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Thread: King PF - Part I

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    King PF - Part I

    Let's start it from scratch, I'm feeling like Grandmaster Flash
    My DEVeloped clips take PICS, I don't have to rap with hands
    I dance & laugh, these niggas ain't the Truth in the booth
    All I hear are lies, when I spit it's a fountain used for the youth
    Iscariot is fuckin' with Jesus, I'll crucify his neck with loose chains
    DEVastated cause he'll never see me coming like a mood change
    To light these niggas up, I don't even gotta go get the burner,
    When one uppercut gives a Crimson Chin worse than Timmy Turner
    But, let's see what this chopper does between their oculars
    Crew keep bodies popping up, there is nobody stopping us
    Talk shit?
    I'll make Dev digest his misplaced neck when I'm spraying the TEC
    Lean into him, real close, then tell him to "say it with his chest"
    Truth says he's the King of Kings -- YOU KNOW you lied, dude
    I'll send shots, you'll take Cover, Girl might just wanna sign you
    All I spy is DEVious rappers who try to act tough on the mic
    They bluff when they write,
    I'll make these boys Crack under pressure like I'm fuckin' with White
    I'm a pimp, please, I don't compete with people that I've been beat
    But, I'll make 'em hand the towel in again like we're at a swim meet
    These cats scared shitless, sittin' shook; dumbfounded by the outcome
    Murdered two MCs & left no TRACKS, but it still sounded like an album
    It ain't shit to put a knife to the brain & end a life for a lame
    Truth could murder me -- when pigs fly...
    But then again, that works.. if his wife decides to ride a plane

    EGO!!!!!!!!! BLAAATTTTT!!!!

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    Re: King PF - Part I

    @Endeva aka DEV @Truth Iscariot

    I forgot to tag yo lol

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    Re: King PF - Part I

    Quote Originally Posted by Professor Frost View Post
    Let's start it from scratch, I'm feeling like Grandmaster Flash
    My DEVeloped clips take PICS, I don't have to rap with hands
    Referencing yourself to the likes of grandmaster flash would be a pretty big statement in hip hop and a risky one at that.
    I don't think you'll reap any sort of consequence, good or bad...here...but in audio you'd have drawn some attention to yourself with that line. I don't really see how "DEVeloped" is a creative reference or diss to dev in any way. I mean...idk...i get that it's supposed to be some sort of reference to dev but...it's light weight to be honest. Mostly, this bar just has flow to it but not a lot of weight to it in terms of diss or otherwise. It was ok.


    I dance & laugh, these niggas ain't the Truth in the booth
    All I hear are lies, when I spit it's a fountain used for the youth
    Meh

    Iscariot is fuckin' with Jesus, I'll crucify his neck with loose chains
    DEVastated cause he'll never see me coming like a mood change
    Again, referencing dev but i don't find it to be in a creative way at all. The mood change line was ok.


    To light these niggas up, I don't even gotta go get the burner,
    When one uppercut gives a Crimson Chin worse than Timmy Turner
    Meh

    But, let's see what this chopper does between their oculars
    Crew keep bodies popping up, there is nobody stopping us
    This is the first bad bar

    Talk shit?
    I'll make Dev digest his misplaced neck when I'm spraying the TEC
    Lean into him, real close, then tell him to "say it with his chest"
    I liked the initial first line minus the tec reference and i disliked the ending line.

    Truth says he's the King of Kings -- YOU KNOW you lied, dude
    I'll send shots, you'll take Cover, Girl might just wanna sign you
    lol

    All I spy is DEVious rappers who try to act tough on the mic
    They bluff when they write,
    I'll make these boys Crack under pressure like I'm fuckin' with White
    ^This was the first semi creative line i've seen the ending line here.
    The Devious thing don't do it for me.


    I'm a pimp, please, I don't compete with people that I've been beat
    But, I'll make 'em hand the towel in again like we're at a swim meet
    Decent

    These cats scared shitless, sittin' shook; dumbfounded by the outcome
    Murdered two MCs & left no TRACKS, but it still sounded like an album
    I like this bar. Good.

    It ain't shit to put a knife to the brain & end a life for a lame
    Truth could murder me -- when pigs fly...
    But then again, that works.. if his wife decides to ride a plane
    This last bit was dope.

    EGO!!!!!!!!! BLAAATTTTT!!!!
    One Two Three.
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    Re: King PF - Part I

    Quote Originally Posted by Venom View Post
    One Two Three.
    1
    I think you broke down each bar with justice, I feel the same for all of them except the first bar.
    Let's start it from SCRATCH -- Grandmaster...FLASH.
    These CLIPS, take PICS --
    It's a bar taking the "Flash" of Grandmaster Flash & playing it into a gun's 'clip' DEVELOPING 'pics'(pictures) when you fire it.
    The 'scratch' is the movement of the finger when you go to fire the weapon of choice.
    In my opinion, it's a dope bar but to each his own.

    Also, the DEV-(suffix) scheme was just a visual effect to bring DEV relevance without actually wasting a syllable to type his name. It'd be weak if it was meant for punchline nameplay

    Yeahhhhhhhhh

    THANKS FOR THE READ MOTHERFUCKER!!!!!

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    Re: King PF - Part I

    Yo this was a solid diss Prof....you fired shots at all angles and came wit some original barz. Enjoyed the ending and how you kept the pressure on throughout the verse..

    Fav barz:
    Iscariot is fuckin' with Jesus, I'll crucify his neck with loose chains
    DEVastated cause he'll never see me coming like a mood change
    To light these niggas up, I don't even gotta go get the burner,
    When one uppercut gives a Crimson Chin worse than Timmy Turner

    Lol nice

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    Re: King PF - Part I

    After the Crimson chin I was waiting for the Mary poppins sweeper guy
    Spin off... It's so awesome you can write gangster or pretty... You're my fave!!!! LoL
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    Re: King PF - Part I

    Quote Originally Posted by A Disciple View Post
    After the Crimson chin I was waiting for the Mary poppins sweeper guy
    Spin off... It's so awesome you can write gangster or pretty... You're my fave!!!! LoL
    ProFro has fans

    Seriously though man you popped some good shots, I feel the reasoning behind not dropping DEVs name full out. Also I dig your Grandmaster line after your explanation but in saying that maybe could have been worded better. Either way, good to see you popping shots back

    AI

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    Re: King PF - Part I

    next freepost will be the reason this thread gets closed.

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