JoeBoston VS. Schizmatic [Joe Wins 5 - 0]

[Joe Boston]

10 Lines
Due Tomorrow AM
@Schizmatic @Joe Boston

[schizmatic]

I've arrived

[Joe Boston]

good timing lol check

[schizmatic]

life is survival of the fittest, the weak are quickly gone
but if you've made it this far than Charles Darwin must be wrong
geography's not your forte there's no knowledge behind ya'
if we asked you to point at Libia you'd just show us your vagina
"Who will WIN"the battle are the words chose, you messin'?
how do you plan to keep composure when you can't even pose a question?
you're a little house wife, no education or living better
I would teach you string theory but it's not about knitting sweaters
you got nothing cookin, I'm doing you a favor boss
it'll be his last game, Joe Boston's Bruin up another loss

[Joe Boston]

I have that hurricane toungue Joe be hitting bitches like a blind storm
Your Jealous that i bag dimes, so Schiz sue me cuz all the chicks you been with resemble that dog form
My clique will swarm around u with heavy artillery in seconds they'll lay u flat
We'll be waiting ages As Matic bust cuz he'd probably need his inhaler just doing that
Joe all about fat asses and a full set of lips youll never get a grip on some wide hips
You wonder why bitches souls are so full of that Blackish u cry to Anthony Anderson for relationship tips
Pistol whip you in the face till ur bleeding tremendously leave you unidentifiable so none of ur friends will see
I'll put such a stop to ur alter ego you'd start attending church every sunday just to go to one and bend a knee
you and bitch dont have that sexual chemistry u was never taught that physical science
Your lovelife been through a whirlpool of shit so ill let u watch while im fucking ur girl on that appliance

@Fresh Open this for votes please

Links:

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...-alphadog-OPEN
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...31#post8620231

[schizmatic]

Links, since there is no edit button for me, 10 years later and this site is still glitchy lol

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...OPEN-FOR-VOTES
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...=1#post8620207

[schizmatic]

lets go

[Wordz AhGod.]

life is survival of the fittest, the weak are quickly gone
but if you've made it this far than Charles Darwin must be wrong
wording was awful. Punch looked like it lacked direction.
geography's not your forte there's no knowledge behind ya'
if we asked you to point at Libia you'd just show us your vagina
forced, word you're looking for is Labia not Libia so this doesn't work.
"Who will WIN"the battle are the words chose, you messin'?
how do you plan to keep composure when you can't even pose a question?
blahh, not sure if this is rust killing you.. setup was ultra choppy, punch was weak.
you're a little house wife, no education or living better
I would teach you string theory but it's not about knitting sweaters
seen string theory lines before, "no education or living better" isn't even proper, its just ugly as all hell. concept was soft.
you got nothing cookin, I'm doing you a favor boss
it'll be his last game, Joe Boston's Bruin up another loss
doesn't work for me.

vs

I have that hurricane toungue Joe be hitting bitches like a blind storm
Your Jealous that i bag dimes, so Schiz sue me cuz all the chicks you been with resemble that dog form
mehh, good nameplay but the wording was pretty bad.
My clique will swarm around u with heavy artillery in seconds they'll lay u flat
We'll be waiting ages As Matic bust cuz he'd probably need his inhaler just doing that
nahh, wording again.. didn't push it through
Joe all about fat asses and a full set of lips youll never get a grip on some wide hips
You wonder why bitches souls are so full of that Blackish u cry to Anthony Anderson for relationship tips
was ok, could have been better.. setup was weird lol.
Pistol whip you in the face till ur bleeding tremendously leave you unidentifiable so none of ur friends will see
I'll put such a stop to ur alter ego you'd start attending church every sunday just to go to one and bend a knee
nahh, miss.
you and bitch dont have that sexual chemistry u was never taught that physical science
Your lovelife been through a whirlpool of shit so ill let u watch while im fucking ur girl on that appliance
okayish but too predictable.. seen a few whilpool lines before so this didn't do much for me. not terrible tho.

v/Joe boston

Schizmatic seemed like he was more of topical writer then a battler, not sure how he got 112 wins.. must've been during the dark ages. Joe had some cool concept but his wording wasn't as up to par as it usually is so the stretched lines were more noticeable then usually with his bars. Either way he takes it for having better misses and one quotable.

[Blanco.]

life is survival of the fittest, the weak are quickly gone
but if you've made it this far than Charles Darwin must be wrong
eh no wasnt feelin this
geography's not your forte there's no knowledge behind ya'
if we asked you to point at Libia you'd just show us your vagina
bad wording
"Who will WIN"the battle are the words chose, you messin'?
how do you plan to keep composure when you can't even pose a question?
no
you're a little house wife, no education or living better
I would teach you string theory but it's not about knitting sweaters
funny but weak
you got nothing cookin, I'm doing you a favor boss
it'll be his last game, Joe Boston's Bruin up another loss
bad



VS.

I have that hurricane toungue Joe be hitting bitches like a blind storm
Your Jealous that i bag dimes, so Schiz sue me cuz all the chicks you been with resemble that dog form
forced as shit.
My clique will swarm around u with heavy artillery in seconds they'll lay u flat
We'll be waiting ages As Matic bust cuz he'd probably need his inhaler just doing that
ok
Joe all about fat asses and a full set of lips youll never get a grip on some wide hips
You wonder why bitches souls are so full of that Blackish u cry to Anthony Anderson for relationship tips
streched n bad working
Pistol whip you in the face till ur bleeding tremendously leave you unidentifiable so none of ur friends will see
I'll put such a stop to ur alter ego you'd start attending church every sunday just to go to one and bend a knee
why do your lines progressive get longer throughout every verse? not a good punch either way
you and bitch dont have that sexual chemistry u was never taught that physical science
Your lovelife been through a whirlpool of shit so ill let u watch while im fucking ur girl on that appliance
meh ok


i feel like schiz just got out of school and wrote that verse which made it seem wacker. joe had some bad wording but he still got the W

vote - joe boston.

[Smog]

life is survival of the fittest, the weak are quickly gone
but if you've made it this far than Charles Darwin must be wrong
Soft, due to the way u worded it..

geography's not your forte there's no knowledge behind ya'
if we asked you to point at Libia you'd just show us your vagina
Seen these, this was a bit different but forced..

"Who will WIN"the battle are the words chose, you messin'?
how do you plan to keep composure when you can't even pose a question?
Coulda done this better IMO, came off real weak..

you're a little house wife, no education or living better
I would teach you string theory but it's not about knitting sweaters
Set up was weird at the last part but ur best bar do far..

you got nothing cookin, I'm doing you a favor boss
it'll be his last game, Joe Boston's Bruin up another loss
Way to many bruin bars on JB..it's an obvious np bro..shiit I used one

Vs...

I have that hurricane toungue Joe be hitting bitches like a blind storm
Your Jealous that i bag dimes, so Schiz sue me cuz all the chicks you been with resemble that dog form
Ehh iiight but a lil forced,

My clique will swarm around u with heavy artillery in seconds they'll lay u flat
We'll be waiting ages As Matic bust cuz he'd probably need his inhaler just doing that
Cool..

Joe all about fat asses and a full set of lips youll never get a grip on some wide hips
You wonder why bitches souls are so full of that Blackish u cry to Anthony Anderson for relationship tips
This wasnt worded well IMO..stretched

Pistol whip you in the face till ur bleeding tremendously leave you unidentifiable so none of ur friends will see
I'll put such a stop to ur alter ego you'd start attending church every sunday just to go to one and bend a knee
Lol, kinda funny.. Stretched but had humor

you and bitch dont have that sexual chemistry u was never taught that physical science
Your lovelife been through a whirlpool of shit so ill let u watch while im fucking ur girl on that appliance
Iight...

Well matic came real soft n simple, if u woulda worded ur concepts a lil mo harsher they woulda done mo for me.. JB some bars were stretched but I liked ur ideas more n creativity just feel u could take a lot of ur words out n ur barz would hit harder but still I got this with stronger punches n better creativity..

Vote JB...

[Joe Boston]

3-0 uppin

[Greedy]

Joe had:
asthmatic, and whirlpool

Vs
Schizm :
Nothing to quote.


Joe, u came waaaaaay too fuckin wordy, but even still your concepts were pretty fresh, and some still hit well in spite of how wordy you came
Schizm, u just came way too basic honestly, nothing really hit hard

Vote Joe Boston

[Joe Boston]

4-0 ko @Fresh close this my dude good battle @Schizmatic

[schizmatic]

This was not a good battle, we are both terrible

[Ryno]

As matic

Vs

N/a


Joe overly worded a lot of his concepts but as matic hit. Schiz had all around soft punches. Needs harder execution.

V/Joe B