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.Allen Knight.
Lenox
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Heard Allen got bars, blasphemy, all his life he spit on the mic like a queer,
He went from thuggin to wearing dresses like Ice Cube career,
Homie throwing up points now? Son one punch will split your chest,
The points matter but he text dude saying he'd suck his dick for less,
This dude a cheesy ass, don't bust gats but I'll freely blast,
Quick to hit this son (sun) with 3 like he was Steve Nash,
You're mom thinks she can bust a dudes nut, probably, she loves to get dirty,
Find more bets getting placed on that horse than rich snobs at the Kentucky Derby,
Allen trying to Murk me like Rambo, think he looking nice in the cameo,
Cause one punch he throws ill decapitate him from the neck like an ISIS commando
Ill drop when get out of work
Name plays on me are old.
Legion Of Legends
Aight. I'm scared you prolly gonna either me and shitOriginally Posted by .Allen Knight.
hate voting me'll get u dissed personally, it'll shock heads
cuz im fuckin dope, if Len Bias one line to the heart'll make'em drop dead
bitches u smash are disgustin as fuck, get it thru ya head bitch
last time u tackle box... that shit was filled w/ worms & stunk like dead fish
we hear ur name & think ur a joke, this clown drops trash
the biggest laughing stock on RB....u'd be the number 1 pick in a mock draft
my fist's are lethal weapons faggot, splitting ur roof
i'll uppercut Lentil his face is mushed worse than the middle of bread sitting in soup
ur the biggest dirt bag alive, neva chillen w/ people
any house this faggot Lennon gets condemned n infested w/ millions of beetles
Name plays on me are old.
Legion Of Legends
Heard Allen got bars, blasphemy, all his life he spit on the mic like a queer,
He went from thuggin to wearing dresses like Ice Cube career,
no
Homie throwing up points now? Son one punch will split your chest,
The points matter but he text dude saying he'd suck his dick for less,
weak
This dude a cheesy ass, don't bust gats but I'll freely blast,
Quick to hit this son (sun) with 3 like he was Steve Nash,
this aint rmbva u dont need to type sun again.. this wasnt good anyway
You're mom thinks she can bust a dudes nut, probably, she loves to get dirty,
Find more bets getting placed on that horse than rich snobs at the Kentucky Derby,
lol ok
Allen trying to Murk me like Rambo, think he looking nice in the cameo,
Cause one punch he throws ill decapitate him from the neck like an ISIS commando
ehh nah u could of done more with this
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hate voting me'll get u dissed personally, it'll shock heads
cuz im fuckin dope, if Len Bias one line to the heart'll make'em drop dead
ouch.
bitches u smash are disgustin as fuck, get it thru ya head bitch
last time u tackle box... that shit was filled w/ worms & stunk like dead fish
cool
we hear ur name & think ur a joke, this clown drops trash
the biggest laughing stock on RB....u'd be the number 1 pick in a mock draft
ehh ok
my fist's are lethal weapons faggot, splitting ur roof
i'll uppercut Lentil his face is mushed worse than the middle of bread sitting in soup
good
ur the biggest dirt bag alive, neva chillen w/ people
any house this faggot Lennon gets condemned n infested w/ millions of beetles
wasnt feelin the wording but still a decent punch
You're mom thinks she can bust a dudes nut, probably, she loves to get dirty,
Find more bets getting placed on that horse than rich snobs at the Kentucky Derby,
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hate voting me'll get u dissed personally, it'll shock heads
cuz im fuckin dope, if Len Bias one line to the heart'll make'em drop dead
bitches u smash are disgustin as fuck, get it thru ya head bitch
last time u tackle box... that shit was filled w/ worms & stunk like dead fish
my fist's are lethal weapons faggot, splitting ur roof
i'll uppercut Lentil his face is mushed worse than the middle of bread sitting in soup
vote - allen
lyricalz finest
Lenox:
Kentucky derby
Vs
AK:
Len bias, tackle box
Vote ak.
Allen, u really didn't have any misses. I just quoted the ones I really liked. The lentil is played tho.
Lenox, u already know...just keep on working on it. Try to make more lines like that Kentucky derby joint
Kill a bitch and kill her kid
all depends what her nigga did
-herbo
Kentucky derby
Vs
Tackle, Len bias
Pretty one sided but Lenox derby bar was very well executed and worded smoothly. I almost quoted the Steve Nash but it fell short to me. Deff one of your better verses. Allen seen the lentil line before. But your verse was dominant as always
Vote ak
@.Allen Knight. @Lenox voting links
Name plays on me are old.
Legion Of Legends
Heard Allen got bars, blasphemy, all his life he spit on the mic like a queer,
He went from thuggin to wearing dresses like Ice Cube career,
What? & Horrible simile.
Homie throwing up points now? Son one punch will split your chest,
The points matter but he text dude saying he'd suck his dick for less,
Terrible.
This dude a cheesy ass, don't bust gats but I'll freely blast,
Quick to hit this son (sun) with 3 like he was Steve Nash,
Played. The ENTIRE bar is PLAYED. Son/Sun plays were played in 1976. The concept of incorperating a number with someone was played back in 1978. Also, not terrible but pretty bad simile.
You're mom thinks she can bust a dudes nut, probably, she loves to get dirty,
Find more bets getting placed on that horse than rich snobs at the Kentucky Derby,
Had potential if executed and worded properly. You could have even used the Horse play as a WP to make it more effective and creative, as well. (If worded and executed properly)
Allen trying to Murk me like Rambo, think he looking nice in the cameo,
Cause one punch he throws ill decapitate him from the neck like an ISIS commando
Had potential but fell flat. Did nothing for me.
OVERALL: From the 2 or 3 battles I've read from you, you have improved, son. Keep writing. Try and stay away from simile's unless it's dope. Sometimes Simile's can take away from the impact or effectiveness of the concept. Your wording wasn't too bad. Everything was delivered nicely but your punches were ass juice that could probably assist in the outbreak of ebola.
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hate voting me'll get u dissed personally, it'll shock heads
cuz im fuckin dope, if Len Bias one line to the heart'll make'em drop dead
Wording was rough/choppy. Got the point, tho. Ok'ish.
Lol, fire.bitches u smash are disgustin as fuck, get it thru ya head bitch
last time u tackle box... that shit was filled w/ worms & stunk like dead fish
Laughing stock concepts are played to me, seen a lot but this one was fire, IMO.we hear ur name & think ur a joke, this clown drops trash
the biggest laughing stock on RB....u'd be the number 1 pick in a mock draft
my fist's are lethal weapons faggot, splitting ur roof
i'll uppercut Lentil his face is mushed worse than the middle of bread sitting in soup
Wording a little rough but Ok.
Lol, this was fire as well.ur the biggest dirt bag alive, neva chillen w/ people
any house this faggot Lennon gets condemned n infested w/ millions of beetles
OVERALL: Nothing really bad, other then some choppy wording which I'm sure you could careless considering who you facing but had some solid concepts/punches. That Tackle Box was fire and funny. The Laughing stock was dope, even tho I've seen a lot of laughing stock puns, I did enjoy this one. And the closer was probably your dopest bar, IMO. Shit was clean.
Yea... Allen takes this, and why I wasted my time to break this down, IDK but w/e... Fuck you...
v/Allen Knight
Nothing
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Opener, lentil, closer could've been dope just didn't connect hard even with the dope concept.
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