his train of thought


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[ILLunatic]

Lenox posted @alphadog

[alphadog]

Bitter hated brat, for Lentiform shape should be placed in the middle a training camp
Geek still rockin baby fat, three jabs'll have'm dazed here's a Forth, Nox little lady flat

[The Infamous]

V.Lenox/Straight forward,hard hitting concept, i really didnt understand where alpha was goin with his punch

[Flying Carcass]

Lenox - Train of thought concept pretty played guy, wording was simple and short which isnt necessarily bad, but with a concept such as the one you used here, you gotta find a better way to flip it and that means switching up some wording. Overall this is meh at best.

alfalfadot - Man your wording was terrible here what the hell lol, you gotta reread your shit before you post to make sure it all makes sense, you attempted some wordplay but it was poorly executed, i wasnt sure what your concept was because you had so much going on, not a good attempt .

Vote: Lenox, not by much. Close battle but pretty weak..

[Coup.]

train of thought schemes were over done when RM was around this was no different just delivered poorly


alpha I didn't understand ur concept or scheme felt like it was all statement no bar


Lenox

[PAVONIA]

Dog, wasnt really feelin this bar bruh. I think you had the right idea, and i get where you were going with it...but thought it came up short. Lenox, you bar was structured a lot better which helped the impact. Cool flip at the end.

Vote Lenox

[ILLunatic]

Lenox - Train of Thought concepts were to death back when that crew still roamed the site. Very outdated but nonetheless a slight jab. Not very direct as a punch but it was alright.

Alphadog was a bit off the wall here for me and I had to reread it a couple times to get where he was trying to go. I get the concept but didn't feel it was executed that well which resulted in a non-existent punch.

Vote Lenox

[iSpaz]

- Lenox this actually wasn't too bad. Liked it.

- alpha there's just too much going on up in here man. Maybe simplify the bars and really try to execute it cleanly

Vote lenox

[Fresh]

Lenox had an outdated train of thought idiom in his punch but Alphadog was trying to use too many wordplays... forth nox lady flat was the forth supposed be like fort? I dunno man this was all over the p lace with no real directionn. You could have taken all the concepts in ur 1-2 punch and made an entire verse out of it.. Simmer that shit down u can't be over complicated its sometimes worse than being too simple.

v/Lenox

[Joe Boston]

wasn't feeling the direction of alphas punch at all it was stretched and the wording was butchered. Lenox played flip but better executed punch

V/Lenox