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Thread: letterman vs shafi [Letterman wins 5-0]

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    letterman vs shafi [Letterman wins 5-0]

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    Re: letterman vs shafi

    Kill a bitch and kill her kid
    all depends what her nigga did
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    Re: letterman vs shafi

    Tomorrow midnight, just in case

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    Re: letterman vs shafi

    If u ask me? ur trash B. U got bodied in ya last three, son
    Fuck a reality check, they're adding a stimulus package to ur tax refund
    This spells the end of his boss status position. His bitch ass can go free
    The way I throw out letters, I'll be a dead ringer at the National Bee
    You'll be out cold, literally, when I bash, beat n clobber you
    Cuz when I punch ur fuckin lights out, they'll shut off ur gas, heat and water too
    If u don't wanna die young, a nigga better hide from this rifle when it shoots
    Or they'll find ya corpse with more holes in it than ur recycling excuse
    No surprise he'll cry himself to sleep, we knew this guy was gay for years
    Shoulda thrown in the towel, Let. Now u need a travel-size pack to wipe away ur tears
    Kill a bitch and kill her kid
    all depends what her nigga did
    -herbo

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    Re: letterman vs shafi

    Shafi aka ill clinton

    Still nursing those wounds from Wordz, now this Arab's dead
    But Isis not gonna be able to help, when I chop off this faggot's head
    Yeah we're cool & there's a chance that you'll win, hardly
    Nobody's thinking ill will...but after this you'll have a lot towards me
    Chicks welcome me in their homes but sidestep your bullshit
    Cuz soon as you step on the matador gets slammed in your face quick
    You'll be widely recognized after this. I swing with the purest fashion
    & The punches I landmark your face so much, it'll become a tourist attraction
    Your girl has the filthiest cunt. Bet it's a resident to infection
    We see that bush with so much gore...it could rival the 2000 presidential election

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    Re: letterman vs shafi

    Open for votes @Fresh @Wordz AhGod.

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    Re: letterman vs shafi [OPEN FOR VOTES]

    If u ask me? ur trash B. U got bodied in ya last three, son
    Fuck a reality check, they're adding a stimulus package to ur tax refund
    Kinda cool

    This spells the end of his boss status position. His bitch ass can go free
    The way I throw out letters, I'll be a dead ringer at the National Bee
    Iight

    You'll be out cold, literally, when I bash, beat n clobber you
    Cuz when I punch ur fuckin lights out, they'll shut off ur gas, heat and water too
    Cool

    If u don't wanna die young, a nigga better hide from this rifle when it shoots
    Or they'll find ya corpse with more holes in it than ur recycling excuse
    Lol, dig this

    No surprise he'll cry himself to sleep, we knew this guy was gay for years
    Shoulda thrown in the towel, Let. Now u need a travel-size pack to wipe away ur tears
    Cool.. Thinks its played on him tho...


    Vs..

    Shafi aka ill clinton

    Still nursing those wounds from Wordz, now this Arab's dead
    But Isis not gonna be able to help, when I chop off this faggot's head
    Iight

    Yeah we're cool & there's a chance that you'll win, hardly
    Nobody's thinking ill will...but after this you'll have a lot towards me
    This pretty cool... The will shit prolly real played tho, seen a couple


    Chicks welcome me in their homes but sidestep your bullshit
    Cuz soon as you step on the matador gets slammed in your face quick
    This tied together real well.. Nice bar

    You'll be widely recognized after this. I swing with the purest fashion
    & The punches I landmark your face so much, it'll become a tourist attraction
    Lol, cool

    Your girl has the filthiest cunt. Bet it's a resident to infection
    We see that bush with so much gore...it could rival the 2000 presidential election
    Lol, cool


    Iight I feel y'all both came nice pretty even on quotes n personals, the recycle bar was nice but I feel let just had the stronger hits IMO... If Shafi woulda had one mo solid hit i woulda went him but IMO got let edging this.. Matador bar was dope... Good read fellas...


    Vote let

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    Re: letterman vs shafi [OPEN FOR VOTES]

    Shaf you came with lots of played metaphors which really hindered the connection of your punches, the corpse line was decent nothing crazy, then finished with a played closer. Feel like you don't really think all your bars through before posting. You have the idea but need to stay away from the played material.

    Vs

    Lett had the matador punch which I've seen numerous times, the landmark was pretty played as well, then you finished with a gore bush punch, I honestly felt like this was a played punch concept battle your verse was played all over the place, but played is better then missing. Your wording helps you out tremendously because it allows the bars to continue smoothly even if the punch isn't as strong.


    This was close battle nothing great on either side, letterman was just a tad smoother when reading.
    1x Best Overall Textcee(tie)
    1x FL Best Text Battler

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    Re: letterman vs shafi

    Quote Originally Posted by Letterman View Post
    Shafi aka ill clinton

    Still nursing those wounds from Wordz, now this Arab's dead
    But Isis not gonna be able to help, when I chop off this faggot's head
    -ok hit
    Yeah we're cool & there's a chance that you'll win, hardly
    Nobody's thinking ill will...but after this you'll have a lot towards me
    - ehh didnt like
    Chicks welcome me in their homes but sidestep your bullshit
    Cuz soon as you step on the matador gets slammed in your face quick
    - alright
    You'll be widely recognized after this. I swing with the purest fashion
    & The punches I landmark your face so much, it'll become a tourist attraction
    - played.. seen it dont alot
    Your girl has the filthiest cunt. Bet it's a resident to infection
    We see that bush with so much gore...it could rival the 2000 presidential election
    - iight
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    Quote Originally Posted by shafi View Post
    If u ask me? ur trash B. U got bodied in ya last three, son
    Fuck a reality check, they're adding a stimulus package to ur tax refund
    - mild flip on a kinda weak concept.. ok at best
    This spells the end of his boss status position. His bitch ass can go free
    The way I throw out letters, I'll be a dead ringer at the National Bee
    - ok, wasnt to good..
    You'll be out cold, literally, when I bash, beat n clobber you
    Cuz when I punch ur fuckin lights out, they'll shut off ur gas, heat and water too
    - ive done something like this in the past.. this was still cool tho
    If u don't wanna die young, a nigga better hide from this rifle when it shoots
    Or they'll find ya corpse with more holes in it than ur recycling excuse
    - wasnt feeling
    No surprise he'll cry himself to sleep, we knew this guy was gay for years
    Shoulda thrown in the towel, Let. Now u need a travel-size pack to wipe away ur tears
    - little choppy but cool hit
    first off i did not no shafi was ill clinton.. boy do u need to shake the rust, i remember u being alot better no hate lol anyways..
    i thought letter came slightly better, a better hit from either side would have got the win. close match but vote; letterman

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    Re: letterman vs shafi [OPEN FOR VOTES]

    Up.

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    Re: letterman vs shafi [OPEN FOR VOTES]

    If u ask me? ur trash B. U got bodied in ya last three, son
    Fuck a reality check, they're adding a stimulus package to ur tax refund
    ok
    This spells the end of his boss status position. His bitch ass can go free
    The way I throw out letters, I'll be a dead ringer at the National Bee
    decent
    You'll be out cold, literally, when I bash, beat n clobber you
    Cuz when I punch ur fuckin lights out, they'll shut off ur gas, heat and water too
    cool
    If u don't wanna die young, a nigga better hide from this rifle when it shoots
    Or they'll find ya corpse with more holes in it than ur recycling excuse
    cool personal
    No surprise he'll cry himself to sleep, we knew this guy was gay for years
    Shoulda thrown in the towel, Let. Now u need a travel-size pack to wipe away ur tears
    ok closer

    vs.

    Still nursing those wounds from Wordz, now this Arab's dead
    But Isis not gonna be able to help, when I chop off this faggot's head
    nah
    Yeah we're cool & there's a chance that you'll win, hardly
    Nobody's thinking ill will...but after this you'll have a lot towards me
    lol cool
    Chicks welcome me in their homes but sidestep your bullshit
    Cuz soon as you step on the matador gets slammed in your face quick
    good
    You'll be widely recognized after this. I swing with the purest fashion
    & The punches I landmark your face so much, it'll become a tourist attraction
    been done
    Your girl has the filthiest cunt. Bet it's a resident to infection
    We see that bush with so much gore...it could rival the 2000 presidential election
    cool closer

    You'll be out cold, literally, when I bash, beat n clobber you
    Cuz when I punch ur fuckin lights out, they'll shut off ur gas, heat and water too
    If u don't wanna die young, a nigga better hide from this rifle when it shoots
    Or they'll find ya corpse with more holes in it than ur recycling excuse

    vs.

    Yeah we're cool & there's a chance that you'll win, hardly
    Nobody's thinking ill will...but after this you'll have a lot towards me
    Chicks welcome me in their homes but sidestep your bullshit
    Cuz soon as you step on the matador gets slammed in your face quick
    Your girl has the filthiest cunt. Bet it's a resident to infection
    We see that bush with so much gore...it could rival the 2000 presidential election

    decent battle both had some hits and misses. i got letter takin this barely. he had one more quoteable n was a lil more consistant. good battle.

    vote - letterman.
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    Re: letterman vs shafi [OPEN FOR VOTES]

    Letter got this one, ice is Isis was weird for me because when you pronounces Isis you don't put much emphasis on the first s but you do on the second, however after a couple of re reads it worked out. The way the ill will punch was worded thought it was gonna be about the rapper but it wasn't and was cool landmark wordplay was a big no no bush and gore is a little old lol shit was like 3 terms ago and the other two bars I didn't mention were meh shafi I thought your lights out and more wholes than your recycling excuse were solid and the rest meh, this came down to two quotes and I enjoyed letters more. No hate vote letterman

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    Re: letterman vs shafi [OPEN FOR VOTES]

    @Fresh 5-0 close

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