Whenever The Mics On

[iDeaLoGiK]

Had a couple verses left over a while back that i didnt know what to do with, so i decided to fuck around with a random beat and make a free track



Lyrics:
I'mma act haphazardly, wrath of mad hattery
rapscallion bastard that is maskin deeds dastardly
half of me past ravenous, adapted mystic mastery
fanatic damage addict crash landed right after halloween
now its me chillin hourly, found a dream that is towering
bound to bring down the galaxy, shout it out its empowering
battery levels risin, i'm action packed and im challenging
rappers still smellin fishy, still grizzly, yet they are floundering
illicit vicious wizardry, anticipation dizzying
dissin me, causin friction, flick a wrist then you are history
sixty slick riccochet hits to flip wickedly
mixin limp biskit with listerene quick-l-y
minty clean livin left you soft like flutes in symphonies
imagery is sufficient, visceral visions spit vividly
just below the surface, my purpose sittin subliminally
understand.... i give it 100% minimally

turnin your ipod straight into an "i drop"
to show you the mind of an emotional time bomb
im only feelin human whenever the mics on
when i grip it in my palm it ignites like a fire arm

at a passing glance my rappin stance is like an avalanche
active as a cat scan after snappin back a half a gram
my master plan smashes like jack hammers with fast hands
fulla holes rollin back like walmart prices on afghans
yo thats that... im like a rabbit crossed with pack rats
stock pile hip hop, its still massive when half stacked
just as dope as hopsin with no concern over sagged pants
a whole reserve of options, slow burn on the fast track
holler like a broker as dollars drop on nasdaq
sodom and gommorah, these rap cats are ass hats
mad dog, they biff like back to the future-ish flashbacks
bipartisanship rap, only win if you have cash
pale from my attacks like sand blastin a hatchback
snak the ripper treatment, gettin beaten with brass tacks
we'll see who will laugh last, ingenious adapt past
tactics stopped your breathin, now you're needin a gas mask

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[Oxymoron]

All right man. I Like the voice. some dark vibes, low tones. hmm. First off the writtens are solid. I thought the multis were decent with cool choice of vocablary and imagry. Pretty on point for me. Just needs a little more tone and emotion to make those lyrics pop out.

im not too sure about the hook. i always find hooks cheezy. your one wasnt too catchy. but it wasnt bad.


keep working on it good work.

Good to see some more people working on their craft around.