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E tha real
Enbombz
12 lines. 48 hours. Get votes in. Goodluck
G'luck.
You ain't droppin dope, punches got no hope they feeble
If i see E grippin the belt, his other hands holdin the needle,
Saw E trying to Drop I.Q, Bombz happy to get it started,
Wit just one hard hit E'll go from half wit to fully retarded
It's already started, as far as his insult game, this nerds lame
Let me guess, you'll drop Enbombz like some white guy_______<insert name
I here you preachin you a somebody, but just ask around,
We don't wanna here an E Sermon unless Reg is in the background
How that sound! Ya wack clown, Lets look at facts now,
After the crown but going against a king? this faggot backed down
That said^^^ Been busy so glancing front lines my only scope on this guy,
I see the deal, chose an ironic name coz "E Tha Real" a running joke on this site.
Expo's -
Dissed IQ in the cypher
Def squad was redmam (reggie noble), eric sermon and keith murrey.
Ducked kingox
Told to fuck off, jump off & get off the damn drugsOriginally Posted by KingOx
Ur callouts see the birdman more than michael keaton fanclub
Before you emerge as a threat, i'll rip this disgrace
If ur front lines dark horse? then Katy Perrys hits are safe
hmm preserving your corpse is something i might end on
But tell your mummify care after this, you'll truly be embalmbed
Burn this fanboy the minute you think your bigger
you'll come out on top...Cause your ashes wont sink in the river
Explained punches; now its a fact your in trouble
Lines got such a minor feel, they offer a hardhat & shovel
King wanted all my points & was sort of a pest bra
But WTF @ i pushed the King aside & battled his court jester
Enbombz: Insert name (Idk I thought this was pretty cool lol).
VS
E Tha Real: Minor Feel.
Overall: This was a very weak battle tbh.. Enbombz actually has potential imo but his misses were ok but not as good as e's misses.. The fact that their quotes were both tied was quite embarrassing but e came harder with the misses..
Vote: E Tha Real
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You ain't droppin dope, punches got no hope they feeble
If i see E grippin the belt, his other hands holdin the needle,
Saw E trying to Drop I.Q, Bombz happy to get it started,
Wit just one hard hit E'll go from half wit to fully retarded
I like it...
It's already started, as far as his insult game, this nerds lame
Let me guess, you'll drop Enbombz like some white guy_______<insert name
Funny, (jus don't drop my name in there, yo
I here you preachin you a somebody, but just ask around,
We don't wanna here an E Sermon unless Reg is in the background
idk what that means...
How that sound! Ya wack clown, Lets look at facts now,
After the crown but going against a king? this faggot backed down
Niice...
That said^^^ Been busy so glancing front lines my only scope on this guy,
I see the deal, chose an ironic name coz "E Tha Real" a running joke on this site.
nice one...
Told to fuck off, jump off & get off the damn drugs
Ur callouts see the birdman more than michael keaton fanclub
Before you emerge as a threat, i'll rip this disgrace
If ur front lines dark horse? then Katy Perrys hits are safe
too much reliance on pop culture...use more of yourself...
hmm preserving your corpse is something i might end on
But tell your mummify care after this, you'll truly be embalmbed
Burn this fanboy the minute you think your bigger
you'll come out on top...Cause your ashes wont sink in the river
nope.
Explained punches; now its a fact your in trouble
Lines got such a minor feel, they offer a hardhat & shovel
clever
King wanted all my points & was sort of a pest bra
But WTF @ i pushed the King aside & battled his court jester
I like how you set this up, but the wording needs to be refined to be of maximum effect
V/Endbombz, the last line solidified it for me
New to the site so I might miss a little context but here goes.
You ain't droppin dope, punches got no hope they feeble
If i see E grippin the belt, his other hands holdin the needle,
I liked this, nice flip and good delivery.
Saw E trying to Drop I.Q, Bombz happy to get it started,
Wit just one hard hit E'll go from half wit to fully retarded
Not bad, still some cleverness without the explanation.
It's already started, as far as his insult game, this nerds lame
Let me guess, you'll drop Enbombz like some white guy_______<insert name
Okay, might be missing some history here or something.
I here you preachin you a somebody, but just ask around,
We don't wanna here an E Sermon unless Reg is in the background
Yeah decent line here. Hear*...sorry.
How that sound! Ya wack clown, Lets look at facts now,
After the crown but going against a king? this faggot backed down
Okay I guess thats a personal, not a super creative flip but okay.
That said^^^ Been busy so glancing front lines my only scope on this guy,
I see the deal, chose an ironic name coz "E Tha Real" a running joke on this site.
Not a huge fan of this closer but I could be missing something.
VS.
Told to fuck off, jump off & get off the damn drugs
Ur callouts see the birdman more than michael keaton fanclub
Alright decent opener.
Before you emerge as a threat, i'll rip this disgrace
If ur front lines dark horse? then Katy Perrys hits are safe
Okay.
hmm preserving your corpse is something i might end on
But tell your mummify care after this, you'll truly be embalmbed
Okay good nameplay, made me realize how clever enbombz name is too
Burn this fanboy the minute you think your bigger
you'll come out on top...Cause your ashes wont sink in the river
Okay decent flip of the out on top phrase.
Explained punches; now its a fact your in trouble
Lines got such a minor feel, they offer a hardhat & shovel
I like this line because I'm not a huge fan of explained punches even though I kind of needed it in some cases in this battle. Liked the wordplay.
King wanted all my points & was sort of a pest bra
But WTF @ i pushed the King aside & battled his court jester
Alright decent closer.
Vote: E The Real
Pretty good battle.
Punches:tie
Personals:Bomb
Flow:tie
Multies:tie
Creativity:tie
Fav Bars:
Explained punches; now its a fact your in trouble
Lines got such a minor feel, they offer a hardhat & shovel
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It's already started, as far as his insult game, this nerds lame
Let me guess, you'll drop Enbombz like some white guy_______<insert name
v/ BOMBS..both solid n alot of good trys that could of been better but both have the right idea n direction keep it up guys
You ain't droppin dope, punches got no hope they feeble
If i see E grippin the belt, his other hands holdin the needle,
Ok. Fake personals are hard to avoid but the take away from your posts..
Saw E trying to Drop I.Q, Bombz happy to get it started,
Wit just one hard hit E'll go from half wit to fully retarded
Cool. I like how you use your set-ups effectively
It's already started, as far as his insult game, this nerds lame
Let me guess, you'll drop Enbombz like some white guy_______<insert name
idk wasn't feeling this tbh. you name-played yourself trying to predict one of his bars.. its like a wak attempt to be b-rabbit from 8 mile and I thought it was corny
I here you preachin you a somebody, but just ask around,
We don't wanna here an E Sermon unless Reg is in the background
safe name-play. nice jab
How that sound! Ya wack clown, Lets look at facts now,
After the crown but going against a king? this faggot backed down
ok personal
That said^^^ Been busy so glancing front lines my only scope on this guy,
I see the deal, chose an ironic name coz "E Tha Real" a running joke on this site.
the guy/site rhyme was a stretch.
vs
Told to fuck off, jump off & get off the damn drugs
Ur callouts see the birdman more than michael keaton fanclub
ok
Before you emerge as a threat, i'll rip this disgrace
If ur front lines dark horse? then Katy Perrys hits are safe
wording was off
hmm preserving your corpse is something i might end on
But tell your mummify care after this, you'll truly be embalmbed
reaching
Burn this fanboy the minute you think your bigger
you'll come out on top...Cause your ashes wont sink in the river
weak set up. could have been a nice bar. just "ok" as is
Explained punches; now its a fact your in trouble
Lines got such a minor feel, they offer a hardhat & shovel
"minor" wordplay has been done plenty in hip-hop. not creative
King wanted all my points & was sort of a pest bra
But WTF @ i pushed the King aside & battled his court jester
kinda soft but ok as a closer I guess
vote: enbombz for consistency. Close battle as I feel these two are at about the same level right now, JMO.
En had a cool opener and the rest of his verse just consisted of jabs. E the bird line had potential but the man portion of it ruined the punch for me as it really didnt fit in to what you were just trying to say and messed up the as well. Thought the explained punches set up was a feed since this was his first battle but then you went on to use a minor wp that has been done to death. In the end i felt en took this due to the fact his verse was more personal while e kept the insults generic and had some misses. V~> enbombz
Bomb - opener was nice, reg noble could have been better. King was nice..
Vs
E - dark horse, ashes,...
Bombs had some misses here. His closer was wack as fuck tbh. But his misses were stronger. E had two
Dope lines but his misses were played tbh. I've seen better from e.
Vote bombs for more quotables and better misses
5-2 @Enbombz wins
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