Duke swinging at me in this battle, I straight ducked, now this bitch is missing me
He's missed so many punches in the past that journalists predicted he had muscular dystrophy
Nothing here. I see where you TRIED TO GO but the wording/execution was terrible.
Homie a child rapist and that's obviously the truth,
He throws kids down in his well, news casters identify him as the "fountain of youth"
Seen a lotof fountain of youth concepts flipped but this one is by far probably the worst attempt. Not to mention, the wording/execution came off statement'ish. No type of harshness to this at all.
Wine just mad cause cats ain't helping him, don't blame me, you ain't know me par,
The only time this "Wine" getting "Tips" is when he's working at his local bar,
Not sure how WINE gets TIPS, but w/e. As I stated in the 1st bar, cool attempt but wording and execution was a lot better, just the concept was forced.
I'll fuck up Sunny's dental till it shatters, none of his homies saving his back,
You'd think I'm referencing Metallica but Nothing Else Matters when your conscious is Fading To Black,
Digging the creativity here but lacks substance. Probably your best bar, tho thus far.
He complains about not getting enough subs on his channel, you were never ahead of your time,
And just remember one thing, like a ugly bitches year book, you'll never get signed
Cool flip on an old concept but weak and way to generic of a "punch".
vs
Len dont put in work. everything he writes makes him seem dense
dont even bother breaking your piggy bank.. ur shit still wont make sense
You know this concept is played as fuck, no matter how you flip it.
I see everything, you miss things under your own roof in plain sight
I have an acute sense of awareness, you have acute mom I fuck every night
I've seen the "Acute/A cute" wordplay done a lot. I believe Letterman tried to pull one of these off recently or not to long ago. His was better.
im a craftsman in this rap shit..i'll beast all you fools
the only thing ur skilsaw is weakness like cheap carpenter tools
Should have kept as a metaphor. Could have been dope. The simile killed the impact, IMO.
kid don't fuck with me again, I was your age at your birth
now I'm almost twice yours, like what ur girls says about my length and girth
Stupid.
comparing are skills? there's not a chance that your hurting me..
I got punches that will end Lens so quick you'll think i got lasix eye surgery
Self hype with a nice name flip. Cool. Your best bar, as well as LOTB.
OVERALL: Pretty awful battle, not going to lie but w/e. Seems both have elevated soem what from the last battles I've read from both battlers. All in all, I got WINE-O taking this w/ the LOTB, IMO. Lenox had nothing really worth quoting. The creative Metallica reference was cool but the bar needed work as far as substance/harshness for a more solid impact. Keep writing, fellas.
v/WineO
Originally Posted by Lenox
