(CONTENDERS MATCH) Smog vs Packed Graves [PG Wins]

[Fresh]

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@Smog

@Packed Graves

Check ins due by Thursday, October 3rd 2014 11:59PM EST

Verses due Monday, October 7th 2014 11:59PM EST

10 - 16 lines.

ALL FL RULES APPLY

[Packed Graves]

Good luck, 12 lines.

[Smog]

12 good.. Same ta u, can't write really till Saturday night so chill a lil

[Packed Graves]

that battle with Alvin, honestly Smog you seemed nervous
the verse by Karp,it laid you out so quick he could've left the entire city refurnished
Smogs always on the road while his wife show her privates
soon as a nigga come in contact that bitch'll spread quicker than the Ebola Virus
you drive trucks for small checks, with that said I'd probably quit
transporting McDonalds food for a living- just helps me prove you dont deliver quality shit
you got a slut who plays game, I'm sorry yo- preference
but Yoshi really does crazy things with her tongue & that's no Mario reference
keep your longbars in their lane or be found on the shoulder dead
so when I say Smogs good for a stretch, I'm getting voters prepared for the road ahead
you choked in the finals & you just seemed scared of a scene
their tag name should've been Angels in the out field, how we seen miracle carry the team

[Smog]

Originally Posted by Letterman
You counting your LLL record?

Originally posted by packed graves
That gets counted? Fuck I wouldn't have halfed!!!!

Where we spit the lethal, pg got beat by a list of people...
He didn't drop half ass.....This fuckin faggot got down n did the eagle...
This isn't equal.. Imma beast n ur best barz r decent jabs..
If y'all want a fair fight..Go to the ticket booth n watch me beat his ass..
I'm still pissed about the tag match.. Takin it out on ur bitches dumb twat..
If revenge is the sweetest joy next ta pussy.....I'm gettin the best a both worlds in one shot..
Dolo U'll get ur chin cracked.. See Mir tweaked my barz takin away some impact..
I'm sayin, this might be played but ur the 1 who needed a fuckin miracle to win that..
That's my dawg tho, but when smog flows ur gettin knocked out easy par...
I mean @Lenox if u need help wit astronomy...ask graves now while he seein stars...
Handle these hits? Dawg ur frames to little to take my left hook..
Pg got such a small figure... Banks make his ass pay fa his check books.

Originally posted by packed graves
These niggas got points on smog vs I..lol

Time ta kill this^noise...watch graves split n claim it's ta build his coin..
Wack ass is so low teir as long as yodas here...its no prob to fill his void..

[Ryno]

Karp it, Mario reference, good for a stretch

Vs

Did the eagle

Didn't really likes smogs wording on some of those bars. Small figure could have been quoted but the execution was bad. I've hit PG taking it 3 to 1. Smog is good so I'm not gonna sugar coat it, I've seen him drop better.

[Greedy]

that battle with Alvin, honestly Smog you seemed nervous
the verse by Karp,it laid you out so quick he could've left the entire city refurnished
KARP' IT/CARPET IS TOO PLAYED FOR A CONTENDER MATCH. I USED A CARPET REFERENCE TO KARP YEARS AGO AND IT WAS PLAYED


Smogs always on the road while his wife show her privates
soon as a nigga come in contact that bitch'll spread quicker than the Ebola Virus
DAMN, EBOLA LINES ARE PLAYED OUT TOO, I'VE DONE ONE RECENTLY, PLUS I'VE SEEN TGEM TOO OFTEN


you drive trucks for small checks, with that said I'd probably quit
transporting McDonalds food for a living- just helps me prove you dont deliver quality shit
THIS WAS FRESH, CONCEPT WISE, BUT COMES OFF WEAK


you got a slut who plays game, I'm sorry yo- preference
but Yoshi really does crazy things with her tongue & that's no Mario reference
YOSHI/YO SHE TOUNGE LINES ARE PLAYED TOO. THE PUNCH CAME ACROSS GIOD TGE WAY U WORDED IT, BUT TGE SET UP WAS WEAK

keep your longbars in their lane or be found on the shoulder dead
so when I say Smogs good for a stretch, I'm getting voters prepared for the road ahead
THIS WAS OK


you choked in the finals & you just seemed scared of a scene
their tag name should've been Angels in the out field, how we seen miracle carry the team
ANGELS IN THE OUTFIELD? CMON MAN.


VS
Where we spit the lethal, pg got beat by a list of people...
He didn't drop half ass.....This fuckin faggot got down n did the eagle...
I LIKED THIS ONE

This isn't equal.. Imma beast n ur best barz r decent jabs..
If y'all want a fair fight..Go to the ticket booth n watch me beat his ass..
THIS WAS KINDA WEAK

I'm still pissed about the tag match.. Takin it out on ur bitches dumb twat..
If revenge is the sweetest joy next ta pussy.....I'm gettin the best a both worlds in one shot..
I LIKED THIS, WORDING COULDA BEEN CLEANER, BUT I LIKED IT

Dolo U'll get ur chin cracked.. See Mir tweaked my barz takin away some impact..
I'm sayin, this might be played but ur the 1 who needed a fuckin miracle to win that..
LOL, UR RIGHT..'NEED A MIRACLE' IS PLAYED, BUT THIS WASN'T TOO TOO BAD

That's my dawg tho, but when smog flows ur gettin knocked out easy par...
I mean @Lenox if u need help wit astronomy...ask graves now while he seein stars...
NAH...SEE WHAT U DID WITH THE LENOX FLIP, BUT NOT FEELING THIS ONE

Handle these hits? Dawg ur frames to little to take my left hook
.. Pg got such a small figure... Banks make his ass pay fa his check books.
THIS WAS OK, LIGHT THO

[/QUOTE]Originally posted by packed graves These niggas got points on smog vs I..lol[/QUOTE]

Time ta kill this^noise...watch graves split n claim it's ta build his coin.. Wack ass is so low teir as long as yodas here...its no prob to fill his void..
WEAK



ok, so I got smog taking this.
Packed came waaaaaay too played, and I never call shit played, because Idk what's played. But I literally seen, and used damn near every bar packed used before. Smog had some misses, but enough to win this, as pg came way too played for a CONTENDER match

Vote: smog

[Fresh]

that battle with Alvin, honestly Smog you seemed nervous
the verse by Karp,it laid you out so quick he could've left the entire city refurnished
althobit might be played I thought this was nicely executed w/ a fresh flip..
Smogs always on the road while his wife show her privates
soon as a nigga come in contact that bitch'll spread quicker than the Ebola Virus
the personal aspect helped here. Ok.
you drive trucks for small checks, with that said I'd probably quit
transporting McDonalds food for a living- just helps me prove you dont deliver quality shit
not feelin this..
you got a slut who plays game, I'm sorry yo- preference
but Yoshi really does crazy things with her tongue & that's no Mario reference
I thought this was ok
keep your longbars in their lane or be found on the shoulder dead
so when I say Smogs good for a stretch, I'm getting voters prepared for the road ahead
nahh
you choked in the finals & you just seemed scared of a scene
their tag name should've been Angels in the out field, how we seen miracle carry the team
yeah this was ok.

Vs

You counting your LLL record?[/QUOTE]
[/QUOTE]Originally posted by packed graves
That gets counted? Fuck I wouldn't have halfed!!!![/QUOTE]


Where we spit the lethal, pg got beat by a list of people...
He didn't drop half ass.....This fuckin faggot got down n did the eagle...
cool.
This isn't equal.. Imma beast n ur best barz r decent jabs..
If y'all want a fair fight..Go to the ticket booth n watch me beat his ass..
nah.
I'm still pissed about the tag match.. Takin it out on ur bitches dumb twat..
If revenge is the sweetest joy next ta pussy.....I'm gettin the best a both worlds in one shot..
cool.
Dolo U'll get ur chin cracked.. See Mir tweaked my barz takin away some impact..
I'm sayin, this might be played but ur the 1 who needed a fuckin miracle to win that..
nah.
That's my dawg tho, but when smog flows ur gettin knocked out easy par...
I mean @Lenox if u need help wit astronomy...ask graves now while he seein stars...
I liked this..
Handle these hits? Dawg ur frames to little to take my left hook..
Pg got such a small figure... Banks make his ass pay fa his check books.
nah played n this wasn't a fresh flip imo...
Time ta kill this^noise...watch graves split n claim it's ta build his coin..
Wack ass is so low teir as long as yodas here...its no prob to fill his void..
nah...

well this is close, decent battle here. I've got pg edgin this out barely with 1 more quotable. Good shit boys but I've gotta go w / pg.

v/PG

[Wordz AhGod.]

you drive trucks for small checks, with that said I'd probably quit
transporting McDonalds food for a living- just helps me prove you dont deliver quality shit
felt overly stretched, concept was cool
you choked in the finals & you just seemed scared of a scene
their tag name should've been Angels in the out field, how we seen miracle carry the team

vs

Where we spit the lethal, pg got beat by a list of people...
He didn't drop half ass.....This fuckin faggot got down n did the eagle...


Smogs opener was LOTB but his wording and execution killed the rest of his verse. PG had shitty stretched wording too but had two decent hits. Honestly if smog had one more dope hit, he would have been able to take this.

v/PG

[Unfukwitable]

that battle with Alvin, honestly Smog you seemed nervous
the verse by Karp,it laid you out so quick he could've left the entire city refurnished
you drive trucks for small checks, with that said I'd probably quit
transporting McDonalds food for a living- just helps me prove you dont deliver quality shit
you choked in the finals & you just seemed scared of a scene
their tag name should've been Angels in the out field, how we seen miracle carry the team

vs

Where we spit the lethal, pg got beat by a list of people...
He didn't drop half ass.....This fuckin faggot got down n did the eagle...
I'm still pissed about the tag match.. Takin it out on ur bitches dumb twat..
If revenge is the sweetest joy next ta pussy.....I'm gettin the best a both worlds in one shot..
That's my dawg tho, but when smog flows ur gettin knocked out easy par...
I mean Lenox if u need help wit astronomy...ask graves now while he seein stars..


Both had nice bars I feel one had some ideas that he shouldve scrapped and the other had some lines that was almost there but he didn't tweak it up enough.. PG that Yoshi bar was good I think a doper set up wouldve made it top notch and Smog that small figure concept was dope but You shouldve executed it to the max of your abilities.

v/PG

he edged with in my opinion he had slightly better quotes and better misses IMO.

[Smog]

Word up graves.. Good shit.. Y'all could close this...ill be back

[Wordz AhGod.]

CLOSED

PG wins 4 - 1.