Mine and my dude's entry for RA's Definition of a Rap Flow Contest.
DANGER, Will Robinson! Check it out
and leave some comments on the soundcloud if ya dig!
Mine and my dude's entry for RA's Definition of a Rap Flow Contest.
DANGER, Will Robinson! Check it out
and leave some comments on the soundcloud if ya dig!
Last edited by Cody Nash; October 3rd, 2014 at 07:01 PM
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Last edited by Cody Nash; October 2nd, 2014 at 01:17 PM
kry it didnt load
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Doesn't load, and I'll still merk you in a battle. Yeah I still use the term Merk
For some reason the embedded wont work. You guys will have to click the link. Just edited it in!
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I hate parts of the beat, but that's not your fault, it's just garbage to me. You did your thing on it but just the beat was not that great to me because of the random dumb sounding break downs. I liked the track though.
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This is a cool track man. Solid flow, lyrics and delivery. Cant pick out much bad. Solid verses and hook.
I think you could have capitolised on the break down more buy writing for them better. But you did your thing and turned out nice. The break downs were all good, just your flow over them could have been tailored to be cooler. The first one was probably the best.
MoistPuss'Smoother than smooth
You know. You know. Cause when you know, you know. You Know.
The mind without a brain\i/
Cool lyrics, nice flow and voice. The mix is terrible on all levels
Dude your shit is sounding so smooth these days. Had me nodding my head throughout the entire song. I'm feelin the chorus a lot, scratches were killer. I thought the switchup in the beat was kind of cool, it threw me off a little at first because its almost like listening to two different songs in one. Your boy dj eps has some talent. LOL at the outro. Honestly i dont have anything negative to say so i'll just drop a couple of my favorite lines - it aint about the torture its who you're leaving the pliers with, Im thinkin bout the universe youre asking how the earth moves, whole dog barking up the tree bar. Impressive.
Was gonna enter this contest but didn't have the time to record and push it the way I'd want to...but good to see a bunch of others I know.
This first verse is smoooooooooooth...flow's dope, delivery's nice, lyrics are dope...dope verse. Just want the vocals to be higher...second verse is dope as well...same kinda vibe as the first. Third verse is dope too..."They say I'm ill as fuck but obviously I'm not contagious" line is filthy good...hook's nice too.
All I woulda done differently is the mix with the verses to get your vocals more prominent. Otherwise I really dug this, dude. Good luck with the contest. 1
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i like the beat...
ra is dope...
flow is fresh...
never want to resume is dope...
hieroglyph is dope...
i like how u flip the flow to fit the beat changes differently...
hook is aight... fits the scratching and shit well... the low levels on it fit well..
second verse...
universe line is dope as fuck...
halloween line is dope...
singing flow is a dope flip..
u no what it is dude... everything is on point with this... maybe the hook could be more complex but i think it fits perfectly..
third verse...
thumpa thumpa thumpa... dope
contagious.. dope
flow is a little choppy in spots on the the third but its still fresh...
the syllable count is a little off at points i think
but when the keys kick back in it gets back to spot on perfect
not that it wasnt on the other parts there was literally one line that i felt the syllables sounded a little off...
that is me super trying to find something wrong with the song...
dope.. u no it is...
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I like the beat! your flow is tight on this brotha. your bars are on point i really like this... your usually not my style, not hating I'm jus more mainstream.. but this i was vibin too the whole time g! 100 good shit
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