Coup was worded well. Came off nice, me personally I don't know of any 14th century shield called Pavis, so if I had to look it up I don't like it. How dare you try and make me google something. Not a bad punch tho.
Pav - no parentheses please, I think the dash and itallics were enough.... Could've prolly worded it better, cool idea tho no doubt, concept was put together well.. Punch didn't hit as hard cuz of wording..
Tough call here IMO, don't think pav neededbto explain and coup went with shit that not everyone may know about. Could be a damn toss up but I'd hate to vote a tie, vote coup better overall punch technically speaking.