Lenox vs WrathOner[len wins]

[Lenox]

12lines = 6 bars
24 hours..

@wrathoner
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[WrathOner]

Bet, Lenox check.

[Lenox]

Check


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[Lenox]

I hate you.

Jabs I throw heavy, fucking cunts up on the prowl,
So when your put under..... Waking up after is highly doubtful,
I'll swing so hard you'll cringe forever,
You ain't ill as this,
Punch e'll have mouth barely movin, like your mimickin transviliquist's,
I'm mean with the rusty razor, killing u is my favorite part,
one stab to his chest....& he'll probably take it to heart,
I get what you mean, you're not good but we understand,
That being said, puss prolly wants me to throws punches underhand,
Dude likes to play hostage, goes on the street waiting to get abused,
treats jumping in vans like skaters do with a new pair of shoes,
I fuck up victims quick, what can I say brother,
Cut to the chase quicker then what I did to your gay lover...


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[WrathOner]

@Lenox

Lenox, Bring your hatred, U think I really care?
The only thing ur prowling is ur mother’s stank underwear.
There she go, a picture of mom’s in his profile, (Skeletor)
Punish you, like I did her ass, U unrepentant reptile
Brought Wrath on the hoe, got you Duct taped, U Dyke
Witnessing from the corner, forced to Deepthroat ur mic
Severing the heads off of moms and this faggot
Boiling them both in a pot filled with maggots
Fuck Dahmer & Hannibal, I’ma go straight animal
YOUR heart’s MY favorite part, it feeds the Supreme cannibal
The only thing rusty is your skillset, slut, there’s nothing to your punches,
Broken little chicken wings, saved both ur arms for future lunches.

Btw, I skullfucked ur mom after lunch, for dessert.

[Lenox]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=485274

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=484923

Sorry for the late links


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[WrathOner]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...-vs-E-Tha-Real

[WrathOner]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...=1#post8675516

[Joe Boston]

Lenox

Jabs I throw heavy, fucking cunts up on the prowl,
So when your put under..... Waking up after is highly doubtful,
finisher was cool but setup didn't rhyme

I'll swing so hard you'll cringe forever,
You ain't ill as this,
Punch e'll have mouth barely movin, like your mimickin transviliquist's,
played metaphore

I'm mean with the rusty razor, killing u is my favorite part,
one stab to his chest....& he'll probably take it to heart,
ok cool flip

I get what you mean, you're not good but we understand,
That being said, puss prolly wants me to throws punches underhand,
would've been more humorous if worded and executed better

Dude likes to play hostage, goes on the street waiting to get abused,
treats jumping in vans like skaters do with a new pair of shoes,
this was pretty cool ok metaphore

I fuck up victims quick, what can I say brother,
Cut to the chase quicker then what I did to your gay lover...
nah

Wrath

Lenox, Bring your hatred, U think I really care?
The only thing ur prowling is ur mother’s stank underwear.
no feeding off your opponents verse auto DQ

There she go, a picture of mom’s in his profile, (Skeletor)
Punish you, like I did her ass, U unrepentant reptile
nah wasn't even relevant to setup

Brought Wrath on the hoe, got you Duct taped, U Dyke
Witnessing from the corner, forced to Deepthroat ur mic
nah

Severing the heads off of moms and this faggot
Boiling them both in a pot filled with maggots
no

Fuck Dahmer & Hannibal, I’ma go straight animal
YOUR heart’s MY favorite part, it feeds the Supreme cannibal
no

The only thing rusty is your skillset, slut, there’s nothing to your punches,
Broken little chicken wings, saved both ur arms for future lunches.
ok lol

well Wrath need to learn how to word some of ur punches better and execute them so they come off in a text format. Lenox take it to the heart and the vans flip was pretty cool. still gotta work on wording though.

V/Lenox

[NiccAteen]

Lenox

Jabs I throw heavy, fucking cunts up on the prowl,
So when your put under..... Waking up after is highly doubtful,
didnt rhyme

I'll swing so hard you'll cringe forever,
You ain't ill as this,
Punch e'll have mouth barely movin, like your mimickin transviliquist's,
played out not a good flip

I'm mean with the rusty razor, killing u is my favorite part,
one stab to his chest....& he'll probably take it to heart,
simpe concept

I get what you mean, you're not good but we understand,
That being said, puss prolly wants me to throws punches underhand,
decent flip
Dude likes to play hostage, goes on the street waiting to get abused,
treats jumping in vans like skaters do with a new pair of shoes,
decent couldve been executed better

I fuck up victims quick, what can I say brother,
Cut to the chase quicker then what I did to your gay lover...
what lol

Wrath

Lenox, Bring your hatred, U think I really care?
The only thing ur prowling is ur mother’s stank underwear.
against rules
There she go, a picture of mom’s in his profile, (Skeletor)
Punish you, like I did her ass, U unrepentant reptile
no real punch

Brought Wrath on the hoe, got you Duct taped, U Dyke
Witnessing from the corner, forced to Deepthroat ur mic
nothing landing

Severing the heads off of moms and this faggot
Boiling them both in a pot filled with maggots
no punch

Fuck Dahmer & Hannibal, I’ma go straight animal
YOUR heart’s MY favorite part, it feeds the Supreme cannibal
nothing going for me

The only thing rusty is your skillset, slut, there’s nothing to your punches,
Broken little chicken wings, saved both ur arms for future lunches.
decent flip couldve been used better



V/Lenox

wrath has potential he got the right idea just needs to set up his bars n finish stronger more often

[DamienThorn]

Jabs I throw heavy, fucking cunts up on the prowl,
So when your put under..... Waking up after is highly doubtful,
the rhyme here was a REACH
I'll swing so hard you'll cringe forever,
You ain't ill as this,
Punch e'll have mouth barely movin, like your mimickin transviliquist's,
kinda corny imo
I'm mean with the rusty razor, killing u is my favorite part,
one stab to his chest....& he'll probably take it to heart,
This was ok.
I get what you mean, you're not good but we understand,
That being said, puss prolly wants me to throws punches underhand,
wording hurt you here. could have gone a different way with this concept
Dude likes to play hostage, goes on the street waiting to get abused,
treats jumping in vans like skaters do with a new pair of shoes,
ok attempt.. I'll give you this
I fuck up victims quick, what can I say brother,
Cut to the chase quicker then what I did to your gay lover...
tbh the only way I could read this and make sense of it, made it seem like you're calling yourself gay =/

VS

Lenox, Bring your hatred, U think I really care?
The only thing ur prowling is ur mother’s stank underwear.
There she go, a picture of mom’s in his profile, (Skeletor)
Punish you, like I did her ass, U unrepentant reptile
Brought Wrath on the hoe, got you Duct taped, U Dyke
Witnessing from the corner, forced to Deepthroat ur mic
Severing the heads off of moms and this faggot
Boiling them both in a pot filled with maggots
Fuck Dahmer & Hannibal, I’ma go straight animal
YOUR heart’s MY favorite part, it feeds the Supreme cannibal
The only thing rusty is your skillset, slut, there’s nothing to your punches,
Broken little chicken wings, saved both ur arms for future lunches.

I'm not commenting on every bar here. This was weird tbh. 1) you can't go off of your opponents verse. 2) the whole piece read like an awful horror story and didn't insult your opponent. it just made you look like a creep. I didn't see any clear attempts at a punch-line or insult. Read more battles, I think you're off track if your goal is to win here.

vote: lenox

[E Tha Real]

Jumping in vans

Vs

Nothing

The punches need to be a little more direct wrathoner. I slight improvement in entertaining lines but the punches are still lacking. Only advice i can give is read LLL votes & see what voters are looking fot. Which is why lenox is getting the nod.

Vote lenox

[Spree]

Lenox - ur opener bar was terrible. Didn't rhyme.

But under hand and jump outa vans was cool. Could have been worded better tbh


Vs


Nothing


I thought Lenox had some ok concepts but most missed. Wrath really had nothing going here tbh. I wasn't feeling anything. I've tried to give him some feed and it seems he just ignores it. But I got
Lenox here with two decent lines and better misses

Vote lenox

[Massaker]

@Lenox gets the KO!