hoe frost...

[Endeva.]

Frost, what's this nonsense about you spraying Tecs...
Everyone knows all this fool sprays is saliva at best
Yea he tries for a rep, but gets denied every step...
'Steven Hawkins' without his brains, just the body that's left
So wind ya neck in, it's stretched, 'tit just met his match
There's a first time for everything... I've never Diss'd a giraffe
'could list what ya lack but that'd stack, easier naming the positive
Which'd read like this, 'H.I.V' and that's basically it...
...from the cock in his orifice when he's being a bitch
proving this... it's not just RB where the name fits
Just admit it... you only Endeva to measure up, not a pro
A name's just a name yo, go home and come back when you've grown
I'd show him the ropes, then tie one round the kids throat...
Throw it over an Oak...
...so he's close to greatness like on RB when he chokes
you're overexposed, out of focus, and def' not a Pro
If skills were money, you'd be homeless, broke, out in the cold
about to be told, DEV just built a house out of gold...
...right on top of the shack that you own
I'm bold, and underlined, in italic, cause I've climbed up the ladder...
...Is having no HOF drops really starting to matter?
'should be 'faux' not 'pro', according to these stats yo
If you wanna act, take a class, don't claim you can rap bro
What's it like to at last know... your learning's not finished
Does it burn having less skill than... a white dude who's British?


[ill get some links soon]

[Emily]

What's it like to at last know... your learning's not finished
Does it burn having less skill than... a white dude who's British?

He gave his diss verse the flick. King PF ain't so slick
Got whipped by a Pom and an Aussie chick

[Donald Trump]

Nah

[OG Maestro]

I'm unbeatable. One bar beats this entire verse

Murdered two MCs & left no TRACKS, but it still sounded like an album

EGO FOR DAYS lmaooo

Nah

Watch me work.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...King-PF-Part-I

[Venom]

DEV can do much better than this. It's almost as if he didn't try much, actually i'm hoping that's the case. Although i don't know why he'd put so little effort into it. This certainly doesn't stack up to frost's verse, not that frost had that dope of a verse but his had two or three creative lines and this had none. All of them were pretty light for the most part but...and i ain't tryna hate or anything cuz i ain't the battle type myself...i ain't sayin i can do better in this department but that doesn't mean as a viewer i don't know what's dope and what's not. I know the difference.

[Donald Trump]

This wasn't that bad, the only issue I had was that you're basically just talking shit while just rhyming the last two words. Lol normally the set up, is a set up to the following line you just had shit talking in the first line followed by some irrelevant shit talking in the second line. You had some cool punches though, a lot of it was played but you don't battle so there's no way you knew that. It's like I tell the newbies the way you're forming your punch and thought process is good, you just have to bring some freshness with it. For example the Hawkins line you could've set it up like, leave you paralyzed with the tek (gun talk I know lol but this is just as an example) but with that set up then the Stephen Hawkins lines becomes relevant cuz you mentioned being paralyzed in the set up. Overall pretty cool read, entertaining.

[Emily]

I'm unbeatable. One bar beats this entire verse
EGO FOR DAYS lmaooo

LOL @ this. Don't you mean years? I doubt there's a start or finish to your Ego Professor.

It's obvious this is a light hearted diss.
Amusing and relevant to the situation.
Dev could have come harder, without a doubt, but I think he just keyed this up quickly.
And for what it was, it was cool.

[Endeva.]

just filled in 20 mins while having my dinner...

...call it a warm up

[Truth Iscariot]

I hope it's a warm up. Though DEV I will say some of this was funny, I liked the act/rap bit. The Steven hawkings shit I thought was dope. Your flow wasn't as good as on other pieces but I know how meticulous you can be and in saying you did this in 20 mins, it shows. I hope your next verse has that hell fire like you usually do

[Endeva.]

im just not a battler, haven't got the patience to come up with punch's, set-ups blah blah, just filling time... just for fun

[OG Maestro]

LOL @ this. Don't you mean years? I doubt there's a start or finish to your Ego Professor.

It's obvious this is a light hearted diss.
Amusing and relevant to the situation.
Dev could have come harder, without a doubt, but I think he just keyed this up quickly.
And for what it was, it was cool.

NAH, THERE IS NO END. But a true genius egomaniac such as myself recognizes that in order to remain as King my ego must humble itself, knowing that tomorrow is not promised -- THEREFORE, my ego survives by the day as strong as a million titanium diamond-encrusted shields clustered together.
__________________________________________________ _____

Also, yo I should definitely give you props for this

Yea he tries for a rep, but gets denied every step...
'Steven Hawkins' without his brains, just the body that's left

Great rhyme scheme here, although Toretto is absolutely on point about incorporating relevance to Stephen Hawking
ALTHOUGH, I think the 'brains' kinda compensates whether it was intentional or not.
Think about it, "without his brains" could denote that I am not intelligent & I'm Steven Hawkins -- the body that's left =/= You killed me & that's why my brains are missing.
SO, the bar worked in my opinion but something revolving around Hawking's condition would have been killer.
The rest was alright. But this stood out to me as something with promise & a good execution but not maximized execution.

just filled in 20 mins while having my dinner...

...call it a warm up

20 MINUTES? MUTHAFUCKA I MADE MINE IN 20 TOO ; )
I'll be damned if I spend an hour on a diss verse hell nawwww
better get ya game up my dude

stay tuned for round 2

[Endeva.]

ah why not lol...

[Jukon]

Links

[Endeva.]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...-a-Ghost-Rider
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...772-Zappin-Ego

[PAVONIA]

Thought this was some aggressive shit bruh....real aggression and thats kinda my style too. The proper wording like that gives the whole verse a fresh feel. The beginning was a solid way to set the tone of the entire piece. Really enjoyed it. In some spots a few lines seemed like "statment" type punches with no flip of a concept but besides that....tough verse man. Nice drop.