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Killing spree
Wrathoner
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Go easy on the noob, KS
This brotha's got the name, Killing Spree//
Out his mind, thinking that he's killin me//
Props I'll give him, for stepping to the Wrath//
Articulate psychopath, carpet bombing the damage path//
Raining pestilence on ur residence//
Punish you with malevolence//
KS, you don't want none of these pen tricks//
I'll treat you, & beat you, make you my apprentice//
It's the W-R-fucking A-T-H//
Slapping those dookie rhymes straight up outta your face//
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LOL, 5 bars is like a teaser...barely enough to warm up, haha.
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We will accept your voting links now... But from now on, explain your votes better. U want feed to help elevate? Then give your coins and dollar. Thanks
Wrathoner
Yo...
U wack dude, u ain't sweet wen u try to fathom battles
So if the fruit packs a punch? I'll throw one str8 into his Adam's apple
Fucks the deal? If u the toughest in the game then im'a buck the field
Ya whole flex out of shape, & one punch'll have the back of ya head touch ya heel
Stop wit the jokes, ko this foe quick cos I'm hot wit the flows
If one uppin a battle? S'cos he's losing & toppin for votes
Noobs fake, u always getting out bar'd & left wit a toothache
U with a dope showing? We gotta better chance seeing Lett @ a due date
This how the work goes, you'll only succeed in a herb show
We knew you couldn't call shots in the front lines since ya first post
(He posted a callout in the fl thread)
*voted on champ and contender in LLL*
Last edited by Massaker; February 16th, 2015 at 11:51 AM Reason: Links
Nothing
Vs.
Touch ya heel
Basically this is a battle between a text vet & a guy with no experience what so ever. There were little to no entertainment in his verse or direct insults.
Vote ks
Yeh this was pretty one sided.
Nice rhymes, decent multi's and flow - But fuck all that reflects a battle verse wrath. Sorry dude, you need punchlines and personals in this game.
Ks, a decent verse a couple nice concepts, more than enough for the win.
vote ks
Keep it up Wrath, if you're new as you say you have a solid flow and good vocabulary just pair that up with some clever wordplay and some tailored punchlines you will be good to go.
The fruit punchline from Killing Spree was pretty good. Killing Spree's use of multies and better structured punchlines carried him through in this battle.
If you guys would like me to break down the bars I can do that.
What's your vote?Originally Posted by Mushashi
This brotha's got the name, Killing Spree//
Out his mind, thinking that he's killin me//
no punch could of flipped name play better
Props I'll give him, for stepping to the Wrath//
Articulate psychopath, carpet bombing the damage path//
again same thing..flow n set up seems fitting for audio
Raining pestilence on ur residence//
Punish you with malevolence//
all filler
KS, you don't want none of these pen tricks//
I'll treat you, & beat you, make you my apprentice//
It's the W-R-fucking A-T-H//
Slapping those dookie rhymes straight up outta your face//
overall: you need to be more direct come at him personally and basically insult him flow is on point but need to drop the self talk n maybe add a lil more to ur lines
U wack dude, u ain't sweet wen u try to fathom battles
So if the fruit packs a punch? I'll throw one str8 into his Adam's apple
saw alot of adams apples plays but this one does the job
Fucks the deal? If u the toughest in the game then im'a buck the field
Ya whole flex out of shape, & one punch'll have the back of ya head touch ya heel
like the flex concept
Stop wit the jokes, ko this foe quick cos I'm hot wit the flows
If one uppin a battle? S'cos he's losing & toppin for votes
okay
Noobs fake, u always getting out bar'd & left wit a toothache
U with a dope showing? We gotta better chance seeing Lett @ a due date
direct personal does the job
This how the work goes, you'll only succeed in a herb show
We knew you couldn't call shots in the front lines since ya first post
direct personal again
vote: killing spree, more direct with his personals ..creativity there and just brought it more then wrath keep doin ur thing guys stay up
Vote: Killing Spree
This brotha's got the name, Killing Spree//
Out his mind, thinking that he's killin me//
Props I'll give him, for stepping to the Wrath//
Articulate psychopath, carpet bombing the damage path//
Raining pestilence on ur residence//
Punish you with malevolence//
KS, you don't want none of these pen tricks//
I'll treat you, & beat you, make you my apprentice//
It's the W-R-fucking A-T-H//
Slapping those dookie rhymes straight up outta your face//
I'm going to be nice and go easy on you.. this was entertaining but not in a good way. I believe in human potential so I know if you get more familiar with the format and study other battles you will improve. However, I feel like your ceiling is low.. honestly, I hope you prove me wrong and champ shit in the future.
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U wack dude, u ain't sweet wen u try to fathom battles
So if the fruit packs a punch? I'll throw one str8 into his Adam's apple
Fucks the deal? If u the toughest in the game then im'a buck the field
Ya whole flex out of shape, & one punch'll have the back of ya head touch ya heel
Stop wit the jokes, ko this foe quick cos I'm hot wit the flows
If one uppin a battle? S'cos he's losing & toppin for votes
Noobs fake, u always getting out bar'd & left wit a toothache
U with a dope showing? We gotta better chance seeing Lett @ a due date
This how the work goes, you'll only succeed in a herb show
We knew you couldn't call shots in the front lines since ya first post
nice post. didn't let him off easy, which I like. consistent throughout.
vote: spree for every reason one can win a battle
Wrathoner: Nothing
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Killing Spree: (first line I've heard and seems bit, not trying to say anything but I've seen it on a different site). Letterman Due Date, first post...
Overall: I really do think this was clearly a one sided battle with KS having two decent quotes & wrath having none.. Come on wrath, look at some old 1-2 battles ya know? It actually helped me.
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