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    L.L.L. Week 01 -jonny blaze vs king soul (JOHNNY BLAZE WINS)

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    Re: L.L.L. Week 01 -jonny blaze vs king soul

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    Re: L.L.L. Week 01 -jonny blaze vs king soul

    Check.

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    Re: L.L.L. Week 01 -jonny blaze vs king soul

    Soup.

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    Re: L.L.L. Week 01 -jonny blaze vs king soul

    You've earned a custom title! Got you buying replicas while I lay thee SMACKDOWN,
    making sure you reach Rock Bottom and laugh while the referee hits the three count.
    Leave you brutalized and stranded, strike you with venom like I'm a king cobra,
    watch as you wither away like the cartoon in your avatar you ignorantly throw up.
    I'll butcher your family and leave it a mystery, have authors talk about it in literature,
    show up at your funeral like a poltergeist and slaughter your friends like it's Sinister.
    I know you're still in school so guess I'm a bully, watch as I punk out this virgin,
    spending everyday of summer on a rap forum thinking it'll turn him into a wordsmith.
    Ten bars and I shouldn't quit here, I should convince you to write a suicide letter,
    by the time that it's said and done maybe the next life will help you write better.

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    Re: L.L.L. Week 01 -jonny blaze vs king soul

    10 lines about an infamous
    Biting faggot.


    He hit me up with a collab, my verse hurt him literally,
    I Said write 'rhymes that r dope'... in other words his search history,
    U weren't even sneaky about it, it's like u lost all ur rhythm,
    I heard of over bite.. But not it having a direct result in autism,
    That sig has people confused, obviously this guys a mess,
    'returning to the throne', I Didn't realize there's archives on who bit lines the best,
    U were jealous of every IP member, it was a forceful sign,
    Then it got weird.. He started biting 143 a 143 times,
    I feel bad for the heads that got bit from, I really can't take this,
    Even though everyone hates u.. Just know u steal the greatest



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    Re: L.L.L. Week 01 -jonny blaze vs king soul

    This was pretty close, but I'm going with King Soul for creativity.

    King- Your first couplet didn't have a multisyllabic rhyme for the first punchline, sort of weak at that, alot of people do the "You've earned a custom title" thing. The sinister line was one of my favorites, fact is you was just so much more diverse in attacking your opponent in different ways. You truly tried to destroy his reputation on this site.

    Jonny Blaze- Here's the problem I have with your verse; you focused all of your wordplay and punches towards his biting. Wasn't feeling search history, steal/still play was obvious. You were better lyrically, but this is a battle and punchlines is a huge part of that. Some of your plays were played out n shit, but you woulda won if you would've found other angles.
    @King Soul @Jonny Blaze .

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    Re: L.L.L. Week 01 -jonny blaze vs king soul(Open for VOTES)

    You've earned a custom title! Got you buying replicas while I lay thee SMACKDOWN,
    making sure you reach Rock Bottom and laugh while the referee hits the three count.
    THIS WAS A WEAK OPENER IMO, PLUS THE REFERENCE. IS OUTDATED.

    Leave you brutalized and stranded, strike you with venom like I'm a king cobra,
    watch as you wither away like the cartoon in your avatar you ignorantly throw up.
    EHH. THIS COULDA BEEN BETTER. CAME OFF BLAND THO

    I'll butcher your family and leave it a mystery, have authors talk about it in literature,
    show up at your funeral like a poltergeist and slaughter your friends like it's Sinister.
    SETUP WAS NICE, BUT THE PUNCH READS LIKE A STATEMENT MORE THAN A PUNCHLINE

    I know you're still in school so guess I'm a bully, watch as I punk out this virgin,
    spending everyday of summer on a rap forum thinking it'll turn him into a wordsmith.
    SEE ABOVE

    Ten bars and I shouldn't quit here, I should convince you to write a suicide letter,
    by the time that it's said and done maybe the next life will help you write better.
    SEE ABOVE


    Vs


    He hit me up with a collab, my verse hurt him literally,
    I Said write 'rhymes that r dope'... in other words his search history,
    THIS WAS NICE. GOOD OPENER

    U weren't even sneaky about it, it's like u lost all ur rhythm,
    I heard of over bite.. But not it having a direct result in autism,
    THIS COULDA BEEN NICE TOO WITH BETTER WORDING. BUT STILL GOOD

    That sig has people confused, obviously this guys a mess,
    'returning to the throne', I Didn't realize there's archives on who bit lines the best,
    UR OD'ING ON BITER LINES BRO

    U were jealous of every IP member, it was a forceful sign,
    Then it got weird.. He started biting 143 a 143 times,
    SEE ABOVE

    I feel bad for the heads that got bit from, I really can't take this,
    Even though everyone hates u.. Just know u steal the greatest
    greatest
    SEE ABOVE

    pretty evenly matched battle. I got lenox takin this. His bsrs had more impact.
    Soul: most ur joints were statements.
    Lenox: u od'ed on bite lines.

    Vote lenox
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    Re: L.L.L. Week 01 -jonny blaze vs king soul(Open for VOTES)

    Blaze had a almost good line
    Soul had all bad lines

    v/Blaze
    Not Impressed

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    Re: L.L.L. Week 01 -jonny blaze vs king soul(Open for VOTES)

    Nothing

    I wasn't feeling anything from ur verse. It was all OK wording with no punchlines lol.

    Vs

    U weren't even sneaky about it, it's like u lost all ur rhythm,
    I heard of over bite.. But not it having a direct result in autism,
    That sig has people confused, obviously this guys a mess,
    'returning to the throne', I Didn't realize there's archives on who bit lines the best

    Those lines were aite. Autism was lulz and return to the throne was nice.

    V. Lenox

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    Re: L.L.L. Week 01 -jonny blaze vs king soul(Open for VOTES)

    king iw asnt feelin to much, u came off bland/generic nothing was attacking lenox tbh. id like to see yiu get mroe aggressive and personal man. lenox u had the personals, u over did it with them for sure. overbite could have been way better then your verse lost steam towards the end., but u put together enough to edge the win.

    v/jblaze

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    Re: L.L.L. Week 01 -jonny blaze vs king soul(Open for VOTES)

    write rhymes that are dope was lotb. vote jb

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    Re: L.L.L. Week 01 -jonny blaze vs king soul (Open for Votes)

    Aye I felt similar..This battle wasn't very good...although I thought u both could have done better I think Johnny blaze wad trying s bit too hard and none of hid concepts were coming off correctly whereas king soul had issues with wording...I just enjoyed his approach more and thought j blaze needed to edit some of his shit...anyways...

    Vote//king soul

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    Re: L.L.L. Week 01 -jonny blaze vs king soul (Open for Votes)

    Soul I wasn't feelin any of your punches.. Gotta get more creative and make them actually hit. Everything came off as a statement with no actual punch.

    Johnny Blaze I'm surpriused u actually had a cpl decent bars..

    He hit me up with a collab, my verse hurt him literally,
    I Said write 'rhymes that r dope'... in other words his search history,
    U weren't even sneaky about it, it's like u lost all ur rhythm,
    I heard of over bite.. But not it having a direct result in autism,

    You're getting better keep at it

    v/Lenox

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