Jus Ra (The Fraternity) - Bray Wyatt - Don't funk up our beats

[ILLunatic]

This is a local artist from Flint, Michigan. Wanted to see your guys opinions.

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[Oxymoron]

I thought this was pretty tight.

Flow was cool, lyrics were cool. Nothing really bad about it. Beat kinda reminds me of dr. dre a little after the 2k era.

Ima listen to it again.

[Pair-A-Dyce]

To me he sounds like a battle rapper turned track maker. I tend to stray away from tracks where I can tell the sole purpose is to just impress with lyrics as lyrics don't impress me as much as crafting an interesting composition with different elements and layers and styles. Bars after bars are cool but I like when I hear them delivered in a unique style.

That said, there's nothing wrong with the track tbh. The beat does sound like some early Eminem type production where he would just put a bunch of bars on it so I'm gathering that was the original intent. It's a cool piece that would probably catch the attention of lyric gobblers but I would say he needs a little more charisma though I'm not sure how he would execute it, just something I gathered from hearing this about 4x now.
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[Emily]

Poetically, nice lyrics, nice delivery of lyrics, nice flow and pace. All good.
Musically, I want a twist or turn or change of direction, a bomb, something, just to bust up
the mundane and predictable nature of the piece.
Nice talent though.
Just needs a Molotov for spark.


Edit:

I think I got it. I think I need a chorus. lol
More song, less essay.
50-55 was great. loved that touch.
I think it's more about this feeling like a rant with music to me.
I'm really impressed with the way he spat it, its full on.
The guy's great. I don't hear him breathe. He's got it, and it's great writing no doubt.
I like what I'm hearing, but I feel like I want to go to a catchy hook. Something. A chorus.
Something familiar, to let me chill, from talented words, if you know what I mean, it can be
hard work trying to keep up with the words lol.
This guys great though. A natural.

[Cody Nash]

I believe he's actually posted this track here before. Jus is dope... he's part of The Fraternity with Dope Antelope, Kue the Vandal, Sleep, Cocaine Chris, Loose Logic, Sleeps (Xavier), and a few others. A lot of those dudes have posted here before actually.

This was a dope entry though. He did really good in the competition if I remember right, too. Placed in the top 10. He's always got some dope bars and this track was no different. Definitely got that battle rap vibe to him. I like this one.