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Infekted Penz
The Birth Of Creation
Ready for blind drops
This dude no showed me in audio years ago, and i could use a bar from that verse and still cover the mic in his blood
So fuck'em.... Cuz when he recycles that just means he'll suffer thru his fuckin period twice in a month
Bitch
Poor meks, in the sheets ya bitch two 'tire'd n can't stand 2b by u
But wit me she stay huffying taking dick n clit she on a bi cycle
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Infekted Penz
The Birth Of Creation
I didn't really like neither one of these IMO they were both worded horribly, meks used a period line n pp wp was off to me... In no guess I got pp fa a better concept here..
Vote pp
This dude no showed me in audio years ago, and i could use a bar from that verse and still cover the mic in his blood
So fuck'em.... Cuz when he recycles that just means he'll suffer thru his fuckin period twice in a month
Not feelin this bar it too wordy and basic, all I can say really
Poor meks, in the sheets ya bitch two 'tire'd n can't stand 2b by u
But wit me she stay huffying taking dick n clit she on a bi cycle
This was even worse tbh, ok a bit creative I suppose still a soft battle
Mvgt no one, its a draw
Both concepts were ok, but Meks executed it better. Thought the lines were slightly run-on sentences but the scheme ended up causing the damage. Pete, you had an ok bar but really didnt word it correctly to heighten the impact.
Vote meks
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I didn't like Meks bar at all. It was stretched as fuck and period concepts are way too generic.
Pistol Pete I get what u were going for but two tired is a joke I heard in 8th grade before I even knew of rap battles and bi cycle is forced wordplay. I feel you tied your shit in together to make a harder hitting punch tho, so with that being said
v/PP
meks
This dude no showed me in audio years ago, and i could use a bar from that verse and still cover the mic in his blood
So fuck'em.... Cuz when he recycles that just means he'll suffer thru his fuckin period twice in a month
nice setup solid punch just kinda strectched as well
Pistol
Poor meks, in the sheets ya bitch two 'tire'd n can't stand 2b by u
But wit me she stay huffying taking dick n clit she on a bi cycle
After reviewing your bar i was looking for multies or an adjacent rhyme scheme but there isn't one nice fillers NO punch
v/meks
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Meks punch was horrid. Very stretched, super wordy and the concept was so basic it was boring. Definitely expected more here but then again, Pistols Pete didn't do much better. I get the concept, but the execution was far off here. Two tired bicycle could have been executed better although I doubt it would have had much of an impact for a punch. Very weak battle but I have to edge it to Pistols Pete by the thinest of hairs...
vote - Pistols Pete
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lolll
both had very similar concepts, kind of played but one was just cleaner n made more sense than the other
v/meks
So this was a different read here. Meks bar was stretched to all god but I was feelin the punch. Maybe should have tried to reword the personal in there. Pistol Pete's bar was soft imo. Nothing to harsh at all really. So I'm giving my vote to meks
Not sure what to say on these bars man. Both need some restructuring. Pete had a kind of funny bar, could have been worded much better. Meks said a bunch of shit, got kind of personal, had more direction I guess
Vote meks.
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