Heard Allen got bars, blasphemy, all his life he spit on the mic like a queer,
He went from thuggin to wearing dresses like Ice Cube career,
this was ass. Similes rarely work for me, unless they super dope.
Homie throwing up points now? Son one punch will split your chest,
The points matter but he text dude saying he'd suck his dick for less,
no. I don't even know what you were going for here. you just told him he sucks dick in a non creative way. Even telling someone they suck dick in a CREATIVE way would probably be ass.
This dude a cheesy ass, don't bust gats but I'll freely blast,
Quick to hit this son (sun) with 3 like he was Steve Nash,
cheesy ass rhymes with freely blast, yes. But don't rhyme words just to rhyme words. everything has to be relevant with each other. I understand u went for wordplay, but son, sun wordplay is so old that the last time I heard it a pterodactyl shit on my head. and a basketball reference converting the amount of bullets you shoot at someone to a 3 pointer is horrendous.
You're mom thinks she can bust a dudes nut, probably, she loves to get dirty,
Find more bets getting placed on that horse than rich snobs at the Kentucky Derby,
horse doesnt work cause shes one person. good attempt
Allen trying to Murk me like Rambo, think he looking nice in the cameo,
Cause one punch he throws ill decapitate him from the neck like an ISIS commando
simile was blah
vs
hate voting me'll get u dissed personally, it'll shock heads
cuz im fuckin dope, if Len Bias one line to the heart'll make'em drop dead
wording was a little weird here for me, hindered impact
bitches u smash are disgustin as fuck, get it thru ya head bitch
last time u tackle box... that shit was filled w/ worms & stunk like dead fish
lol good
we hear ur name & think ur a joke, this clown drops trash
the biggest laughing stock on RB....u'd be the number 1 pick in a mock draft
not feeling this
my fist's are lethal weapons faggot, splitting ur roof
i'll uppercut Lentil his face is mushed worse than the middle of bread sitting in soup
I did a lentil against him too, this was flipped much better tho. decent
ur the biggest dirt bag alive, neva chillen w/ people
any house this faggot Lennon gets condemned n infested w/ millions of beetles
lol this was cool
Lenox just got pillaged in this battle. Not much to say Allen gets the dub very comfortably.
v/Allen
Originally Posted by .Allen Knight.
