(2-0)Pavonia vs (2-0)Coup[Coup Wins]

[Donald Trump]

Due Dates
Matches set Sunday night.
Check-Ins due Tuesday midnight
Punches due Thursday midnight
Voting concludes Sunday 9pm
(all times pacific)

Voting
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1 vote deduction for every battle link missed.
Failure to meet quota results in 1 week boot.
Failure to meet voting quota twice times results in 2 week boot.
Failure to meet voting quota 3 times results in boot remainder of season/playoffs.
Only votes from 1-2 Punch season 23 participants will count.
Non 1-2 punch votes will be allowed as feedback but will not count towards final tally.
Example of an acceptable vote:

Smog n Let in the finals ? Someone loan a punch cos these cats really need one.
I'll hit these faggots w/ so many fly kicks - the new Jordan's 6's'll have a nation wide refund.
-I thought this was cool, at first I thought it was a reach with the punch/kick reference. But I think the Jordan 6/finals reference was cool. I just think the wordin' on this was pretty bad.

Smog wears the pants. He maid ill his bitch but chances of offspring are kinda slim
Unless he wants to see decrease in his genes...every night when Kay's done ironing them
-Nice, I like the maid/bitch work slap that you hit kay with lol. but I don't think you really dissed smog. you kinda big upped him lol.

These faggot fucks ain't felt, it's obvious along the ways some massive luck was dealt...
When all it takes is knuckles to silence letter K.... or anybody tryna grab or touch my belt...
-I think you shoulda spelled out Kay, but other than that I thought this was nice.


I think smog got this. Kay had bad wording. So it was between Letterman and Smog to me. And Letterman didn't really diss Smog with his punch imo.

Vote - Smog

Example of an Unacceptable vote:

v/kid

i thought letter was choppy.. n smogs bar got little choppy toward the end..with saying 'or' twice

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Voters List:
ILLunatic
MUFF
Zelph
Alphadog
Joe
Spaz
Fresh
Meks
3bet
Letterman

[PAVONIA]

Check.

[Coup.]

ur 2-1 now

[ILLunatic]

Ready for Blind Drops

[Coup.]

step sister won't work this week yung patawan


ay barc Lemme show u how to talk to these kids


ur concepts are hurendous so u'll be taken out w/ an ease
Pavis a bitch an that 14th century shield couldnt protect the beating ur bout'a receive

[ILLunatic]

Coup. posted @Pavanoia

[PAVONIA]

Nail'em to the cross! Crucifix the Coup so he's stickin to wood...
Pav spit evil, so fuck any Reap-lies if the Grim said that he's good!
(Replies)


3-0

[ILLunatic]

Originally Posted by Coup.
ur concepts are hurendous so u'll be taken out w/ an ease
Pavis a bitch an that 14th century shield couldnt protect the beating ur bout'a receive

Set up was weak but the punch recovered slightly and landed.

Originally Posted by PAVONIA
Nail'em to the cross! Crucifix the Coup so he's stickin to wood...
Pav spit evil, so fuck any Reap-lies if the Grim said that he's good!

Good concept, but didn't feel it was executed as strongly as it could have been. I dont think the Grim was necessary and it took away from the punch.

Very close one here and honestly, it could go either way. Coup's was a decent jab but nothing special. Pav had a dope concept but lacked in execution although the punch still landed. Hard to say here but I'm going to edge to Pav given the fact that it was a bit more outside of the box.

Vote - PAVONIA

[Attack of the Muff]

Coup. First off..very obscure reference W/ the shield. I'm a history buff n 3ven I have never heard of that shield. Luckily 4 u my curiosity cannot be sated so I fkn wiki that shit. Pavise were shields crossbow men used 14th cent. The e on the end concerned me..I thought it cud possibly be pronounced pav eese eh..but nope..Googled that n it's Pav is

So ..success!

I like this line coup


Pavonia. Setup kinda irrelevant

Just crucifix/wood tie ins

N grim reapers opining on txt battLers iono lol

The wp was iffy..tbh

I pronounce it rip plies

But I can see it pronounced ur way as well kinda

The concept in question was weak imhO

I mean come on

Fk any reap lies

Sure abbrv reaper n use the verb form it'll be fine

Nah 5hats forced ..no offense pav

No phonetically but conceptually

V/coup

[Flying Carcass]

First of all I'm beginning to think that it's becoming a trend or it's a curse that everyone is spittin wack against this dude pavilion o

Coup - meh punch, even after I did my research to fully understand the concept and punch it still wasn't good to me, concept was on the weaker side but you get some credit for the nameplay...kinda...overall meh

Pavillion o - I'm getting the feeling that you used to write straight up long bar style in the site you used to battle on. Why? Because you emphasize on the concepts, wordplays, nameplays, and that's considered wack for short bar. Back to your punch, I wasn't feelin it at all really, replies/reap lies/grim reaper, overall not a cool concept to me. And you could have easily won this match yo smh

Vote: coup barely..

[alphadog]

ur concepts are hurendous so u'll be taken out w/ an ease
Pavis a bitch an that 14th century shield couldnt protect the beating ur bout'a receive

Not feeling this, np to simple and bar was too stretched

Nail'em to the cross! Crucifix the Coup so he's stickin to wood...
Pav spit evil, so fuck any Reap-lies if the Grim said that he's good!
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This was weak too like cool concept and creativity gets my vote

Mvgt pavilion o

[Donald Trump]

4 votes

[Joe Boston]

Pavonia expo on wordplays are wack just saying no hate but sensible text battlers will get it. Anyway the wordplay was forced and I just wasn't feeling the execution on the finisher. Coup I felt u had a creative nameplay the concept was cool never seen it before.

V/Coup

[iSpaz]

- coup had a nice reference. Cool bar, if maybe a little simple, I think it could have been executed a little harsher.

- pav, I think there was just too much going on this bar. I liked the concept but sometimes simpler is better.

Vote coup

[Fresh]

Coup decent punch here nothing crazy but I get what u were going for and u worded it decent enough to make it land.

Pav not feeling ur bar so much, the reap lies wordplay sounds right but the way u tried to incorporate it into this just doesn't work.

v/Coup