v.ill/personal hit,i dont wanna call it exposing but he has evidence to back his punch, good battle
v.ill/personal hit,i dont wanna call it exposing but he has evidence to back his punch, good battle
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Cool battle here.
-ill went digging for some info on this. just an ok bar, but the personal makes it hit alot harder.
- fresh had a nice bar as well. Tiny bit wordy, but everything worked. Just seemed a little simole on the concept tho.
Vote ill
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Ills bar was decent. Had the personal ammo but lacked any sting really. Fresh came with a nice hit. Clever, his set up was ok. I got fresh winning this by a landslide
V/fresh
Thought I voted
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I had fresh.
Illunatic went the basic route w/the simple personal but I 5hink he could have strung the syllables to make the line more effective. As is just came off kinda statementishy. Like it could have been worded harder
Fresh was cool this wk. Like the miss ill/bombs wp
V/fresh
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V- Illunatic,
he didnt come as complex, it was more personal though. i just feel like fresh messed up his wording and after reading it a few times it just doesnt read right.. for me anyway.. this battle could go either way but i have ill edging it.
gl 2 both
Fresh, I'll try to take your accent into play lol. Missile isn't "miss I'll" to me. I'll give you the benefit of the doubt tho. You were pretty worded tho, you could've cleaned that up a bit but solid hit. ILL came personal as expected lol his bar was alright with the biting concept. Giving fresh the benefit of the doubt because of his accent, his was more creative and hit harder than ILL's.
v/Fresh
iLLunatic: Ya this was cool.. I loved the wording.. I felt you worded dope with the MULTIS in the opener.. You're punch was solid .. Concept was decent.
Vs
Fresh: concept & wording were awesome I just really hated the execution.. It had 0 affect on me tbh.. With that being said I felt you could of done a lot more with this having fixed you're execution & sting to the punch.
Vote: iLL slightly for having better wording & a way better hard hitting punch
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illunatic went personal w/o an actual concept, which is a complete miss to me. u gotta have something witty or nothing connects
fresh went w/ wordplay. it wasn't very good, neither was the wording.. but the concept was there. DECENT wp at best but enough to take it
v/fresh
I gotta go with fresh here.
As predicted, ILL went personal. It was an ok bar, but just that....ok. not much to it.
Fresh went w/p route which works in his favor because it made his bar hit harder
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ok... Ill used his links effectively... it worked... not the hardest punch but it hit... Fresh... I don't know where you're from but I couldn't get your shit to rhyme lol... decent enough wp but the punch was off cuz of the detraction from rhyming...
vote Ill
I'm gonna have to go iLL here for the simple fact that freshns wordplay was a ,it's. Missill isn't miss I'll. ILL came personal and had an alright punch, a jab and that was enough for me. MVGT iLL
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