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gunshots draw too much noise son, s'take aim wit the aero instead
neck-shots a no brainer.. cuz one crossbow Daryl still leave em Walking Dead
Your girl rode dick,
breathing all hard on me, she tried not to scream but you're no damn comparison
Way she had her hand over her mouth with a nigga under her breath's more embarrassin' than Andrew Harrison
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Chicken actually surprised me here... Although his word choice for wordplay was slightly iffy, it still came together and landed a decent punch. As far as Aero's punch, I'm not sure if I'm missing something but I didn't feel it had the impact that I was expecting. Very big upset here but I have to edge it to Chicken....
vote - Chicken Nigglet
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Chicken
gunshots draw too much noise son, s'take aim wit the aero instead
neck-shots a no brainer.. cuz one crossbow Daryl still leave em Walking Dead
Nice name play an setup in the first line the nameplay in the second line was kinda pushing is had to slow it down to make it work overall nice punch
Aero
Your girl rode dick,
breathing all hard on me, she tried not to scream but you're no damn comparison
Way she had her hand over her mouth with a nigga under her breath's more embarrassin' than Andrew Harrison
In all Bar seems a lil forced and stretch just a tab bit decent filler in the first line not really a punch at all in this bar
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gunshots draw too much noise son, s'take aim wit the aero instead
neck-shots a no brainer.. cuz one crossbow Daryl still leave em Walking Dead
Ok I'm diggin the creativity here but the wording is all over the place, first of all aero/arrow didn't work pronunciation wise, and is not really addressing aero or dissing him, who's Daryl meant to be here lol, good concept and tbh the set-up was better then the last line and that killed any impact, could've been dope tho
breathing all hard on me, she tried not to scream but you're no damn comparison
Way she had her hand over her mouth with a nigga under her breath's more embarrassin' than Andrew Harrison
Holy stretched, ok where do I start right there's no direction towards chicken here tbh simile killed it along with the wording, not very creativite, flow was good that it really
Mvgt chicken for creativity and directly attacking aero kinda
chicken ur attempt was cool just didn't come across to hard hitting
aero ur bar was dope all around an definitely current
aero
Aero good attempt at the concept and current event but ur wording was stretched and the execution was off. Chicken good flip nice direct punch wording was a little off also but u displayed ur punch better.
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Kinda tough
Aero- had a nice punch but was set up badly, didn't flow well and seemed kinda forced
Nig- good set up and punch was good but yours also seemed forced. But for better structure I give u the W
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Chickens bar was sloppy as fuck. Wording sucked balls... Donkey balls and the execution was even worse.
Aero's was garbage & stretched as fuck, IMO and really didn't do much for me.
I vote a DRAW.
Both were equally horrible.
v- aero..
he just delievered it better and it was fresh boi i felt chicken was just tryna do too many things at once.. goodluck to both
Chicken nigglet actualy surprised me here.. Take aim aith aero / arrow instead - no brainer / dare 'll leave him walkin dead... I liked this bar not gonna lie.
Aero I liked your concept but that shits stretched beyond all of fuck. Even if it wasn't stretched tho hard to say if you woulda got this.
I've gotta give this to checken
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