10 lines
Due Friday
@Fresh
Letterman
Fresh
10 lines
Due Friday
@Fresh
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@Letterman I'm ready to drop when you are
You think your style stands out, but you’re not dope or even near
And you’re so self-absorbed… it’s only a matter of days before you totally disappear
Time is not on your side, I’ll off you quick so you recognize it’s on mine
n’ If I’m going back four seconds, it’s cos I can dispose of you in that measure of time
We’re on different wave lengths, in fact ur on the seashore just rotting
You ain’t getting this dub, let… Unless u forge a carbon copy of the ether I’m droppin
I disintegrate bitches with intricate wisdom, I’ll be thumpin this kid
Ur not integrate punches… n that’s why you’ll never mesh w/ someone who is
The way you reuse n abuse wack concepts is nothing to be worshipped
So if we ever let this horrendous, s’cos we died after reading one of ya shitty verses
Bad chicks beg me to smash em, they trashy ones say you can hit
If a chick opened her legs & wanted freshener...that pussy was obviously rancid
If we talk about your talent, that convo will start & end quick
But I don't think we can undervalue your skill...cuz it was never valued to begin with
Fresh one of the best? That claim is see through
It's obvious your tier gassed...and your verses are so bad they should be too
We don't want you in the U.S. so the line that divides us, don't pass it
But if fresh ever crossed the border to interstates, we just hope he gets hit by the traffic
Should change your ways but you'll still be gay & emotional tomorrow, bitch
If we ever see your new persona, faggot you're just letting your boyfriend borrow it
I feel that Letterman took this with more witty word/name play. Fresh just didn't seem to attack his opponent enough. There was really no clever punches aimed directly at Letterman. But on the other hand, LM opened up with a real solid opener. The fresh in here/freshener line was nice, ans so was the "enter states/interstates bar. LM just proved to be the more polished rapper here all the way around. This is just my feedback as I don't have enough points to vote.
^Sorry, it was supposed to say fresh in "her", not "here".
Fresh- I liked the concept in the first two bars but your rhyme scheme hinders the connection, dub let couldve been decent but again was executed poorly, integrate was dope & LOTB in my eyes, then you ended pretty decent. You didn't have any real misses but your rhyme scheme was coming off a little forced taking away impact & connection of the punch.
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Lett- freshener was decent was crazy about it cuz it does come off a little forced, undervalue was choppy & simple, I personally liked the tier gas line even though the wordplay is hella used it was almost LOTB, but then you started to fall off again with standard punches that could be aimed at any one your facing. Not to mention the traffic shit comes off so played & weak. You have been around for a long enough time to have seen all these bars & should know when to stop.
Vote- fresh for better concepts, better direction & less played material.
You think your style stands out, but you’re not dope or even near
And you’re so self-absorbed… it’s only a matter of days before you totally disappear
Minus the totally n this decent.. Lol
Time is not on your side, I’ll off you quick so you recognize it’s on mine
n’ If I’m going back four seconds, it’s cos I can dispose of you in that measure of time
Iight, off a tad bit wit execution IMO, but still iight..
We’re on different wave lengths, in fact ur on the seashore just rotting
You ain’t getting this dub, let… Unless u forge a carbon copy of the ether I’m droppin
Fresh wp, I fuck wit it
I disintegrate bitches with intricate wisdom, I’ll be thumpin this kid
Ur not integrate punches… n that’s why you’ll never mesh w/ someone who is
This was smooth, scheme was dope too.
The way you reuse n abuse wack concepts is nothing to be worshipped
So if we ever let this horrendous, s’cos we died after reading one of ya shitty verses
Pretty solid...
Vs...
Bad chicks beg me to smash em, they trashy ones say you can hit
If a chick opened her legs & wanted freshener...that pussy was obviously rancid
Freshened is played like fuck on him.. Seen it numerous times in my shirt time here
If we talk about your talent, that convo will start & end quick
But I don't think we can undervalue your skill...cuz it was never valued to begin with
Iight
Fresh one of the best? That claim is see through
It's obvious your tier gassed...and your verses are so bad they should be too
Seen this play too, this iight tho
We don't want you in the U.S. so the line that divides us, don't pass it
But if fresh ever crossed the border to interstates, we just hope he gets hit by the traffic
Ok not to harsh tho
Should change your ways but you'll still be gay & emotional tomorrow, bitch
If we ever see your new persona, faggot you're just letting your boyfriend borrow it
Cool...
Not too bad, fresh had a pretty good verse here IMO no real bad misses just a lil execution probs on a couple but pretty solid verse.. Let was smooth on his delivery but had a couple played bars especially the fresh in her, purse on a faggot was cool but based on a consistent verse I hit fresh takin this...
Vote fresh...
Fresh-
You think your style stands out, but you’re not dope or even near
And you’re so self-absorbed… it’s only a matter of days before you totally disappear
...cool...
Time is not on your side, I’ll off you quick so you recognize it’s on mine
n’ If I’m going back four seconds, it’s cos I can dispose of you in that measure of time
...nice...
We’re on different wave lengths, in fact ur on the seashore just rotting
You ain’t getting this dub, let… Unless u forge a carbon copy of the ether I’m droppin
...not bad...
I disintegrate bitches with intricate wisdom, I’ll be thumpin this kid
Ur not integrate punches… n that’s why you’ll never mesh w/ someone who is
...like it...
The way you reuse n abuse wack concepts is nothing to be worshipped
So if we ever let this horrendous, s’cos we died after reading one of ya shitty verses
...nah...
vs.
letter-
Bad chicks beg me to smash em, they trashy ones say you can hit
If a chick opened her legs & wanted freshener...that pussy was obviously rancid
...lol cool...
If we talk about your talent, that convo will start & end quick
But I don't think we can undervalue your skill...cuz it was never valued to begin with
...nice...
Fresh one of the best? That claim is see through
It's obvious your tier gassed...and your verses are so bad they should be too
...ok ok...
We don't want you in the U.S. so the line that divides us, don't pass it
But if fresh ever crossed the border to interstates, we just hope he gets hit by the traffic
...good start, not feeling th punch...
Should change your ways but you'll still be gay & emotional tomorrow, bitch
If we ever see your new persona, faggot you're just letting your boyfriend borrow it
....meh...
alright this was a cool battle. overall very close. i'd have to go with fresh though for coming just a little bit more consistent and creative. both were good though with good punches.
v/fresh
Self absorbed, dub let, integrate
Vs
Freshener (mine was better though lol), tier gassed (played but the flip was cool)
Letterman fell off at the end of his verse IMO n I liked Fresh's concepts overall a bit more. Decent read.
V/Fresh
Freshened was played, interstates was forced all tier punches are played out tbh. Bunch of generic punches nothing personal no mention about how he dqed you no mention of the beef you guys have just a soft verse. No haymakers. Fresh your two first punches I didn't like doublet was cool integrate wp was choppy but it was worded well with the set up and execution around it and horrendous was cool. I got fresh here w/ the upset
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