Alone

[TorridRhymes]

Everyday I masturbate, there too much stress on my brain
so much stress that i don't wanna talk, please, do not call my name!
let me just chill and watch tv, i like a variety of movies,
from Dark flicks to Comedy's, my life is just me with bent knees
im always sitting, i really wish i had a female to perform a licking
i should holla at a lady, will she wanna have sex with me... MAYBE
BRB, ill be back, im gonna get the pizza out the oven
okay, now im back, i ate it up and it was stuffin
im no longer hungry, but i still want a body
im fiending for love, im alone like a lost dove

[BeLoved Warlock]

Ok not as bad as some i have seen but there was no main topic, rhymes and flow are pretty basic. I think u started it as a battle by mistake cuz u deft aint ready to be battlin dont take that offensive cuz im not either. I feel you could of done much better "Everyday I masturbate, there too much stress on my brain
so much stress that i don't wanna talk, please, do not call my name!" That was ok but you could of made that better. Pretty basic but pls continue writing you will only get better if you would like some help advice let me know!

[Venom]

This was pretty whack if i'm to be really honest. This is not to say you should quit...the exact opposite really...keep practicing...you can become good with time. Starting off with "Everyday i masturbate"...like really? I ain't feelin that at all and the random nature of this belongs in the freestyle section..it doesn't seem like there is any set topic to this really and that's what a freestyle is. No hate. Stay writing. peace.