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    Ars Longa Vita Brevis English's Avatar
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    Enter. Captured its mood,
    pattern and groove
    but the lens did not prosper,
    offered the precipice:
    a precious kiss’ intention to chagrin,
    latent in rosy hues --
    perfectly content in the cabin.
    Patient for only true
    nothing, and something
    arrives removing corners of
    a room where I’m touching
    the sides. Pushing the boundaries
    only to be pulled from the string,
    a marionette cut
    -ting its own wires is a beautiful thing.
    Exit. Wounds gift the wind an unusual sting:
    I've my scars.
    You've the heart;
    a bunch of burst nerve endings not worth spending.
    I've my part (requests to play it are pending).
    Last edited by English; October 23rd, 2014 at 11:09 PM

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    Re: Pending

    I did like this poem what is about i havent got a clue i thought for a moment that it was perhaps a bullet entering and exiting someone and this was your description i like the words and flow of it but I am one confused ass reader

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